<>*Khwabon ki duniya se*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 19, 2010, 11:22:41 AM
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<>*Khwabon ki duniya se*<>
khwabon ki duniya se main bahar jo aati
kuch tumko sunati kuch to gungunati
nadiya ki rawani me main behti jati
kabhi jhumti to kabhi ithlati

pawan ko bana kar apna humsafar
main roz tumhara gulshan mehkati
aankhon  ko nahin jo man ko lubhata
wo sunder chitra me zindagi ka sajati
khwabon ki duniya se main bahar jo aati

kabhi kisi mod pe jo tum takra jate
tumhe dekh kar main khushi se jhum jaati
baarish ki pehli boondon ki taraha
tumhare man me main sheetalta laati
khwabon ki duniya se main bahar jo aati

kabhi tez dhuup me tumjo chalte
pedon ki ghani chaanw ban jati
thoda bhi na tadapne deti tumko
main tumko wo sukun pahonchati
khwabon ki duniya se main bahar jo aati

lekin main to khoi rahi bas inme
jhute sapne jhuti ye khokhli umange
inme behti rahi main hara pal
nahin bacha ab hath me jeewan
khwabon ki duniya se bahar jo aati
kaash kuch to tumhare liye main kar jati.......
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 11:28:16 AM »
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wah wah kya gaheri baat kardi aapne to anamika ji.... bahot hi umda peshkash ki hai aapne to aaj.... itna gaherai se kaise likh pati ho aap Huh??
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 12:23:03 PM »
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Anamika Ji..Lajawaab!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kya Kehne Aapke..Aapki kalam, Apaki soch-Samaj ko mera Salaam!!!

Jawaab mein Kuch Likhne Ki Gustaaki kar raha Hoon..

Khwaabo Ki Duniya Se Bahaar Aana Kya Zaroori tha
Khud Ko Yuh Haqeeqat Ka Saamna karana Kya zaroori Tha.

Khule Aasman Ke neeche kabhi saans Lekar To Dekho
Khud ko baand Kar Yuh Tanhai Ko gale Lagaana Kya Zaroori tha

yeh sach hai ke pyaar mein khud par bhi koi zor nahi rehta
par khud ko Hosh mein laana Kya Zaroori tha...

Deewangi Ke Aalam mein Deewane Hue To Deewane Hi sahi!!!!
baar-baar khud Ko Mann Ke Aaene Mein Utaarna Kya Zaroori tha..

Nazrein nazron se mil jaate to Kuch Sukoon Mile iss dil ko
Yaar Nazrein milte hi Inn palkon Ko Jhukaana Kya zaroori tha

"Khwaish" Ko Kisi Se Kuch paane Ki Khwaish hi nahi
Par Jab Paas baithe Ho,To Phir Eh Mere Huzzor!!
 Kya Door jaana Zaroori tha
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2010, 12:36:27 PM »
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khwaish jiiiiii.........ufffffffffffff......

kya kahun main aapko....shukriya dhanyawad thnx ya aur kuch mujhe samjh nahin aarha......

itna pyara replyyyyy.......laga jaise wakai achcha likha hai...warna aap sirf taali bajake chale jate ho...
to adhura sa lagta hai aapka reply......

humne bhi kuch likha hai aapke replyme....dekhiye ji...

Tumse duur jane ki hasrat na thi
Iss dil ko fir kuch samjhane ki hasrat na thi
Bahek jana chahte the hum yunhi pyaar me
Mujhko tere pyaar k siwa aur kisi baat ki hasrat na thi…

Tumko dekha to laga tha k tum hi mere apne ho
Par tab tumhe apna banana ki koi hasrat na thi
Zindagi ka safar to chala jar aha tha bas yunhi
Tu sath me rahe mere aisi bhi koi hasrat na thi

Sath mila tera to ab kya kahun k kya hua
Ab to dil ko mere aur koi hasrat na rahi
Zindagi jhumkee gana chahti hai surr kai tarah k
Ise ab besure geeton ki koi hasrat na rahi…….
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2010, 01:38:57 PM »
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mai kuch nahi likh sakta aaj to meri bolti hi band kar di aap dono neeeeeeeeeeeee
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2010, 02:15:33 PM »
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khwaish jiiiiii.........ufffffffffffff......

kya kahun main aapko....shukriya dhanyawad thnx ya aur kuch mujhe samjh nahin aarha......

itna pyara replyyyyy.......laga jaise wakai achcha likha hai...warna aap sirf taali bajake chale jate ho...
to adhura sa lagta hai aapka reply......

humne bhi kuch likha hai aapke replyme....dekhiye ji...

Tumse duur jane ki hasrat na thi
Iss dil ko fir kuch samjhane ki hasrat na thi
Bahek jana chahte the hum yunhi pyaar me
Mujhko tere pyaar k siwa aur kisi baat ki hasrat na thi…

Tumko dekha to laga tha k tum hi mere apne ho
Par tab tumhe apna banana ki koi hasrat na thi
Zindagi ka safar to chala jar aha tha bas yunhi
Tu sath me rahe mere aisi bhi koi hasrat na thi

Sath mila tera to ab kya kahun k kya hua
Ab to dil ko mere aur koi hasrat na rahi
Zindagi jhumkee gana chahti hai surr kai tarah k
Ise ab besure geeton ki koi hasrat na rahi…….


Kya kehne Anamika Ji..Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Itne Pyaar Lafz,Itne Khoobsurat jazbaat!!! Waah ji Waah

Kuch Hum Bhi Keh dete Hai....

