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by bekarar on March 21, 2008, 04:18:49 PM
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fake me din gujare, raisee bhi dekhi,
mahfilen jamai, tanhaiyan bhi dekhi,

kuch is kadar badhi, wakifiyat hummari,
jeene ki har ada ab lagati hai dekhi dekhi....

dekh kar kisi ko undekha sa karana,
waqt ke sath sath nazar badalte dekhi,

jee na sakunga tum bin, hazzaron dafa kaha tha,
jane ke baad unke, jeene ki chah dekhi.

tere bina hans paunga, ye socha bhi nahi tha,
jillat se hanske maine, sochen badalate dekhi

kuch is kadar badi wakifiyat hamari,
jeene ki har ada ab lagati hai dekhi dekhi..
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2008, 01:14:30 PM »
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Bohat acha likha hai bekarar ji.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2008, 06:37:52 PM »
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Bohat acha likha hai bekarar ji.. Applause
thanks honey ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2008, 03:48:49 AM »
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bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai bekeraar ji...


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«Reply #4 on: March 27, 2008, 02:32:15 AM »
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tere bina hans paunga, ye socha bhi nahi tha,
jillat se hanske maine, sochen badalate dekhi
kuch is kadar badi wakifiyat hamari,
ke jindagi ki har chese lagati hai dekhi dekhi..

Bahut accha likha hai aapne bekarar ji.
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2008, 10:16:37 AM »
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thanks Harsh ji and ROJA
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2008, 02:04:41 PM »
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bahut khhob bekraar ji.........
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2010, 06:12:46 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab Sanjeev bro..

Bahut bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 10:36:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 11:33:34 AM »
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bht hi pyari kavita hai aapki bekaraar ji....

zindagi ka sach har insaan ka sach hai ye...

apni jaruraton k hisaab se badalte rishte dekhe
humne apne hi saaye sath chhodte dekhe

kuch iss kadar dekhi hai humne zindagi ki hakikat
unhi hakikat ko jhutlane ko jhute sapne dekhe......!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2010, 03:14:36 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab Sanjeev bro..

Bahut bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aapke comment ke intzaar ko tarsti is kavita ko aakhir prtisaad mil hi gaya ...tah-e-dil se shukriya bro
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2010, 03:15:37 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
shukriya bhai.......
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2010, 03:19:01 AM »
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bht hi pyari kavita hai aapki bekaraar ji....

zindagi ka sach har insaan ka sach hai ye...

apni jaruraton k hisaab se badalte rishte dekhe
humne apne hi saaye sath chhodte dekhe

kuch iss kadar dekhi hai humne zindagi ki hakikat
unhi hakikat ko jhutlane ko jhute sapne dekhe......!!!
bahoooot shukriya KDK ji.....aapki bhi panktiyan behtreen rahi...
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 02:05:54 AM »
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fake me din gujare, raisee bhi dekhi,
mahfilen jamai, tanhaiyan bhi dekhi,

kuch is kadar badhi, wakifiyat hummari,
jeene ki har ada ab lagati hai dekhi dekhi....

dekh kar kisi ko undekha sa karana,
waqt ke sath sath nazar badalte dekhi,

jee na sakunga tum bin, hazzaron dafa kaha tha,
jane ke baad unke, jeene ki chah dekhi.

tere bina hans paunga, ye socha bhi nahi tha,
jillat se hanske maine, sochen badalate dekhi

kuch is kadar badi wakifiyat hamari,
jeene ki har ada ab lagati hai dekhi dekhi..


Bahut khoob Bekarar Ji
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