Khuda ka Shukr

by drpandey on February 15, 2010, 02:23:52 PM
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Khumar khwab khalish marhala pighal to gaya  
Tamam azm mera dar badar bikhar to gaya.

Tah-e-girdaab se toofan ka safar kar to liye,    
Ufook dekh tera hausla nikal to gaya.
               
Fitna-e-akl khirad kyoun tujhe maayusi hai,      
Khuda ka shukr mera karwan gujar to gaya.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad  
  


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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2010, 02:41:01 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sir
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2010, 05:16:21 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey sahab jadeed shayari ka ek shandaar namuna hain ye aapke sher. Alfaaz ka purkashish istemaal karke khayalaat ko bahut behtreen tareeqe se pesh kiya hai. Nice creation. 
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Khumar khwab khalish marhala pighal to gaya 
Tamam azm mera dar badar bikhar to gaya.

Tah-e-girdaab se toofan ka safar kar to liye,   
Ufook dekh tera hausla nikal to gaya.
               
Fitna-e-akl khirad kyoun tujhe maayusi hai,     
Khuda ka shukr mera karwan gujar to gaya.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad 
 

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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2010, 08:59:44 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey sahab jadeed shayari ka ek shandaar namuna hain ye aapke sher. Alfaaz ka purkashish istemaal karke khayalaat ko bahut behtreen tareeqe se pesh kiya hai. Nice creation. 
Shukriya Riyaz Sahab, bahot bahot inayat ki jadeed shayari pasand farmaya aur apni duvaon se nawaza.
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2010, 09:26:09 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob likha aapne Pandey ji.excellent.bahut achi lagi .keep up the good work.hats off
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2010, 10:25:37 AM »
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 Applause Applause
behad umda likha hai pandey ji aapne...daad kabool karen
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2010, 12:26:43 PM »
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Applause Applause
behad umda likha hai pandey ji aapne...daad kabool karen
Bekarar Ji,
Azhad Shukriya aapki nawazis ke liye, aapne pasand farmaya aapki bahot bahot inayat.
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2010, 12:29:21 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob likha aapne Pandey ji.excellent.bahut achi lagi .keep up the good work.hats off
Madhu Ji bahot bahot shukriya, aapko lines pasand aai aur aapne meri hausla afzai kiya..
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2010, 12:32:35 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sir
Thanks Rishi Ji, aapki vo hindi poem mujhe bar bar yaad aati hai jiska message tha "NO SMOKING"
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2010, 04:16:24 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Umda Peshkash Pandey ji !. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2010, 06:39:40 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Umda Peshkash Pandey ji !. Bahoot Khoob!
Sophi Ji Pasand farmaney aur himmat afzai ke liye azhad Shukriya.
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2010, 05:32:48 PM »
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bahut khoob dr sahab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2010, 04:25:50 PM »
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bahut khoob dr sahab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Pasand farmaney ke liye shukriya Khamosh ji.....
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