kabhi unki bebasi kabhi apni kismat ko dekh roye

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 26, 2008, 03:49:19 PM
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kabhi unki bebasi kabhi apni kismat ko dekh roye
socha ki kitni khushiyan mili hamko aur kitne ashk roye

wo masum pyaar jo bachapan ka tha mera
saath dekha tha hamne gudia guddi ka mela
wahi beete palo ko yaadon mei sajoye

kabhi unki bebasi kabhi apni kismat ko dekh roye
socha ki kitni khushiyan mili hamko aur kitne ashk roye

wo baarish ki bunde wo mitti k bertan
wo priyon ki baatein wo alhard sa bachpan
wo bekhauf dard se raaton ko soye

kabhi unki bebasi kabhi apni kismat ko dekh roye
socha ki kitni khushiyan mili hamko aur kitne ashk roye

na naam uska aur na meri kahani
par har shaqs sunata apni apni jubani
kehte the ham the ek duje mein khoye

kabhi unki bebasi kabhi apni kismat ko dekh roye
socha ki kitni khushiyan mili hamko aur kitne ashk roye

wahi aaj pal yaad aata hai hamko
fiza mein ek saawan bhigo jaata hai hamko
na jaane kahan hamne wo din hain khoye

kabhi unki bebasi kabhi apni kismat ko dekh roye
socha ki kitni khushiyan mili hamko aur kitne ashk roye
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2008, 04:06:59 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai kaushikbhawna ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2008, 04:13:08 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai kaushikbhawna ji..Usual Smile

shukriya honeyrose ji

yaadon ko uski dil se bhulaya na gaya
bewafaai ko b uski mehfil mei hamse sunaya na gaya
dard bada hamara iskadar doston
rona to chaha dil ne par hamse roya b na gaya
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2008, 05:39:01 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Likha hai Bhawna Ji   Applause

Rone se ji halka ho jata hai
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2008, 09:28:38 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob bhawna
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2008, 02:58:12 PM »
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bahut ache bhawna
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2009, 03:52:41 PM »
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Kaushik Sahab, bahut hi achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Share karne ka shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2013, 09:42:29 AM »
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so cute,,,,,,,,,
but khoob likha,,,,
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