Kavita

by gajal on August 13, 2013, 02:02:26 AM
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Bhavon ki jheel me kud dhundhti
Hoon main ek kavita
Jab jagati hai chahat priy ko pane ki
Tab swapno ke aangan me konpalon si
Hai futati ek kavita
Jab dekhti hu maa  ki or
Tab uski mamta aur tyag dekhkar
Shraddha bhari aankho se chhalchhala
Hai uthati ek kavita
Jab thakati hu jeevan sangharsh me
Tab hatheliyon ko saamane rakh ke
rekhaon ke beech dhundhati
hoon main ek kavita.

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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2013, 02:06:58 AM »
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very nice.... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2013, 02:22:02 AM »
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Bhavon ki jheel me kud dhundhti
Hoon main ek kavita
Jab jagati hai chahat priy ko pane ki
Tab swapno ke aangan me konpalon si
Hai futati ek kavita
Jab dekhti hu maa  ki or
Tab uski mamta aur tyag dekhkar
Shraddha bhari aankho se chhalchhala
Hai uthati ek kavita
Jab thakati hu jeevan sangharsh me
Tab hatheliyon ko saamane rakh ke
rekhaon ke beech dhundhati
hoon main ek kavita.


V. Nice lines keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2013, 02:39:30 AM »
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WaaH Khoobsurat Kavita
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2013, 05:36:26 AM »
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khoooob Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2013, 08:41:44 AM »
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badee maasoom see kavita
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2013, 08:54:09 AM »
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good one............
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2013, 09:12:24 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2013, 01:42:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoooooooooob... dheron daad..
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2013, 03:11:47 PM »
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nice
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