Khud se Ummeedon ka Diya jalaye rakhna

by @kaash on March 13, 2010, 09:01:21 AM
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frnds yahan poet ne poem me ye likhne ki koshish ki hai ki everything depends on us,mainly our attitude.It is very obvious that we get hurt by other ppl but we shud not hurt ourself

toot jaye dil kisi se khud ko tootne se bachaye rakhna
mere dost khud se ummeeden ka diya jalaye rakhna

zindagi me udaasiyan aur khushiyan nazariyun ka khel hai
khud ko udaas rakh jhuthi hansi se chehre ko bachaye rakhna

mere dost khud se ummeedon ka diya jalaye rakhna

nahi shikwa rakhna nahi shikwon me zyada gum rahna
bhool jana khushi se,khud ko har khushi dilate rahna

mere dost khud se ummeedon ka diya jalaye rakhna
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2010, 09:16:56 AM »
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VERY NICE KAASHJI. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2010, 09:27:00 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji

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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2010, 08:44:15 PM »
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Wah bahut hi khoob Kaash ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.lovely creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2010, 02:47:23 AM »
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Waaah Kash ji, badi hi khoobsurat poem likhi hai. Bada achha falsafa pesh kiya hai. Nice creation, shandaar.
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