kashmakash....A.B

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                nazron ko meri uljha gaya koi.!
                mujhe dekh phir muskura gaya koi.!!

                bekhudi se meri pareshan kyon hai saaqi.!
                tere maykhane ki raah dikha gaya koi.!!

                hain rang hazaaron mohabbat ke jahan mein.!
                dil ko mere aashna bana gaya koi.!!

                karte hain mazaak dekho shahar ke log.!
                mujhe majnoo ka pataa bata gaya koi.!!

                buss ek tamanna thi bechain dil mein.!
                khawahishon ka pulinda thamaa gaya koi..!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 06:46:13 AM »
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bahut khoob Adil ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 07:15:51 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 10:09:58 PM »
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Good one Adil Ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2010, 08:59:23 PM »
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bahut khoob Adil ji...!!!

thank u klaskar ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2010, 07:36:43 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 03:33:35 AM »
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bht pyara likha hai adil ji aapne....mujhe last stanza bht pasand aaya ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2011, 05:49:35 PM »
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thank you rajesh ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2011, 05:50:33 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 03, 2010, 03:33:35 AM
bht pyara likha hai adil ji aapne....mujhe last stanza bht pasand aaya ji

shukriya kasak ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2011, 06:27:05 PM »
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khwahishon ka pulinda thama gaya koi
bujhte deepak ko agan laga gaya koi !

le ab na taras , bekhudi me
aise hi khab kuch saza gaya koi !

past ho gaye the , hausale kahin
jeene ki dhundli si ,ek aas fir se jaga gaya koi !

aasaon aur nirashaaon ke bhawar me fans chuke dil me
ummeedon ka daaman fir jagmaga gaya koi !
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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2011, 08:04:27 PM »
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khwahishon ka pulinda thama gaya koi
bujhte deepak ko agan laga gaya koi !

le ab na taras , bekhudi me
aise hi khab kuch saza gaya koi !

past ho gaye the , hausale kahin
jeene ki dhundli si ,ek aas fir se jaga gaya koi !

aasaon aur nirashaaon ke bhawar me fans chuke dil me
ummeedon ka daaman fir jagmaga gaya koi !
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thanx
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bura na maniyega --maine aapki jhakshhh post ko kharaab kar dia hai.Usual Smile

bahut achcha jawab hai aapka, thanks
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bahut khoob Adil ji...!!!

thank you
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2011, 12:08:24 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Bhaut Khoob Adil Ji..

Bahut Acha Likhte Ho Aap!!!

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