jo apnay thay apnay na banay------------taiba

by chitralsony on April 28, 2009, 11:59:46 AM
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ek khowab hi to hum nay daikha tha
tabeer may humko hazaron  rog milay
kuch loagon ko hi to apna jana tha
kyun roop badel kr wohi loag milay
hum nay to  khoshiyan banti thin
humko yahan kyun  dukh saray  milay
zakhmon pai sub kay merham rakhkr
hum ko phir bhi yahan  nasoor milay
jo apnay thay apnay  na banay
bas bhays may onkay ghayer milay
dunia kay chaman may humko hina
jub phol chunay angaray milay




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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 01:09:15 PM »
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Nice work Taiba...
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 01:20:23 PM »
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Wow yaar... I admire your vocabulary...

NIce Work

Upnon ko upna sahmjha thah, kya yehee hai khata meri?
Insaanon mein dost dhoondhe, shayad yehee hai daagha meri...
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 01:31:49 PM »
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ek khowab hi to hum nay daikha tha
tabeer may humko hazaron  rog milay
kuch loagon ko hi to apna jana tha
kyun roop badel kr wohi loag milay
hum nay to  khoshiyan banti thin
humko yahan kyun  dukh saray  milay
zakhmon pai sub kay merham rakhkr
hum ko phir bhi yahan  nasoor milay
jo apnay thay apnay  na banay
bas bhays may onkay ghayer milay
dunia kay chaman may humko hina
jub phol chunay angaray milay

Wah..... Very good... Applause Applause Lovely creation Taiba dear
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 02:41:01 PM »
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Nice work Taiba...
thank u ghayel ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 02:43:55 PM »
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Wow yaar... I admire your vocabulary...

NIce Work

Upnon ko upna sahmjha thah, kya yehee hai khata meri?
Insaanon mein dost dhoondhe, shayad yehee hai daagha meri...
thank u so much and bhot khob yah hamay apnay he drd daitay hain
    ghyeron ki kiya juirat thi humko wo saza daitay
    yay to apnay thay jin say hum yay chot kha baithay
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 02:45:04 PM »
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Wah..... Very good... Applause Applause Lovely creation Taiba dear
thank u so much dear roja,GOD bless u
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