Jaane-Pehchaane Se Ajnabi "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 16, 2010, 08:49:47 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 17, 2010, 08:01:01 AM »
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Ati sunder bhaav aur badi sandijgi se rachi hui ye aapki kavita....mann ko udelit kar gayee..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yaad hai kya Kabhi humraaj-humsafar they hum dono
Waqt ki aandhee aysee chalee bhatak gaye hum dono

Ab kabhi is mod pe to kabhi kis mod pe milte hain
Dil dhadakte hain par muh mod kay ab gujarte hain


Kehte Hai Zindagi Mein Agar Do Log, Jo Ek Duje Ko Chaahte Hai,Par Kuch kaaran Ek Duje Ke saath Nahi Reh Paate To Phir Uss Rishte Ka Koi Mol Nahi Reh Jaata..Dosti Ki Bhawnayen Pyaar Mein Badal Sakti hai Par Pyaar Kabhi Vaapas Dosti ki Surat nahi Le Paata..Bichadne Ke Baad Woh Do Log Sirf Ek Duje ke Liye Kuch Jaane-Pehchaane Se Ajnabi Bankar Reh Jaate Hai..Iss Soch Par Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..Umeed hai Aap Sab Zaroor Padhenge..

Naa Jaane Kyon Kuch Ajnabi Se Ho gaye Hai Hum
Kareeb The Dil Ke Phir Kyon Door Ho gaye Hai Hum

Dil mein Ek Dard Sa Jaga Hai,Aankh Se Kuch Ashq sa Baha Hai
Guzarte Waqt Ke Haathon Kyon Majboor se Ho gaye Hai Hum...

Kuch Sawaal mere mann mein Hai Kuch Sawaal Tere Mann Mein Bhi
Ek Duje Se baat Bhi naa Kar Sake Itne Kyon magroor Ho Gaye hai Hum...

Ek Duje Ki Zaroorat bankar Jee Rahe The
Par Waqt Ke Mutaabik Zaroorate Bhi badal Jaati hai!!!!
bahut Khoobsurat tha Zindagi Meri!!!
Ab Kyon benoor Se Ho gaye Hai Hum....

bahut Nazdikiyan Bhi Kabhi-Kabhi Dooriyan Paida kar leti hai
"Khwaish" ko Yeh yakeen Kyo Hai ke Phir Ajnabi zaroor Ho gaye Hai Hum...

Jaane-Pehchaane Se Ajnabi, jaane-Pehchaane Se Naam!!!!
"Khwaish" Milna-Bichadna To dastoor Hai Zindagi ka
par Dilon se Kyon Itne Door Ho gaye Hai Hum....

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #16 on: August 17, 2010, 09:37:23 AM »
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Kwahish jee Aapke tehreer e khayaal kuch aise lage jaise humare hi dil se nikle ho aur aapne unhe lafzoN meiN kaid kiya ho.... Usual Smile

Behad sahiN kaha hai aapne ke Pyaar vapas Dosti ki surat nahi le pata......

Is lafzoN ke umdaa khayaal ke liye dil se daad ......

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez......


Apna keemti waqt dene Ke Liye Aapka Teh Dil se Shukriya Parwaaz Ji..Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Yuhi Saath Dete rahenge.. icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: August 17, 2010, 09:58:37 AM »
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Aj salaam bhi nahin karta hai woh shaks 'Rahim',
Jo kabhi mujse baat karne ko tarasta rehta tha..

Apki iss nazm kay bare main hum kya kahein Khwaish Dost..Aisa laga kay haal-e-dil apne humara kagaaz par uttar liya..Behad khubsoorat dil ko choone wali lines likhi hai apne..Bahaut sach kaha kay dosti mohobat ban sakti hai, mohobat dosti nahin..
Yeh kalam mere dil kay behad kareeb raha..Zindagi yun bhi rand dikha ti hai kay jo dil ki dhadkanon ki tarha mujse kareeb tha, aj us'se mera rishta zameen aur asmaan ki tarha hai..ek dusre kay samne rehte hai, mager paas nahin..!
Salutes to your poem.!
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhai Rahim, Aapne Inn Ehsaaso Ko Samjha, Mehsoos Kiya..

Aapka Teh Dillllllllllllllllll Se Shukriya Bhai..

Bas Yuhi Mohabbat banaye Rakhiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #18 on: August 17, 2010, 07:37:44 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di..Bahaut sunder reply diye hai apne..
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«Reply #19 on: August 17, 2010, 07:38:21 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Koyal di.! Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: August 18, 2010, 07:04:14 AM »
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Thanks a lot Rahim-bhai.....

Bahaut bahaut khoob Koyal di.! Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: August 18, 2010, 11:06:01 AM »
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Bohat Achche Khwaaish Bhai Har Baar Ki Tarah,.

