Jitna Tujhe Pana Chaha

by Pooja on January 06, 2009, 05:30:13 AM
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Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye

samjha samjha kar khud ko, karni chahe baat do tujhse
jitna najdik anna chaha, utane door hum hote gaye

Meri baato se narmi na gai, teri baato se garmi na gai
Guftgu jab bhi karni chahi, shabdo ko hum lardaate gaye

Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye

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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 09:18:35 AM »
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kya baat hai poojaji...

jitni khushi cahayi tumse,utna hi tum dukh dete gaye,
jab bhi baat karni cahayi tum se,har bar jagarte rahen.
koi bhi baat samaj nahin payeho,sirf hume rulaye ho.
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 10:20:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob Pooja Ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 12:37:20 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Pooja  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 01:01:08 PM »
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Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye

samjha samjha kar khud ko, karni chahe baat do tujhse
jitna najdik anna chaha, utane door hum hote gaye

Meri baato se narmi na gai, teri baato se garmi na gai
Guftgu jab bhi karni chahi, shabdo ko hum lardaate gaye

Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye



Bahoth qoob Likha hai Poji Ji Apne !!

Meri Justaju Se tumhe Nafrath Kyoon Hai !!
Jitna Hum banate Gaye !! Utna hi Tum Mitate Gaye !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 08:54:02 PM »
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Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye

samjha samjha kar khud ko, karni chahe baat do tujhse
jitna najdik anna chaha, utane door hum hote gaye

Meri baato se narmi na gai, teri baato se garmi na gai
Guftgu jab bhi karni chahi, shabdo ko hum lardaate gaye

Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye



Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut hi Khoobsurat Peshkash.. Applause Applause Applause

Bahoth qoob Likha hai Poji Ji Apne !!

Meri Justaju Se tumhe Nafrath Kyoon Hai !!
Jitna Hum banate Gaye !! Utna hi Tum Mitate Gaye !!

Qadeer Toopchi


Qadeer saheb, do line mein bahut Gehri Baat Keh gaye aap.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 09:20:49 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut hi Khoobsurat Peshkash.. Applause Applause Applause

Qadeer saheb, do line mein bahut Gehri Baat Keh gaye aap.. Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Khwaish Sahab shukar guzaar hon apka !! tarif to uski hai jine ye ghazal likhi haimaine to bus ghazal se jud ne koshish kihai !! nice creation Pooja ji and thanks khawish ji

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 09:30:15 PM »
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Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye

samjha samjha kar khud ko, karni chahe baat do tujhse
jitna najdik anna chaha, utane door hum hote gaye

Meri baato se narmi na gai, teri baato se garmi na gai
Guftgu jab bhi karni chahi, shabdo ko hum lardaate gaye

Jitna tujhe paana chaha, utna he khote gaye
jitna chaha na roye ankhia, utna he hum rote gaye




Bahut accha likha hai aapne didi...
Kaash kaash... mai likhpati...  sad5


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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 09:52:22 PM »
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Pooja,

Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause

Ab yeh mat kehna mujhe aaj waqt kaise mil gaya tumhari post padhne ka !

Tumhe maaloom hai ki i am very busy now a days sad5

@Qadeer,

Aap ne Pooja ka acha saath diya Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 09:56:10 PM »
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Bahoth qoob Likha hai Poji Ji Apne !!

Meri Justaju Se tumhe Nafrath Kyoon Hai !!
Jitna Hum banate Gaye !! Utna hi Tum Mitate Gaye !!

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shukaria and bahoot khoob qadeer ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 09:56:55 PM »
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Thanks SG JEE.. Khwaish, Sonia and Veer ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2009, 09:58:41 PM »
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shukaria and bahoot khoob qadeer ji!!

Thanks Pooja Ji !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2009, 10:00:36 PM »
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Tujhe khone main bhi ek paana tha
narak ki zindagi se nikal anna tha

ab hu main aor mere khayalo main tum
yah juda hokar he maine jaana tha

tha dard wahan bhi, hai dard yaha bhi
magar na ab koi tera taana tha

Tujhe khone main bhi ek paana tha
narak ki zindagi se nikal anna tha
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2009, 10:03:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Very true Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2009, 10:05:28 PM »
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Thanks Veer ji!!!
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