Kaun Nibha Paata Hai Rishte-Naato Ko Aajkal "Khwaish"

by khwaish on November 23, 2010, 10:20:58 AM
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Muskurahat Beh Naa Jaaye Aansuo Mein Aajkal
Meri Awaaz Kho Naa Jaaye Kehkaho mein Aajkal

Suuna Hai Kashtiyan Saahil Par Bhi Doobti Hai
Kuch Ajeeb Si guftagu Hai Saahilo Mein Aajkal!!!

Khud Ko Pehchaane Mein Ab Mushkile Hone Lagi
Bheed Itni Ho Gayi Hai Mehfilon Mein Aajkal!!

Agar Mujhse Puchte Ho Mera Haal-e-Dil To Jawaab bhi Suuno!!!
 Log Yahan Puchkar Bas Chal Guzarte Hai Aajkal!!!

Ashq Ka Katra Palkon Par Tehra Hai To Utrega Zaroor
Kaun Deta Hai Yahan Saath Umarbhar Ka Aajkal!!!

"Khwaish" Insaan To Yahan Insaan Hi Hai Koi Farishta Nahi!!!!
Main Puchta Hoon!!!Kaun Nibha Paata hai Rishte-Naato Ko Aajkal!!!!

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 10:30:10 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob khawish ji....
luved d 2nd & 5th one....
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2010, 11:11:08 AM »
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wah wah wah.../


khwaish sahab ...bahut khoob...

maja aa gaya ji..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 01:09:04 PM »
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"Khud ko pehchaane main ab mushkil hone lagi,
Bheed itni hogayi hai mehfilon main aaj kal.."

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai Dost..
Ek sachayi hai iss kalam main..
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 01:28:34 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob khawish ji....
luved d 2nd & 5th one....

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya, Tehhh Dilll Se Shukriya Aapka icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 02:19:25 PM »
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wah ! behad umda khwaish ji! bahaut khoobsurat khayaal hain aur kahe bhi khoob andaz se. shayar ki zamaane se bezaree aur ruswaee ka behtareen izhaar.

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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 02:28:43 PM »
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Khwaish Bhai.... Ek Kadwe Such se Ru-B-Ru Karaaya hai aapke In Alfaazon Ne.. Aapki Poem Humesha Hi Kuch sikhaati Hai.. aur Padhne wale ke Zahan me Ek Sawal chod Jati hai... Alfaazon Ke Zariye Ek Succhi Tasveer Yahan Pesh Ki Hai aapne...!!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Dil Se Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2010, 05:04:50 PM »
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Khwaish ji... umda aur behtreen bhi... bas aise hi likhte rehiye aur hume padhne dijiye... !

na sharm na laaz na haya na wo adaa hai ab dosto
ab to pyar ki numaayish ka baazaar reh gaya hai aajkal... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2010, 11:14:22 AM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Majid Bhai icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2010, 11:35:51 AM »
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wah wah wah.../


khwaish sahab ...bahut khoob...

maja aa gaya ji..

dher saari daad~


bahut bahut Shukriya Abhi Ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2010, 02:36:57 PM »
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khwaish jimujhe aap logon ke bich aane ka mouka dilwane ke liye shukriyaaa

mujhe rahi the king of way (rahi2001) ne bataya tha ki  aap se baat kar ke usne id khulwai hai
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2010, 05:13:06 PM »
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khwaish ji bht hi khubsurat peshkash hai ye aapki..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
dil me kai sawal chhod gaye ye sher aapke.......

iske reply me kuch likha hai chk kijiye ji....

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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2010, 07:48:51 AM »
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"Khud ko pehchaane main ab mushkil hone lagi,
Bheed itni hogayi hai mehfilon main aaj kal.."

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai Dost..
Ek sachayi hai iss kalam main..
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Bhai Rahim Aapne Jis Sher par Tawajju Diya Hai,Woh sher Apne Aap mein bahut Kuch Keh Raha Hai..Shayad Aap Samaj Bhi Gaye..

Aapka Tehhhhhhhhh Dilllllll Se Shukriya Bhai..

Bas...Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2010, 08:15:58 AM »
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wah ! behad umda khwaish ji! bahaut khoobsurat khayaal hain aur kahe bhi khoob andaz se. shayar ki zamaane se bezaree aur ruswaee ka behtareen izhaar.



Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Zarraji.Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aur bahut Khoob pehchana Aap Ne iss Kalaam Ke Dard Ko.. icon_flower

umeed Hai Aap Yuhi saath Dete Rahoge..
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«Reply #14 on: November 26, 2010, 08:21:22 AM »
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Khwaish Bhai.... Ek Kadwe Such se Ru-B-Ru Karaaya hai aapke In Alfaazon Ne.. Aapki Poem Humesha Hi Kuch sikhaati Hai.. aur Padhne wale ke Zahan me Ek Sawal chod Jati hai... Alfaazon Ke Zariye Ek Succhi Tasveer Yahan Pesh Ki Hai aapne...!!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Dil Se Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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