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                         mitaa kar khud ko.,
                         jalwaa dikhaney ka,
                         main qaayal nahin...!
                         gar yaqeen ho..,
                         to merey alfaaz hi kaafi hain,
                         asar rakhney ko......!! occasion17
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2010, 08:16:50 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2010, 09:19:37 AM »
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                         khud ko mitaa kar.,
                         jalwaa dikhaney ka,
                         main qaayal nahin...!
                         gar yaqeen ho..,
                         to merey alfaaz hi kaafi hain,
                         asar rakhney ko......!! occasion17
Bahut khoob Bechain ji...maine bhi koshish kiya hai shayad pasand aaye...
                         nihaa hai dar badar jalwaa,
                         mitana kya banana kya?
                         nazar ki baat hai kewal,
                         ayaan hona dikhana kya.
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2010, 09:45:02 AM »
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Good one Adil Ji
N Nice response Pandey Ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2010, 12:33:58 PM »
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good adil ji achcha laga aap ka jalwa padh kar."BUSHRA KUSH HUI" Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2010, 10:55:55 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2010, 10:56:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob Bechain ji...maine bhi koshish kiya hai shayad pasand aaye...
                         nihaa hai dar badar jalwaa,
                         mitana kya banana kya?
                         nazar ki baat hai kewal,
                         ayaan hona dikhana kya.


bahut khoob pandey ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2010, 10:57:12 AM »
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Good one Adil Ji
N Nice response Pandey Ji

thank u rajesh ji
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good adil ji achcha laga aap ka jalwa padh kar."BUSHRA KUSH HUI" Applause Applause

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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2010, 01:47:24 PM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai Adil ji and Pandey ji.very beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: March 26, 2010, 08:39:44 PM »
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Bahut Khooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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