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"Khwaish" Ki Nazmein jab Tujhe Rulaaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by khwaish on October 12, 2010, 08:51:18 AM

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«Reply #15 on: October 12, 2010, 12:30:30 PM »

aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai aap sab ne.. Raahi ji, Abhi ji, Kasak ji aur Rahim bhai... bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: "Khwaish" Ki Nazmein jab Tujhe Rulaaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #16 on: October 12, 2010, 01:56:36 PM »

you r just awesome man, i just love your poetries icon_salut


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Re: "Khwaish" Ki Nazmein jab Tujhe Rulaaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #17 on: October 12, 2010, 02:39:32 PM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 12, 2010, 09:46:52 AM

lajawaab likha he khwaish bhaiii... bahut khoob.....

sach kahu eisa bahut kam hota he ki main kuchh padhkar usme ram jaun....aaj apko padhkar kai dino bad khoya sa mehsoos hua..achha laga~

mashallah kya coordination he words kaa...maja aa gaya padh kar~

kuchh koshish karta hun apni taraf se galtiyon ko sabhi maaf kijiyega~

jab saanse bojhal ho jayen
nain geele se itraayen
palko ko jab saanjh na soojhe
jab ankh ko moti sehlayen
jab jab man ki nabz ruke
or sawan tanha tadpaaye
pyar patjhad ke mausam ka
jab man ke patte le jaaye
dil ko koi raah na soojhe
bairan sheesha chillaye
tab tab mere geet suna karna
chup na rehena.... suno...sunooooo mujhe likha karna

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Abhi ji,Teh Dilllllllllll Se Shukriya Aapka,Jo Aapne Itni Izzat Bakshi..

Aur Kya Kahen, Aap bahut Hi khooooob Likha.. Clapping Smiley

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower


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Re: "Khwaish" Ki Nazmein jab Tujhe Rulaaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #18 on: October 12, 2010, 04:31:16 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on October 12, 2010, 11:01:23 AM

Salaam Dost..

Main kho gaya apki iss nazm main..Just tooooooooooooooo good yaar..Baar baar parrne ko jee karta hai..Bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khubsoorat..!
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Khush rahiye.!

Bhai Rahim Aapka Tehhhhhhhhhh Dillllllllll Se Shukriya..

Yaar Aap Baar-Baar Padhe,mujhe aur kya chahiye..

Bas yuhi humesha saath dete rahiyega..


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«Reply #19 on: October 12, 2010, 05:26:42 PM »

kwaish ji. kasakji.raheembhai.hridayji abhiji,parwazji aap sab lajawab shayer h .main to soch bhi nahi sakti k kabhi itna achha likh paungi Keep writting


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«Reply #20 on: October 12, 2010, 06:51:03 PM »

aaap BAHUT ACHCHA KAHTI HAIN AISE HI KAHTI RAHIYE


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«Reply #21 on: October 13, 2010, 12:40:43 PM »

Shukriya Kapil Dost aur Yasmeen jee..!


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Re: "Khwaish" Ki Nazmein jab Tujhe Rulaaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

«Reply #22 on: December 29, 2010, 07:26:32 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on October 12, 2010, 11:19:13 AM

Teri nazmon main parr kar dard “Khwaish’,
Mujse kuch likha nahin jata..

Dard maine bhi bahaut paya hai ae dost,
Bas kuch chand lavzon main who jataya nahin jata..

Mujhe bana le apna phir se, bahaut tanha hoon main,
Ae Zalim, apnon ko yun sataya nahin jata..

Naam tera labon par aye na aye, dil main sada rehta hai,
Mohobat bahaut karta hoon tujse, bas mujse dikhaya nahin jata..

‘Khamosh’ ilteja karta hai tujse kay laut aa aye Zalim,
Dekh tu, dilon ko yun rulaya nahin jata..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash!!!


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«Reply #23 on: December 29, 2010, 07:31:21 AM »

bahut khoob khwaishji.


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«Reply #24 on: August 24, 2012, 07:01:45 AM »

Bohat Bohat hi badiya!!!! Sach mein aankhon mein aasu la diya aap ne! Is se bad kar aap ki rachna ki tareef nahi ho sakti!!!!

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