KHUD KO KHUD SE JUDA KARTI CHALI GAI

by deepika_divya on April 04, 2009, 07:21:40 AM
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SOCHA THA KUCH LIKHUNGI APNE BAARE MEA
FIR PATA NAHI KYA LIKHTI CHALI GAI'
DOOND RAHI THI MEA APNA AK NAYA RASTA
FIR KYUN ANDHERO MEA KHOTI CHALI GAI

UTAYA THA KALAM , KUCH YAAD SANJO KAR
LIKHNE LAGI JAB, UN YAADON MEIN KHO GAI
BHUL GAI THI YEA YAAD MERE DUSMAN HAI
MITANA CHAHA, PAR ANJANE MEA SAMETHI CHALI GAI

FIR KIYA KUCH LIKHNA SURU , DOBARA SE TAKIR KO
KYA PATA THA, TAKDIR MERI MUJHE TOKAR MAR GAI
SAWARNA CHAHA FIR MAINE APNI KISMAT KO THO
MAIN KHUD SE KHUD KO JUDA KARTI CHALI GAI
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2009, 07:25:40 AM »
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Applause Applause

Waah waah bahut achhe sophi..

Good work sweetie..
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2009, 07:28:03 AM »
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THANK U SWEETHEART!
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2009, 07:29:10 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2009, 03:12:56 PM »
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sophi ji bahut khub
ek baat kehna chahunga ki jab yaado mai dub kar likha jaata hai
to kalam bhi siyahi(ink) ki jagah khun ugalati
on yaado ko yaad karne se accha hai bhul jaana kyunki
jab bhi wo aati hai aksar rulla jaati hai




kismat bhi ab to so chuki hai
in ankho se nind bhi kho chiki hai
apne dhokho ka afsos n karna yaaro
is dil ko to ab tanha rahne ki aadat ho chuki hai.

Don't maint
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2009, 04:15:09 PM »
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Thanks Amar for ur comments.

Nothing to mind here. Hum jo bhi likhte hai kabhi kabhi woh hamrari zindgai ka hissa nahi hota ...

Very very Nice written by U too
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2009, 12:46:48 PM »
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Bahut Ache Sophi..Nice One Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2009, 12:51:06 PM »
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Thank U so much Khwaish Ji...
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2009, 05:45:58 AM »
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Thanks Amar for ur comments.

Nothing to mind here. Hum jo bhi likhte hai kabhi kabhi woh hamrari zindgai ka hissa nahi hota ...

Very very Nice written by U too
sophi ji mera aisa koi matlab nhi tha agar aapko hart hua to i am very very sorry kya kare dear kabhi kabhi isa lagata hai ki likha wahi jaata hai jo houta hai chaliye aapki baat maan lete hai or jo hum maante the usse bhul jaate hai
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 05:53:23 AM »
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sophi ji mera aisa koi matlab nhi tha agar aapko hart hua to i am very very sorry kya kare dear kabhi kabhi isa lagata hai ki likha wahi jaata hai jo houta hai chaliye aapki baat maan lete hai or jo hum maante the usse bhul jaate hai

Awwwww.

Sachi Main mujeh bura nahi laga.. Dont feel bad.. N no need to say sorry dear. Its fine . Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2009, 06:00:06 AM »
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chaliye sunkar accha laga warna bura lagata hai yaar ki kisi ko apni wajah se hart ho. apke jawab ka sukariya dear


aapke liye
only for u

ruksati par duniya ke liye
tasvir meri mahfil mai rakhana
magar gujarish hai tujse a mere dost
tu jinda mujhe apne dil mai rakhana.

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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2009, 06:06:17 AM »
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U r welcome

Are wah Its a sweet one by u...

HHMMMMMM

Rakhenge tujhe Dost hum apne dil mea
Mere liye apne Dil mea bhi jagah khali rakhna'
koshish karenge hum bhi tujhe khushi dene ki
Bas tum apne gumo ko b humse alag na rakhna
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2009, 06:15:44 AM »
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U r welcome

Are wah Its a sweet one by u...

HHMMMMMM

Rakhenge tujhe Dost hum apne dil mea
Mere liye apne Dil mea bhi jagah khali rakhna'
koshish karenge hum bhi tujhe khushi dene ki
Bas tum apne gumo ko b humse alag na rakhna

aapki dosti ka sukriya lagata hai aap humare un dosto mai se ek hai jo kehte hai hume ki

dil se phool bankar hum mehakna jaante hai
muskurake hum har gum bhulana jaante hai
log khush hote hai humse kyunki
binaa mile hum har rista nibhaana jaante hai.

thank's ones again dear
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2009, 06:29:17 AM »
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My pleasure! Usual Smile

Nice sharing Amar!
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2009, 06:31:43 AM »
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My pleasure! Usual Smile

Nice sharing Amar!
thank's dear
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