Jee Kar Dikhayenge

by Meena on April 28, 2005, 05:08:16 PM
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Virane me bhi umeedon ke gulshan hum khilayenge,
Jo ristha na raha uska matam aab na manayenge,
Jinone bewafai ki kabar me dafna diya tha hume,
Unhi ko aaj hum muskurate hue jee kar dikhayenge!

Asan to nahin par unka nam bhi aab dil se mitayenge.
Nadan dil ko unki yaadon se yuh na satayenge,
Sab kehte hai bewafai ke rog ki koi dawa hai nahin,
Par zeher-e-ashqui hum pi kar dikhayenge !
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2005, 05:03:09 PM »
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Virane me bhi umeedon ke gulshan hum khilayenge,
Jo ristha na raha uska matam aab na manayenge,
Jinone bewafai ki kabar me dafna diya tha hume,
Unhi ko aaj hum muskurate hue jee kar dikhayenge!

Asan to nahin par unka nam bhi aab dil se mitayenge.
Nadan dil ko unki yaadon se yuh na satayenge,
Sab kehte hai bewafai ke rog ki koi dawa hai nahin,
Par zeher-e-ashqui hum pi kar dikhayenge !


wow wow  wow meena..............wonderful........... excellent  words.....

hausla  bahot  buland hai ...............bahot  khoob........... tongue3  tongue3
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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2005, 05:17:07 PM »
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shukriya waheed shukriya!!!!!!!!!! kisi ne yaha koi reply nahin likha  sad5  maine socha achi nahin hai poem  sad5
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2005, 05:08:35 PM »
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shukriya waheed shukriya!!!!!!!!!! kisi ne yaha koi reply nahin likha  sad5  maine socha achi nahin hai poem  sad5


aisa nahin  hai   meena...........  is  forum  mein  bahot kam  log  aate  hain.....dekho  main aur  sonu  sabse  jyada  rahte hain..jab woh  aati hai  to  sirf  2  log  dikhte hain..........hum logon ki  post per  koi  bhi  reply  nahin  deta  hai...... :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2005, 07:07:17 PM »
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shukriya waheed shukriya!!!!!!!!!! kisi ne yaha koi reply nahin likha  sad5  maine socha achi nahin hai poem  sad5


aisa nahin  hai   meena...........  is  forum  mein  bahot kam  log  aate  hain.....dekho  main aur  sonu  sabse  jyada  rahte hain..jab woh  aati hai  to  sirf  2  log  dikhte hain..........hum logon ki  post per  koi  bhi  reply  nahin  deta  hai...... :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:


sad na  sad5
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2005, 10:43:22 AM »
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hey meena very nicely written!!!!! lovely poem!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2005, 01:17:39 PM »
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hey meena very nicely written!!!!! lovely poem!!!!


shukriya ji shukriya!!!

 :D
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2005, 01:56:44 PM »
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Virane me bhi umeedon ke gulshan hum khilayenge,
Jo ristha na raha uska matam aab na manayenge,
Jinone bewafai ki kabar me dafna diya tha hume,
Unhi ko aaj hum muskurate hue jee kar dikhayenge!

Asan to nahin par unka nam bhi aab dil se mitayenge.
Nadan dil ko unki yaadon se yuh na satayenge,
Sab kehte hai bewafai ke rog ki koi dawa hai nahin,
Par zeher-e-ashqui hum pi kar dikhayenge !



e' shaani ... kha kha post kerti hai tu... apun ki nazar idhar nhi padi.. boley to apun idhar jiada nhi aata hai..... per aaj aa hi gaye hai to kuch likh ke jayegey  .....  ( waseey bahoot khoob likha hai ji  )

kehtey hai ke hamarey bina woh jee ke dhiklayegey
unkey bina "HumTum"  hum bhi maar nhi jayegey

tum mita sakti ho naam hamara apney dil se "Meena"
ya khuda !! yeh gunaah hum kabhi na ker payegey

tum jisko zaher-e-ashiqui kehti ho har soo har jagah
hum pee ker ke bhi usko , duniya ko na batlayegey

hum pe ilzaamat lagey bewaffa ke tuney "Meena"
tere liye yeh alfaaz apni zuubaan pe kassey layegey

mubarak ho tumhey nyi duniya nya jahaan tumhara
phir ussi gam-e-samunder mein "HumTum" doob jayegey


HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2005, 03:16:57 PM »
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shukriya humtum ji humari post ke liye bhi time nikal liye :wink:

Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,

Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2005, 05:05:25 PM »
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Virane me bhi umeedon ke gulshan hum khilayenge,
Jo ristha na raha uska matam aab na manayenge,
Jinone bewafai ki kabar me dafna diya tha hume,
Unhi ko aaj hum muskurate hue jee kar dikhayenge!

