-Insaan (A Common Man)- :Miscellaneous Shayri

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Just a try to express the thoughts of an indian common man.

Aaj jab mein ghar se bahar kadam
Rakhta hoon to zehn mein yhi khayal
Aata hai ke kya yeh mera akhiri din to nai
Khi in daishatgardo ki goli mera
Seena to nai dund rhi, khi aaj mein apne
Dusre bhaiyo ki trah in khoon ke pyaaso
Ka shikar to nai ban jaunga.

Haan mein apni maa ki ankhoon mein
Woh khauf dekhta hoon jab woh mujhe
Subho ghar se kaam pe jata dekhti hai. Kahuf
Yhi ke kay mera baccha aaj ghar laut payega?
Jubaan se kucch nai kehti magar mein uski
Ankhon mein sab pad leta hoon. Raat din woh meri
Salaamati ki dua mangti hai. Kabhi who mujhe tabij
Bandati hai to kabhi mere mathe par tika lagati hai.

Haan mein ghar se bahar sehma sehma sa dra dra
Sa rehta hoon. Haan mein ab railgadi mein chadne
Se darta hoon. Yhi khayal aata hai ke khi maut
Ke soudagharo ne yha mout ka samaan na rakha ho.
Aur yhi dar mein aas paas ke logo mein dekhta hoon.

Kabhi kabhi to zehn mein yeh khayal aata hai ke kya
Mein apne hi desh mein rehta hoon? Woh desh
Jo aaj chand sitaro pe jane ki baatien karta
Hai, aamaan ko chune ki batien karta hai, jo tarekiyo
Ki sidi par chad kar chand tod lane ki baatien karta hai,

iss dar ke saye mein jeene se ukta chuka hoon. Aao chalo
aaj yeh thaan le ke hum in khooni darindo ko mita denge. Mita
denge unka naam-o-nishaan iss duniya se.
Khatam kar denge dar ke saye ko aur phir koi
Maa apna baccha ghar se bahar jata dekh ghabrayegi nahi.

Haan, jab mein ghar se bahar kadam
Rakhta hoon to zehn mein yhi khayal aata hai !!

HumTum


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Rajbir

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 09:40:32 AM »

HumTum bro,

Very true picture depicted by you of A Common Man Applause

Nice to see you back Winking


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Azeem Azaad

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 10:13:18 AM »

Sachchi Kaha Hum Tum Bhai Tumne,.
Aksar Abhi Aisa Hi Har Shaks Sochkar Ghar Se Nikalta Hai,.

Magar Mere Bhai, Ye Bhi Ek Siyasat Hai, Rajniti Ki,.
Bas Hum Is Ek Achcha Leader Ko Chunn Kar Hi Khatam Kar Sakte Hain,.


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diya786

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 10:30:39 AM »

Too good HumTum
it's truely true Applause


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 11:38:41 AM »

Ek Mazboot peshkash Hum Tum


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cara

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 11:53:50 AM »

bahut hi sahi likha hai aapne--hum tum ji......

bahut hi khauf raheta hai, gharwalon ke dil mein,,
kahin kuj ho na jaaye ,apne gijron ko raah mein.


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 01:41:04 PM »

Dareecho tak chale aaye, tumhare daur ke khatre
Hum apne ghar se baher jhakne ka haq bhi kho bhaithe

-Wasim Barelvi-


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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 02:11:08 PM »

Bahut sahi likha hai... second para toh bahut bahut sahi haalat pesh kiye hai aapne Hum_Tum jii.... Ghar se kaam/school or even sabji kareedne ke liye koyi jaye toh gharwalon ka tension ab b hai dilon mein...

Bahut accha likha hai aapne jii..


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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 03:06:36 PM »

Bahut achi Peshkash Ki Hai Aapne Hum Tum ji..


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Pooja

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 06:53:44 PM »

Bahoot khoob HumTum ji... wah kaya baat hai... bahoot he achi tarah se apne ajj kal ke haalato ko apni kavita main vaykat kiya hai.. Good work


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Pooja

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 06:54:20 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 06, 2009, 01:41:04 PM

Dareecho tak chale aaye, tumhare daur ke khatre
Hum apne ghar se baher jhakne ka haq bhi kho bhaithe

-Wasim Barelvi-

Nice sharing SG jee!!


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HumTum

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Re: -Insaan (A Common Man)-

«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2009, 11:01:27 AM »

Thank you so much Guys. Usual Smile


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