Hum to karwa.n the

by CHARVI_BOHARA on January 06, 2009, 09:18:32 PM
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ummid karti hu ki aap sab ka sath milega.....

Kuchh anjane se Cheharo me,
apno Si aawaz khojne lage,
Hum to karwa.n the Magr phir bhi,
kadmo.n Ke nisha.n khojne lage

Udane se wakif the Magr phir bhi,
parindo ke Paro par thamne ki Koshish karne lage
Hum to hawa the magar phir bhi,
Daman me kaid rahne Ki nakam koshish Karne lage

Chamak hum me bhi thi Magar sitaro.n se,
roshani Ki fariyad karne lage
Hum to aaftaab the magar phir bhi,
Dusaro ko jalane ki lou Se bewazah fariyad karne lage

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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 10:01:05 PM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Charvi jee behtareen kalam pesh kiya hain aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 10:09:44 PM »
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bahoot khoob Charvi, apka yoindia main sawagat hai!!

yah kavita samjh na ayye to last two lines araam se padna... asha hai jis arth main likhi hai wo arth samjh aa jayega!!

Mere karwa.n main the ek tum
tere jaane ke baad tanha hum rah gaye

Gujre bahoot karwa.n tere baad
per hum wahin kharre rah gaye

dekha tera karwa.n aor muskura diye
kuch ansoo the thume se, jo mere ander he rah gaye
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 10:13:23 PM »
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@Charvi
Very NIce Applause

Welcome to yoindia !

@Pooja
Marvellous ! Excellent Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 10:35:53 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Charvi ji..bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai apane.. Applause Applause Applause

pooja, aapka kya kehna...bahut khoob  Applause Applause

Hum to Karvaan the magar phir bhi,
Kadmo ke nishaan khojne lage,
In Raahon par Chalte-Chalte,
kahin tujhse Phir Rubaroo na ho jaau,
apne Hi jazbaaton ko dil mein Dabochne lage...

Tu salaamat rahe,yehi Dua hai meri,
teri khushi ke liye,
khud ko Dard ke samundar mein Duubone Lage...

Anjaam ishq ka isse bura aur kya hoga "KHWAISH"
nas-nas mein Mere Tu hai shaamil,
aur tere paas aane se,
Khud ko hi Hum aaj rokne lage....


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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 10:43:04 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob Khwaish ji and shukaria!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 10:58:55 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob Khwaish ji and shukaria!!

Thanks a lot Pooja...
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 11:49:18 PM »
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bahoot khoob Charvi, apka yoindia main sawagat hai!!

yah kavita samjh na ayye to last two lines araam se padna... asha hai jis arth main likhi hai wo arth samjh aa jayega!!

Mere karwa.n main the ek tum
tere jaane ke baad tanha hum rah gaye

Gujre bahoot karwa.n tere baad
per hum wahin kharre rah gaye

dekha tera karwa.n aor muskura diye
kuch ansoo the thume se, jo mere ander he rah gaye


Tu mere nahi TERE karwa.n me hum the
Zimmedari teri thi q juda hum ho gaye

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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 11:52:21 PM »
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Tu mere nahi TERE karwa.n me hum the
Zimmedari teri thi q juda hum ho gaye

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Na ayya samjh pooja ke, yah ghayal ji kaya kah gaye
aor kuch hua na hua, samjhne ki jimmedaari de gaye  DOH DOH
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 11:55:40 PM »
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Ghayel ka alif bhi agar samaj me aa jaye
Mera dawa hain tu ek behtareen shayra ban jaye
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2009, 12:00:28 AM »
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Ghayal ke alif samjhne ko ghayal ki zindagi kaise samjh jaau
na ayye samjh maine apne he alif, ghayal ke kaise samjh jaau
Tukbandio main he khushh Pooja, shayra kaise ban jaau
Ghayal ki shayri samjh sake jo, aisa hunar kaise pa jaau
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2009, 12:06:08 AM »
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Shayra na ban sach_chi qadardaan to ban
Ek achche shauk ki pehcahn to ban
Main bada banu yeh mera maqsad nahi nadaan
Tu apne aap me khud ek pehchan to ban

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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2009, 12:11:33 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob SG ji...

Na pehchan chahiye, na naam chahiye
Pooja ko to bas wo nain (Ankhein) chahiye
Dekhein mujhe aor bas dekhte he rahe
Jis ke sath ho khatam karwa.n, wo chain chahiye
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2009, 12:22:53 AM »
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Q pagli tu ghayel ko aazmati hain
Main aag hu q muje hath lagati hain
Jo kehne lagu main apni tu bezubaan ho jayegi
Chod rehne de maine mana tuje shayri aati hain

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«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2009, 12:27:37 AM »
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Pagli hu, pagli ki aazmasih kaya
agg main sona hua kundan, warna garmasih kaya
kahe kuch tu waha, sunu kuch main yaha
dil per na de jo dastak, us kalam ki syahi kaya
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