And Nice One Rancho Ji,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: August 18, 2010, 11:13:32 AM »
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bahut khoob....khwahish ji ..khush rahiye..likhte rahiye!
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«Reply #23 on: August 19, 2010, 02:51:42 PM »
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KHAWAISH JI BEHTREEN LIKHA HAI...ISS PAR MUJHE APNA EK SHER YAAD AAYA ARZ HAI...

            DOORIYAN ITNI NA BADHAA KE..,
            TAKLEEF HO PAAS AANE MEIN..!
            QAREEB RAH KAR FAASLE RAKHNA.. KAHIN ACHCHA...!!

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bahut Bahut Khoob Adil Bhai,kyam Sher Arz Kiya Hai Aapne..

Aur Teh dil se Aapka Shukriya, jo Aapne Apna keemti waqt Diya.. icon_flower
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«Reply #24 on: May 24, 2011, 09:19:44 AM »
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khwaish ji....aapse kaha tha k kuch likhne ki koshish karungi lijiye kuch likha hai...bataiye kaisa laga.... Feared.

rahim bhai ye lijiye aapka bhi intezar pura hua...kuch koshhish ki hai maine.. icon_flower.

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Kitna tha pyaar tumhe humse kuch roz pehle tak
Aaj kya sochkar nazar se utar gaya hein hum

Dekhe bina lagta nahin tha dil tumhara kahin
Aaj kyun teri awazz sunne ko taras gaye hain hum

Har pal nazar jami rehti thii chehre pe mere teri
Aaj kyun teri ik nazar ko tadap rahe hain hum

Chalna tha bht lamba safar hume sath me hum kadam
Aaj kyun iss doraahe pe akle reh gaye hain hum

Jaan pehchaan ko tumne hi dosti ka naam diya tha
Aaj kyun teri usi dosti ko taras gaye hain hum

Dosti me dil milte hain aur pyaar ka ehsaas hota hai
Hai nahin ye pyaar tumhe samjhate rahe hain hum

Kuch tum bhi na bol sake jo baat chubhti rahi tumhe
Aur tumse kuch na kehne ki kasam kha chuke the hum

Aaj na pyaar raha na dosti rahi na koi apnapan hi raha
Dekho kaise anjane se rishte me bandh gaye hain hum

Chhod dun ye gurrurr ye mahobbat ye deewangi main
Issme ulajhkar sab kuch apna kho rahe hain hum

Fir na mil payenge kabhi ajnabeeyon ki bhi tarah
Gar ruth kar tumse kabhi kahin chale gaye jo hum…!!!
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Anuji, Aapne to bahut dard bhara likh diya..bahut bahut khoob!!!!


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«Reply #25 on: May 24, 2011, 09:36:16 AM »
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kya kammal likha khwaishji.... wakai aansu aa gaye.. dard ka ehsas bahut bahut gahra aur dil ko chhuta hua hai.... esa lagta hai jaise aapki rachna ka ek ek lafz jee ke dekh chuke hain.

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«Reply #26 on: May 24, 2011, 01:07:32 PM »
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rancho ji bht hi pyara likha hai aapne....
kuch aapke reply me ji......hamari taraf se..

Taraste rahe jinki nigaahon me apne liye pyaar dekhne
Aaj wahi humse kehte hain k hum unhe chahte kyun nahin

Jinki aarzoo karte beetai humne apni jawani
Wahi humse aaj kehte hain k hum unhe pehchaan nahin paye

Jinke sapne dekhte hi bitayee hai humne apni raatein
Wahi keh rahe hain k tumhare karan hum so nahin paye

Jinke liye mangi dua humne apni har ibaadat me
Wahi kehte hain k wo kabhi hume apna nahin paye

Kehne ko to har sawaal k jawabb hain hamare pas bhi sanam
Lekin kya Karen tere saamne hum kabhi kuch bhi keh nahin paye…..!!!


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«Reply #27 on: May 24, 2011, 01:15:16 PM »
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       na kar khawaish uski jo door se nazar aaye,
        ho sakta hai shola bhi wo jise tu samjhe noor



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«Reply #28 on: May 24, 2011, 01:35:09 PM »
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        na kar khawaish uski jo door se nazar aaye,
        ho sakta hai shola bhi wo jise tu samjhe noor



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Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Shebaji....

  Dil Lekar Dard Dena To Aadat Hai Zamaane Ki
 Parwaane Ko Bhi Aadat Hai Jal-Jal Ke Mar Jaane ki

   Jo Bhi Hai Yeh Manzoor Hai Humein!!!
   Saza To Milti Hai Yahan Dil Lagaane Ki


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«Reply #29 on: May 24, 2011, 01:37:33 PM »
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Ati sunder bhaav aur badi sandijgi se rachi hui ye aapki kavita....mann ko udelit kar gayee..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yaad hai kya Kabhi humraaj-humsafar they hum dono
Waqt ki aandhee aysee chalee bhatak gaye hum dono

Ab kabhi is mod pe to kabhi kis mod pe milte hain
Dil dhadakte hain par muh mod kay ab gujarte hain



Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much koyalji

Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Acha Likha


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