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                            karoo.n   kahaan  se main  ibtedaa   poochhti  hai!
                            bekhudi  phir  zindagi  ka pataa poochhti hai!!


                            panne  taarikh  ke  bhi uljah kar rah jaayein!
                            sawaal   wo  sab   se  judaa   poochhti   hai!


                            badnaam  kar  rakha  hai  ghazlo.n ne azal se!
                            ho kar bezaar shamaa apni khataa poochhti hai!


                           lagaa  kar  dabish  adaa-e-husn, mohabbat  se!
                            bataa  tujh  mein  kitni  wafaa  poochhti hai!


                            rahna  mil  kar  hi  behtar  hai  saath  tere!
                            dil-o-jaan   se  aaj   kazaa   poochhti   hai!


                            girafat-e-naainsaafi   mein  hai  yaar  apnaa!
                            doo.n  kyaa  aziyat  ise,  sazaa poochhti hai!


                            huaa   kyaa   jo   shaakh-e-gul  khile  nahin!
                            guzarti   hui   perdesi  hawaa  poochhti  hai!


                            chaaragar  hi  laa-ilaaj  banaa  baithha  hai!
                            hogi kyaa haalat -e-maraz dawaa poochhti hai!


                            khabar  nahin  tujhe sheba,  apni  aabroo  ki!
                            abb  jaaoo.n  kahaan main hayaa poochhti hai!!
                            
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2014, 01:08:00 AM »
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behad khoobsurat peshkash sheba ji
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hazir hai
Rau baad mein
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2014, 01:14:47 AM »
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Kammaal ki Ghazal...
Bahut hi Umda Sheba Jee..
Bahut hi khoobsurati se aapne apne tajurbe ko alfaazon me piroya hai ...
Dheron dili daad qubool karein..
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2014, 01:44:17 AM »
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                            karoo.n   kahaan  se main  ibtedaa   poochhti  hai!
                            bekhudi  phir  zindagi  ka pataa poochhti hai!!

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                            panne  taarikh  ke  bhi uljah kar rah jaayein!
                            sawaal   wo  sab   se  judaa   poochhti   hai!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

                            badnaam  kar  rakha  hai  ghazlo.n ne azal se!
                            ho kar bezaar shamaa apni khataa poochhti hai!

Applause Applause Applause Applause
                            lagaa  kar  dabish  adaa-e-husn, mohabbat  se!
                            bataa  tujh  mein  kitni  wafaa  poochhti hai!

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                            rahna  mil  kar  hi  behtar  hai  saath  tere! Applause Applause Applause Applause
                            dil-o-jaan   se  aaj   kazaa   poochhti   hai!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
                            girafat-e-naainsaafi   mein  hai  yaar  apnaa!
                            doo.n  kyaa  aziyat  ise,  sazaa poochhti hai!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

                            huaa   kyaa   jo   shaakh-e-gul  khile  nahin!
                            guzarti   hui   perdesi  hawaa  poochhti  hai!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

                            chaaragar  hi  laa-ilaaj  banaa  baithha  hai!
                            hogaa kyaa haalat -e-maraz dawaa poochhti hai!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
                            khabar  nahin  tujhe sheba,  apni  aabroo  ki!
                            abb  jaaoo.n  kahaan main hayaa poochhti hai!!
                           

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause                         Nice one.
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2014, 02:26:00 AM »
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Waaah !!! Khoobsurat bemisaal peshkash !!! Har sher meiN ehsaas aur khayaal ke nasheb o faraaz mile.  Dheron daad aap ko Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Aur ye ek misra "bekhudi phir zindagi ka pataa poochhti hai" .... ye ek hi misra apne aap meiN hi ek ghazal hai !! Baakamaal qalaam par daad Sheba ji !   Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

PS : aur lagta hai aap bhi "taweel ghazal likhne was on ki jamaat meiN shamil ho raheen hain.  read2 read2   Ji welcome laughing4  laughing4
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2014, 02:41:29 AM »
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karoo.n   kahaan  se main  ibtedaa   poochhti  hai!
 bekhudi  phir  zindagi  ka pataa poochhti hai!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

 panne  taarikh  ke  bhi uljah kar rah jaayein!
  sawaal   wo  sab   se  judaa   poochhti   hai!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

 badnaam  kar  rakha  hai  ghazlo.n ne azal se!
 ho kar bezaar shamaa apni khataa poochhti hai!
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard mujhe to mere apno ne badnaam kiya
 
