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                          koi ye to pooche hum diwane kyon hain,
                          shama ki mehfil mein itne parwane kyon hain,

                          labon par tera naam machalta hai har waqt,
                          teri nigaah mein hum magar anjaane kyon hain,

                          bahaar-e-ishq mein khilta hai mohabbat kaise,
                          iss jazbe se magar hum begaane kyon hain,

                          milta nahin saughat-e-mohabbat gharib ko kabhi,
                          jahaan mein phir dekho itne fasaane kyon hain,

                          dil..dil se juda aata hai nazar marhoom...!
                          mohabbat ke yahaan phir itne kaarname kyon hain.!

JANAB SAJID SAHAB ,

 SALAAM ALAIKUM,

 AAPKE TANQEED KA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIA ,

 1. YE MERI SOCH HAI SHAYAD MAIN GHALAT BHI HO SAKTA HOON

     YANI MUJHE MOHABBAT KA EHSAAS TO HAI PAR IS KO PAWAAN KAISE CHADHAYE NAHIN MALOOM...MAZEED IS KE BAARE LOG APNA APNA KHYAL RAKHTE HONGE...PAR MERI SAMAJ SE YE BAHAS KA MUDDA NAHIN HAI..PESONAL HAI


2. PAISE KI ISS DUNIYA MEIN KOI IZHAAR-E- MOHBBAT GHARIB SE NAHIN KARTA...MERA MATLAB HAI SYMPATHIZED HOGA PAR QURBAN NAHIN KAREGAA KHUD KI AZDAWAJI ZINDAGI USKE LIYE
AUR YAHAAN GHAREEBI ZYADA HAI AUR MOHABBAT KA RATIO BHI USI TARAH HAI..YE SAWAAL MUJH MEIN KHUD SE UTHA KI SAMAJ KA NAZARIA TO MOHABBAT PAR PAISE KO TARJIH DETA HAI....MERA AISA MAANNA HAI
KISI AUR KA AUR NAZARIYA HO SAKTA HAI...BAHR HAAL MAIN ISS BARE APNI EK SOCH RAKHTA HOON..

3.YE BHI OPER KE SHER SE WABASTA HAI..ABB TO YE ALAM HAI RISHTE.NATE...AUR JO BHI RELATION HAI INSAANI KOI ATTACHEMENT NAHIN HAI..KHUDGHARZI HAI..USKE BAWAJOOD BHI ISHQ PARWAAN CHARTA HAI AAJ BHI..YAHAAN KARNAME MAINE POSITIVE SENSE MEIN LIYA HAI.. LEKIN AAP HALLAT KE HISAAB SE NEGATIVE BHI LE SAKTE HAI...JAISE DO MOHABBAT KARNE WALON..KO MAAR BHI DIYA JAATA HAI...SAY HONOUR KILLING ...ETC JAISA KI CASTE, RELIGION KA MUDDA LEKAR...
ISS SOCH PAR MAINE YE SHER KAHA HAI..


MAIN NAHIN JAANTA KI AAP KITNA ITTEFAQ RAKHTE HAI MERE  ISS KHAYAAL SE...PAR MAINE APNI NIJI SOCH KE MUTABIQ YE GHAZAL LIKHA HAI...HOSAKTA HAI GHAZAL MEIN KOI TECHNICAL GHALTI HO..MUJHE NAHIN PATA....PAR MAIN ISME KOITABDILI NAHIN KAROON GAA YE MERI KHAALIS SOCH HAI AUR KOI BAHAS KA MUDDA NAHIN..


ALLAH HAFIZ

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