khoon bhi laal hai sharaab bhi....Premdeep

by premdeep on December 04, 2013, 04:19:03 PM
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Saaki ek jaam aur pila dete
Todi bewafai bhi usme mila dete

khoon bhi laal hai sharaab bhi
Rang koi isko to naya dete

Roona nahi aata gar gam pe mere
To ek baar bas muskura dete

Mohobaat ka to katl kar hi diya
Mere armaanon ko to dafna dete

daaman ke phool bhi murjha gaye
kaise hatheli par gulaab khila dete

Door se kya kahun dil ki baat
Gar hote paas to bata dete

Apne zakhm chupa kar rakhta hun
Hota jo koi apna to dikha dete

Apne gam mein to pee li bahut hai
Ek jaam apni khushi ka pila dete

Jane ko kehte ho humko mehkhane se
yaaron bahar ka raasta to dikha dete
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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2013, 04:22:27 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob premdeep ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2013, 05:40:16 PM »
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bahut khoob
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Nicee onee...
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2013, 05:52:34 PM »
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Saaki ek jaam aur pila dete
Todi bewafai bhi usme mila dete

khoon bhi laal hai sharaab bhi
Rang koi isko to naya dete

Roona nahi aata gar gam pe mere
To ek baar bas muskura dete

waah waah zabardast likha hai prem jee

Ek Rau to banta hai.

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«Reply #5 on: December 04, 2013, 06:03:20 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2013, 06:18:42 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2013, 07:08:31 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on December 04, 2013, 04:19:03 PM
Saaki ek jaam aur pila dete
Todi bewafai bhi usme mila dete

khoon bhi laal hai sharaab bhi
Rang koi isko to naya dete

Roona nahi aata gar gam pe mere
To ek baar bas muskura dete

Mohobaat ka to katl kar hi diya
Mere armaanon ko to dafna dete

daaman ke phool bhi murjha gaye
kaise hatheli par gulaab khila dete

Door se kya kahun dil ki baat
Gar hote paas to bata dete

Apne zakhm chupa kar rakhta hun
Hota jo koi apna to dikha dete

Apne gam mein to pee li bahut hai
Ek jaam apni khushi ka pila dete

Jane ko kehte ho humko mehkhane se
yaaron bahar ka raasta to dikha dete

naaaaaaice
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2013, 07:40:42 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2013, 09:02:12 AM »
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bahut khoob
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thanks to all for appreciation
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Waaaaaaaaah zabardast khayaal aur zabardasttttttttt kalaam premdeep ji... sabhi ashaar dil ko chhoo gaye... bottle ka nasha aa raha hai is mein... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #12 on: December 07, 2013, 12:52:23 AM »
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