*~*~*Kaali GhataeiN*~*~*

by Saman Firdaus on December 10, 2013, 03:48:51 AM
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Kaali GhataoN Ki Thi Ek Khwahish,
Jo Usne Puri Karli, Barsaa k Rim-Jhim Baarish,

Zameen Ne Bhi Kuch Soch Rakha Tha,
Usne Bhi Ki Thi Ek Guzaarish,


Kaali GhataoN Ko Ye Manzoor Na Tha,
Usne Rachai Ek Saazish,

Ab Aap Hi BatayeN, Kya Likhe "Saman" Aage,
Uske Paas Bachi Na Thi Koi Gunjaaish...


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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2013, 04:03:25 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2013, 04:05:07 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2013, 04:07:13 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2013, 04:08:30 AM »
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Thnkuuuuu..... happy3

Uffff!!!!!!!! Thnkuu so muchh for the RAU..
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2013, 04:29:08 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2013, 04:29:59 AM »
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Kaali GhataoN Ki Thi Ek Khwahish,
Jo Usne Puri Karli, Barsaa k Rim-Jhim Baarish,

Zameen Ne Bhi Kuch Soch Rakha Tha,
Usne Bhi Ki Thi Ek Guzaarish,


Kaali GhataoN Ko Ye Manzoor Na Tha,
Usne Rachai Ek Saazish,

Ab Aap Hi BatayeN, Kya Likhe "Saman" Aage,
Uske Paas Bachi Na Thi Koi Gunjaaish...





boss!!!!!!!!!!! sab thhikk hai per ye saazish kya thee


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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2013, 04:32:27 AM »
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nice beta ji
Thnkuuu... happy3
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2013, 04:35:41 AM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!! sab thhikk hai per ye saazish kya thee


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Thnkuu..

Ab pta nhi ye saazish kya thi..
Wahi jaane...
Aap puchhna to zara..
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2013, 04:43:30 AM »
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Kaali GhataoN Ki Thi Ek Khwahish,
Jo Usne Puri Karli, Barsaa k Rim-Jhim Baarish,

Zameen Ne Bhi Kuch Soch Rakha Tha,
Usne Bhi Ki Thi Ek Guzaarish,


Kaali GhataoN Ko Ye Manzoor Na Tha,
Usne Rachai Ek Saazish,

Ab Aap Hi BatayeN, Kya Likhe "Saman" Aage,
Uske Paas Bachi Na Thi Koi Gunjaaish...




kaun kahta hai ki bachi nhi koi gunjaaiah
karke dekho Saman thora aur zor aajmaaiah

likh paogi iske aage bhi bahot kuch tum
badhaao Saman thora aur likhne ki kwhaaish


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kaali ghataaon ka hoga ghamand bhi choor choor
jab hogee mere mehboob ke zulfon ki numaaish
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hehe ye sher kisi khaas k lie automatic dimag me aa gya tongue3




bht acha likha hai tumne Saitaan no.1
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2013, 04:46:52 AM »
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kaun kahta hai ki bachi nhi koi gunjaaiah
karke dekho Saman thora aur zor aajmaaiah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

likh paogi iske aage bhi bahot kuch tum
badhaao Saman thora aur likhne ki kwhaaish Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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kaali ghataaon ka hoga ghamand bhi choor choor
jab hogee mere mehboob ke zulfon ki numaaish Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
!!!
hehe ye sher kisi khaas k lie automatic dimag me aa gya tongue3
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bht acha likha hai tumne Saitaan no.1
daad daad  notworthy notworthy
Thnkuuuu... happy3
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2013, 04:49:49 AM »
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Thnkuu..

Ab pta nhi ye saazish kya thi..
Wahi jaane...
Aap puchhna to zara..



boss!!!!!!!!!!!  main abb kis se poochu.N. tumna nai bataa te mere ku toh kaun bataa te. ye saazish ka chhakkar kya hai baaa,poem kee baataa.N mere ooper se chalee gaee aaj .main apna surr khujaale ko baitha ho.N


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boss!!!!!!!!!!!  main abb kis se poochu.N. tumna nai bataa te mere ku toh kaun bataa te. ye saazish ka chhakkar kya hai baaa,poem kee baataa.N mere ooper se chalee gaee aaj .main apna surr khujaale ko baitha ho.N


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Hahahhahaahaha mai hi puchh k batati hu aapko...

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«Reply #13 on: December 10, 2013, 05:03:43 AM »
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Hahahhahaahaha mai hi puchh k batati hu aapko...

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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   tum na hass re hain . main yahaan pareeeeesha baitha ho.N sochh ko ke  ye kya pahelee bol ko deewana karr rahe tum. aaj sachhee main padh ko tumhaare poem haula bann gaya. zarur batana aur jaldee varan mera haazma kharaab hone me.N vakhat nahee lagta.aise situation me.N samje


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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2013, 05:50:13 AM »
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Umda likha hai aapne
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