Ijazat ho tou...

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Ek baat kehti hu gar ijazat ho tou,
use jaa kar keh do gar kisi se mhbt ho tou,

khuda bhi tumhara sath dega yakin se kehti hu,
gar sachi tumhari ibadat ho tou,

mhbt k us raste se laut aana hi behtar hoga,
gar raho mein uske bagawat ho tou,

usi shakhs ko saupna apne khuabo ka daromdar..
gar ankho mein uski sajawat ho tou...... icon_thumleft
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2010, 12:21:18 PM »
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Badi pyari creation hai BBL ji. Wah Wah
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2010, 03:15:31 PM »
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Nice Creation Geet Ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2010, 10:30:04 PM »
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thnx alot riyaz ji,kaash ji , rishi ji...

kaash ji ashaaro k alfazo ko talash kar laiye,
aur apne alfazo se hamari mehfil ko sajaiye......
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 12:11:08 AM »
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Geet-di tere geeton pe qurbaan hai hum tou...kya khoob likhti ho..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ijazat dene k pehle he kehdi tumne apni baat
Sunkar hamne bhi kehdi unko apne pyaar ki baat

Jaane kya maine kahe, jaane kya usne samjhi
Aankhein chaar hui,Baat kuchh bann he gayee,




Ek baat kehti hu gar ijazat ho tou,
use jaa kar keh do gar kisi se mhbt ho tou,

khuda bhi tumhara sath dega yakin se kehti hu,
gar sachi tumhari ibadat ho tou,

mhbt k us raste se laut aana hi behtar hoga,
gar raho mein uske bagawat ho tou,

usi shakhs ko saupna apne khuabo ka daromdar..
gar ankho mein uski sajawat ho tou...... icon_thumleft

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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2010, 01:52:46 AM »
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thnx koyaliya...

Bante bante baat ban jaye yahi armaan hai,
us shakhs mein basi terri di ki jaan hai...
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2010, 07:39:54 PM »
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Badi CHHUPI-RUSTAM ho Geet-di..... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!

Ijaazat ho tou puchhu kaun hai wo shakhs
Jis mai basi hai jaan terri o meri sakhee

Bante bante baat ban he jaayegi pyari sakhee
Honge pure tere sab armaan,mujhse le tu jaan

Ho gayee hai unse teri ab kitni gehri pehchhan
Kuchh hame bhi tou batta,hum hai bilkul anjaan

Ijaazat ho tou puchhu kaun hai wo insaan
Jis mai basi hai o meri sakhee teri jaan

thnx koyaliya...

Bante bante baat ban jaye yahi armaan hai,
us shakhs mein basi terri di ki jaan hai...
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2010, 06:33:41 PM »
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waah kaash ji aur koyal kya baat hai...Applause Applause

Jis shakhs mein basi hai merri jaan,
vo abhi hai merre ehsaso se anjaan,
keh nhi paati use ek lafz bhi main..
isliye karti hu apne jazbato ko shayri mein bayan......
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2010, 12:14:40 AM »
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Thanks Geet-di...... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Ijazat hai tujhe poori-poori meri pyari sakhee
Karti reh tu shayri mein ujaagar apne mann k bhav

Wo tere mann k bahoot kareeb hokar bhi chahe hai tujh se abhi tak anjaan
Dil se tere jo niklengi prem ki lehre, Pahunchengi ous tak ye le tu jaan



waah kaash ji aur koyal kya baat hai...Applause Applause

Jis shakhs mein basi hai merri jaan,
vo abhi hai merre ehsaso se anjaan,
keh nhi paati use ek lafz bhi main..
isliye karti hu apne jazbato ko shayri mein bayan......
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2010, 12:23:28 AM »
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Wow too good Geet ji.Koyal ji,Kaash ji.mindblowing creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2010, 12:33:17 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu-di.....

Wow too good Geet ji.Koyal ji,Kaash ji.mindblowing creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2010, 01:16:01 AM »
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thnx madhu ji..koyaliya bahut hi acha likha hai tune..terre alfaz merri jazbato ko aur bhi bhadha dete hai to gud keep it up...

Merre dil se nikli har aah uske sadke mein hai,
merri dil ki har dua uske sajde mein hai,
vo karta hai ibadat apne khuda ki har roz..
merri bhi pooja ab se uske hisse mein hai......
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2010, 06:09:52 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Geet, Koyal and Kaash ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2010, 06:32:15 PM »
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Thanks a lot Geet-di.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


thnx madhu ji..koyaliya bahut hi acha likha hai tune..terre alfaz merri jazbato ko aur bhi bhadha dete hai to gud keep it up...

Merre dil se nikli har aah uske sadke mein hai,
merri dil ki har dua uske sajde mein hai,
vo karta hai ibadat apne khuda ki har roz..
merri bhi pooja ab se uske hisse mein hai......
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2010, 06:33:15 PM »
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Aabhaar aapka Divya-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Geet, Koyal and Kaash ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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