Intezar hai mujhe us pal ka...

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Jis din tu ayega mujhe sar-e-aam apnane,
us din main khamoshi k dayre ko tod dungi,

faaslo pe rehkar bhi humare jazbaat jude hai mazbut dhage se,
jab hum honge sath tou main apni sanso ki ladiya bhi tujhse jod dungi,

yu tou aaj bhi merre rukh saare terri hi taraf mudte hai,
per tujhe paa k main apni zindgi bhi terri taraf mod dungi,

intezaar hai mujhe us pal ka merre ajnabi..
jab thaam k terra hath main tanhai ka daaman hamesha k liye chhod dungi.........



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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2010, 09:04:36 AM »
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brklv ji........

apne bht bht aur abht sudnar likha he.....

u know simple words me bht shalin tarike se kaha hua bht pyara lagta he ....apne wahi kiya he....

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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2010, 09:20:34 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2010, 11:59:46 AM »
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Waah........bahut hi khoob bbl ji.....bahut pyara likha h aapne.....
pyar aur farz k beech ek ladki jarur uljhti hai.....aapke iss poetry mein khuch aisi hi jhalak dikh rahi hai.....uss raah par jana bhi chahte h lkn ja nahi sakte qunki sahi raaste jana chahte hai......if m wrng plz tell me.....
Bhawnao aur jajbaaton ko samete hue bahut hi pyari kavita likhi h aapne..... jisse samjho toh sab khuch h aur na samjho to khuch nahi....superb bbl ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2010, 02:04:02 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya matrix ji,khwaish ji n nikhaar ji...nikhaar ji apne merri kavita ki gehrai ko ekdum sahi pehchana kch aese hi uljhe se jazbaat hai merre dil mein jinhe maine apni is kavita k zariye yahan pesh kiya hai merre jazbaato ko samjhne k liye tahe dil se apka shukriya...take cre all of u...Usual Smile

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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2010, 03:47:55 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab.... Bahut hi achche se aapne aapne khayaaloN ko shabdoN meiN dhala hai .... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob.... Jee Daad hazir hai... Usual Smile     

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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 03:59:48 PM »
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baht bahut shukriya parwaaz ji...
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 04:07:36 PM »
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simple wordings touching feelings..alag sa andaaz..bht khubb geet ji.....aapka ye andaz bhi dil chura gaya
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 04:19:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji...
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 05:27:24 PM »
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wah ji... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!

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thaam lo aake baahen meri,
ye baahen tumhe bulaati hain,
tasveer mere dil me basi hai,
mujhe tumhaare kareeb bataati hain,

saanson ka hi rishta hai tumse,
ye saanse tum bin ruk jaati hain,
dhadkano pe bhi naam hai tumhaara,
har dhadkan mujhse bataati hai,

tanha to tum aaj bhi nahi ho,
meri yaadein saath nibhaati hain,
suni raaton ke andheron me bhi wo,
tumhe meri hi yaad dilaati hain....
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2010, 05:44:28 PM »
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Wah! Wah! Ji

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Geet Ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2010, 05:45:11 PM »
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wah ji... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!

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thaam lo aake baahen meri,
ye baahen tumhe bulaati hain,
tasveer mere dil me basi hai,
mujhe tumhaare kareeb bataati hain,

saanson ka hi rishta hai tumse,
ye saanse tum bin ruk jaati hain,
dhadkano pe bhi naam hai tumhaara,
har dhadkan mujhse bataati hai,

tanha to tum aaj bhi nahi ho,
meri yaadein saath nibhaati hain,
suni raaton ke andheron me bhi wo,
tumhe meri hi yaad dilaati hain....

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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 05:47:34 PM »
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thank you so much Rajesh ji...!!!

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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2010, 12:53:55 AM »
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wah ji... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!

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thaam lo aake baahen meri,
ye baahen tumhe bulaati hain,
tasveer mere dil me basi hai,
mujhe tumhaare kareeb bataati hain,

saanson ka hi rishta hai tumse,
ye saanse tum bin ruk jaati hain,
dhadkano pe bhi naam hai tumhaara,
har dhadkan mujhse bataati hai,

tanha to tum aaj bhi nahi ho,
meri yaadein saath nibhaati hain,
suni raaton ke andheron me bhi wo,
tumhe meri hi yaad dilaati hain....

wahhhhhhhh...........bht khubbbbbbb ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2010, 04:34:41 AM »
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Jis din tu ayega mujhe sar-e-aam apnane,
us din main khamoshi k dayre ko tod dungi,

faaslo pe rehkar bhi humare jazbaat jude hai mazbut dhage se,
jab hum honge sath tou main apni sanso ki ladiya bhi tujhse jod dungi,

yu tou aaj bhi merre rukh saare terri hi taraf mudte hai,
per tujhe paa k main apni zindgi bhi terri taraf mod dungi,

intezaar hai mujhe us pal ka merre ajnabi..
jab thaam k terra hath main tanhai ka daaman hamesha k liye chhod dungi.........





kya andaze-bayan hai broken ji uss khush naseeb ajnabi ke liye....dil ko chuoo gaye aapke ehsaas o alfaz...behtreen kalaam
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