Asan to nahin par unka nam bhi aab dil se mitayenge.
Nadan dil ko unki yaadon se yuh na satayenge,
Sab kehte hai bewafai ke rog ki koi dawa hai nahin,
Par zeher-e-ashqui hum pi kar dikhayenge !


wah meena,very josh wale words,bohat accha likha.
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2005, 03:18:56 PM »
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Virane me bhi umeedon ke gulshan hum khilayenge,
Jo ristha na raha uska matam aab na manayenge,
Jinone bewafai ki kabar me dafna diya tha hume,
Unhi ko aaj hum muskurate hue jee kar dikhayenge!

Asan to nahin par unka nam bhi aab dil se mitayenge.
Nadan dil ko unki yaadon se yuh na satayenge,
Sab kehte hai bewafai ke rog ki koi dawa hai nahin,
Par zeher-e-ashqui hum pi kar dikhayenge !


wah meena,very josh wale words,bohat accha likha.


thank u kuddiyee!!! and where have u been?  :evil:
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2005, 08:35:47 AM »
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shukriya humtum ji humari post ke liye bhi time nikal liye :wink:

Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,

Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!



kyaa khoob kha aapney ....... kuch arz hai aap ke liye

"Na uda yu thokaron se meri khak-e-kabr zalim
 yhi ek reh gayi hai merey pyar ki nishani "


ab aap ki post ke jawab mein .....

suna hai woh hame bhoolaane lage hain
to kya hum unhe yaad aane lage hain

hataye the jo rah se doston ki
woh pathar mere ghar pe aane lage hain

qyamat yaqinan kareeb aa chuki hai
ke "HumTum" chod ke mehkhana, masjid mein jaane lage hain!


HumTum
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2005, 11:58:00 AM »
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shukriya humtum ji humari post ke liye bhi time nikal liye :wink:

Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,

Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!



kyaa khoob kha aapney ....... kuch arz hai aap ke liye

"Na uda yu thokaron se meri khak-e-kabr zalim
 yhi ek reh gayi hai merey pyar ki nishani "


ab aap ki post ke jawab mein .....

suna hai woh hame bhoolaane lage hain
to kya hum unhe yaad aane lage hain

hataye the jo rah se doston ki
woh pathar mere ghar pe aane lage hain

qyamat yaqinan kareeb aa chuki hai
ke "HumTum" chod ke mehkhana, masjid mein jaane lage hain!


HumTum


wow wow wow brillient humtum!!!!! itne bhi bhuddu nahin ho jitna ke sochte hain  :wink:
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2005, 04:17:30 PM »
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shukriya humtum ji humari post ke liye bhi time nikal liye :wink:

Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,

Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!



kyaa khoob kha aapney ....... kuch arz hai aap ke liye

"Na uda yu thokaron se meri khak-e-kabr zalim
 yhi ek reh gayi hai merey pyar ki nishani "


ab aap ki post ke jawab mein .....

suna hai woh hame bhoolaane lage hain
to kya hum unhe yaad aane lage hain

hataye the jo rah se doston ki
woh pathar mere ghar pe aane lage hain

qyamat yaqinan kareeb aa chuki hai
ke "HumTum" chod ke mehkhana, masjid mein jaane lage hain!


HumTum


wow wow wow brillient humtum!!!!! itne bhi bhuddu nahin ho jitna ke sochte hain  :wink:


Aaj sun ke dhadkan hamari chonk gaye woh
schtey hongey ke HumTum bhi dil rakhta hai  sad5
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2005, 05:17:21 PM »
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door to kade ho par dil ki dhadka sun sakhte hai,
aise hi nahin judai ke baad dil dhadkate hai!!!
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