Mujhse door jaana chaaho to bhi jaa nahi paoge
jitna door jaana chaaho, utna hi kareeb aaoge..

jab bhi meri yaaadein tadpaayengi
gham mein Reh kar bhi muskuraaoge..

Jaanta Hoon Mukadar mein Kahi Nahi likha Hai Ke hum milenge
Par Apni Kismat ko Apni duawon se Aazmaoge...

Jab Bhi Bhari mehfil Mein kahin Bhi Mera Naam-o-Nihsaan Naa Ho
Uss Mehfil mein Khud Ko Humesha Tanha Paaoge...

Dil Ki Veeraniyon Ko Jab Mehsoos Karoge!!!
Yakeenan Tanhai mein Mera Naam Guungunaoge...

"Khwaish" Dua karta Hai
 Zindagi ka Yeh Gulshan Humesha Abaad rahe!!!!
Har Pehar, Har Ghadi, Har waqt!!!!!
Apne Aangan Ko Pyaar Bhare Phoolon Se Mehakaoge..

Mujhse Jitna Door jaana Chaaho,
Utna Hi  Kareeb Aaoge....
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 04:40:58 PM »
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Kasak jee Aadaab........ Aapke ahsaas bahut khoob hai..
aur is baar aapne bahut badiya tarike se pesh kiya hai...

massom se khayaaloN ke liye daad....
Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye...


MaiN khayaaloN khawaab ki mehfile na baqadre shouk saja saka
Teri ek nazar ke saath hi mere sab irade badal gaye....

Sang By Gulam Ali Sahab
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2010, 05:16:35 PM »
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ACHCHI MEHAFIL SAJEE HAI.BAHUT KHOOB!
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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2010, 01:54:23 AM »
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bahut khoob Kasak ji... bahut achchi kavita likhi hai aapne...!!!

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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2010, 06:05:08 AM »
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Kya kehne Anamika Ji..Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Itne Pyaar Lafz,Itne Khoobsurat jazbaat!!! Waah ji Waah

Kuch Hum Bhi Keh dete Hai....

Mujhse door jaana chaaho to bhi jaa nahi paoge
jitna door jaana chaaho, utna hi kareeb aaoge..

jab bhi meri yaaadein tadpaayengi
gham mein Reh kar bhi muskuraaoge..

Jaanta Hoon Mukadar mein Kahi Nahi likha Hai Ke hum milenge
Par Apni Kismat ko Apni duawon se Aazmaoge...

Jab Bhi Bhari mehfil Mein kahin Bhi Mera Naam-o-Nihsaan Naa Ho
Uss Mehfil mein Khud Ko Humesha Tanha Paaoge...

Dil Ki Veeraniyon Ko Jab Mehsoos Karoge!!!
Yakeenan Tanhai mein Mera Naam Guungunaoge...

"Khwaish" Dua karta Hai
 Zindagi ka Yeh Gulshan Humesha Abaad rahe!!!!
Har Pehar, Har Ghadi, Har waqt!!!!!
Apne Aangan Ko Pyaar Bhare Phoolon Se Mehakaoge..

Mujhse Jitna Door jaana Chaaho,
Utna Hi  Kareeb Aaoge....



shukriya khwaish ji for this excellent reply.....

par ab hum aapse kuch puch rahe hain jawab dijiyega jarur....

Hum wahan se durr jana hi kyu chahenge
Jahan pyaar ki aisi barsaat barasti ho love4

Wahn kaise bhala udaas reh payenge
Jahan  har pal muskurane ki baat hoti ho Giggle

Wahan  kaise tanha ho jayenge
Jahan aap jaise dost aur saathi ho angel11

Kyun aapko hum yaad karenge
Jab aap hamare sath hi har pal ho love9

Dil me veerani k badal kaise aayenge sunny
Jab man me itni umange jagi ho

Tanha kabhi hum kyun kar honge
Jab ye YO ki mehfil yun hi saji hui ho….. Winking

bolo bolo.. tell tell.. khwaish ji... NaNaNa
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2010, 06:08:30 AM »
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Kasak jee Aadaab........ Aapke ahsaas bahut khoob hai..
aur is baar aapne bahut badiya tarike se pesh kiya hai...

massom se khayaaloN ke liye daad....
Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye...


MaiN khayaaloN khawaab ki mehfile na baqadre shouk saja saka
Teri ek nazar ke saath hi mere sab irade badal gaye....

Sang By Gulam Ali Sahab


shukriya parwaz ji ise pasand karne ka...aur hum ekhushi hui k ye lekhni me aapko koi galti nazar na aai ..

thnx ji..hume hamri galtiyan batate rahiyega.....
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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2010, 06:09:12 AM »
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ACHCHI MEHAFIL SAJEE HAI.BAHUT KHOOB!

shukriya mamta ji...ise pasand karne k liye
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2010, 06:10:30 AM »
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bahut khoob Kasak ji... bahut achchi kavita likhi hai aapne...!!!

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aapse aise reply ki ummeed nahin thi kapil ji....... sad5
dil tod diya aapne..... sad11
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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2010, 09:03:17 AM »
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wow kasak n khwaish ji....
alfas nahi he tarif ke liye.......


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«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2010, 01:37:01 PM »
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kasak ji ......

apki ye post dekh ke ek ladki ki yaad aa gayi.........

wo behtreen shayra he........jane ab wo wesa kyu nahi likhti he....apki is post me use dekh raha hu me.....

good one
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