lagaa  kar  dabish  adaa-e-husn, mohabbat  se!
  bataa  tujh  mein  kitni  wafaa  poochhti hai!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
  rahna  mil  kar  hi  behtar  hai  saath  te
dil-o-jaan   se  aaj   kazaa   poochhti   hai!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
girafat-e-naainsaafi   mein  hai  yaar  apnaa!
doo.n  kyaa  aziyat  ise,  sazaa poochhti hai!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
huaa   kyaa   jo   shaakh-e-gul  khile  nahin!
 guzarti   hui   perdesi  hawaa  poochhti  hai!
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard dubai ki hawaaa

 chaaragar  hi  laa-ilaaj  banaa  baithha  hai!
 hogaa kyaa haalat -e-maraz dawaa poochhti hai!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

 khabar  nahin  tujhe sheba,  apni  aabroo  ki!
 abb  jaaoo.n  kahaan main hayaa poochhti hai!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

waah waah bohut umda peshkash dheroooo daaaaaaaaddddd kabool kare
                           
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2014, 08:36:41 AM »
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                            karoo.n   kahaan  se main  ibtedaa   poochhti  hai!
                            bekhudi  phir  zindagi  ka pataa poochhti hai!!


                            panne  taarikh  ke  bhi uljah kar rah jaayein!
                            sawaal   wo  sab   se  judaa   poochhti   hai!


                            badnaam  kar  rakha  hai  ghazlo.n ne azal se!
                            ho kar bezaar shamaa apni khataa poochhti hai!


                            lagaa  kar  dabish  adaa-e-husn, mohabbat  se!
                            bataa  tujh  mein  kitni  wafaa  poochhti hai!


                            rahna  mil  kar  hi  behtar  hai  saath  tere!
                            dil-o-jaan   se  aaj   kazaa   poochhti   hai!


                            girafat-e-naainsaafi   mein  hai  yaar  apnaa!
                            doo.n  kyaa  aziyat  ise,  sazaa poochhti hai!


                            huaa   kyaa   jo   shaakh-e-gul  khile  nahin!
                            guzarti   hui   perdesi  hawaa  poochhti  hai!


                            chaaragar  hi  laa-ilaaj  banaa  baithha  hai!
                            hogaa kyaa haalat -e-maraz dawaa poochhti hai!


                            khabar  nahin  tujhe sheba,  apni  aabroo  ki!
                            abb  jaaoo.n  kahaan main hayaa poochhti hai!!

Wah Wah Kyaa Khoobsoorat Gazal Likhee Hai Sheba Sahiba Dheron Daad. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2014, 12:23:13 PM »
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वाह....वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत बहुत बहुत खूब.....

हजारों हजारों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद....

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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2014, 01:45:19 PM »
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 karoo.n   kahaan  se main  ibtedaa   poochhti  hai!
  bekhudi  phir  zindagi  ka pataa poochhti hai!!


  panne  taarikh  ke  bhi uljah kar rah jaayein!
   sawaal   wo  sab   se  judaa   poochhti   hai!

huaa   kyaa   jo   shaakh-e-gul  khile  nahin!
guzarti   hui   perdesi  hawaa  poochhti  hai!



WAAH WAAH BOHUT HI KHOOB GHAZAL SHEBA JEE
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2014, 02:17:54 PM »
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Waah!!
bahut achhe!!
Rau Hazir he!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2014, 02:29:00 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2014, 04:57:48 PM »
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ek shaandaar pesh kash waah
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2014, 06:57:20 PM »
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Sheba ji bahut hi umdaa gazal kahi aapne... har sher apne aap me puri ghazal hai bahut umdaa...
rau pesh kar raha hun kubool kijiye...

Zamane me ruswayi ka tamasha kar ke,
mohabbar ranaayi ka pata poochti hai,
Rindon ki mehfil me aakar bejaa hi yun,
Saaki meykhane ka pata poochti hai,
Mere gham o chiraag ko roshan karke,
Lau khud roshni ka pata poochti hai,
Ujaad kar gulistaan ik pyara sa kahin,
Fiza aaj bahar ka pata poochti hai,
Meri mehfilon ki majboori to dekhe koi,
veerani ab mehfil ka pata poochti hai...
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2014, 01:18:02 PM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khooooooooooob sheba ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2014, 09:01:33 PM »
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behad khoobsurat peshkash sheba ji
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hazir hai
Rau baad mein


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