khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

by guhar on January 08, 2010, 06:28:59 PM
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toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2010, 06:48:19 PM »
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Good one Guhar Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 11:51:26 PM »
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toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.
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mrZakram
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2010, 03:17:07 AM »
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bohot khoob guhar ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2010, 08:34:54 AM »
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Wah too good Guhar ji,lovely creation . icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2010, 02:36:56 PM »
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sabhi kaa bahot bahot teh-e-dil se shikriyaa....
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2010, 02:50:57 PM »
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Nice poem Gohar ji which is based on fact.
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guhar
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2010, 03:04:40 PM »
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Nice poem Gohar ji which is based on fact.
hum pehle to har shajar se ,
jasbaaton ko todte hein,
fir ik shabdon ki mala,
unhe hole se pirote hein.

dhnyaawaad riyaaz ji.
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2010, 03:05:17 PM »
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toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.
kya baat hai guhar ji....

toot ta hai shisha jo
tootne tak hi chilata hai

par kisi ka khawab ka tootna
umer bar tak roolata hai...
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2010, 03:06:47 PM »
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kya baat hai guhar ji....

toot ta hai shisha jo
tootne tak hi chilata hai

par kisi ka khawab ka tootna
umer bar tak roolata hai...
shukriya..cara.
bahot khoob.
maasha allah!!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2010, 04:08:03 PM »
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good one Guhar.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Seeshe ka tootna sab ko nazar aata hai
Dil toot-ta hai tou kisi ko nazar nahi aata

toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2010, 11:12:13 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Guhar Ji And And Nice Response Cara Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2010, 01:02:12 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2010, 02:36:45 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Guharji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Toothte Hai Jab Khwaab,
Tab Hum Tukhdo mein Bat Jaate Hai..
Yeh Zindagi Hi Kuch Aisi Hai
Jeene Ki Aarzoo mein Hum Mar Jaate Hai...
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