Jabse mile hai jina muhaal hai...

by brokenbyluv on October 13, 2010, 06:54:16 PM
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Jab nhi milte the tou sukoon rehta tha,
ab jo mile hai tou jina muhaal hai,

kuch ghanto mein bahut waqt bita liya ho jaise,
nazaro se nhi hat'ta us shaam ka khayal hai,

terra mujhme samana merra tujhse door chale jana,
milke bhi hamare dilo mein uljhe bahut se sawaal hai,

socha tha sang bita k kuch pal thoda sambhal jayenge,
per mile hai jabse bechain tabse merra haal hai,

bepanah mhbt k baad bhi hum mil nhi sakte,
ajab hai kismat ka khel aur khuda ki khudayi bhi kamaal hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2010, 06:15:36 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       BROKENBYLUV JI...


NA MILKE BHI BECHAIN THEY "JAB SE MILE HAI JEENA MUHAAL HAI"
YEH KAISI MOHABBAT HAI YEH KAISA KISMAT KA KAMAAL HAI.......
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2010, 08:31:33 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Geetji..Kya Kehne Apake..

Bahut Khoobsurti se Aapne Apne Jazbaaton Ko Kalam Par Bikhera Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch Likhne Ki Gustaaki Kar raha Hoon, Ek Ladki Ki Zubaani..


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Yeh Raah-e-zindagi Kabhi Asaan Naa Thi!!!
Par Aakhir Kyon yeh Mere Saath Eh Mere Khuda Hua..

main Jaanti Hoon Tu Bewaffa kabhi Naa Tha!!!!!
Bas!!! Kuch Halaat Aur Waqt Hi yahan Bewaffa Hua...
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2010, 10:10:12 AM »
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Shukriya khwaish ji...aur bahut khoob likha hai apne...
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2010, 10:53:24 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 14, 2010, 10:10:12 AM
Shukriya khwaish ji...aur bahut khoob likha hai apne...




Shukriya Aapka Geetji, Aap Itna ACha Likhte Ho ke Bin Kuch likhe Aajkal Raha Nahi jaata..Humesha Khush Rahiye Aap.. icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2010, 11:34:20 AM »
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Shukriya khwaish ji jald hi reply karungi...
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2010, 12:38:40 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2010, 12:44:47 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji..
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