kitna bharosa hai mujhe

by samnoj on February 08, 2008, 02:39:26 PM
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nafrato ne raaste me rok rakkha hai mujhe
main muhabbat hu tere dil tak pahunchna hai mujhe

tum to ek taza fasana ho tumhari dhoom hai
main purani dasta hu koun sunta hai mujhe

jayeza achi trah le lu main apne aap ka
aaina-khano me kuch der aur rukna hai mujhe

is qutub khane ke main hu ek bosid kitab
padhne wala farsh per beshak patakta hai mujhe

us ko mujh per aaj tak aaya nahi hai aitbar
ai mateen ek dost per kitna bharosa hai mujhe
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2008, 02:57:23 PM »
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wowww kya baat hai..bahot acha laga mujhe..
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2008, 02:58:45 PM »
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thnx punam
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2008, 03:17:23 PM »
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wah sam kaya baat hai... dil ko chu gai apki kavita.. bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2008, 03:21:09 PM »
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nice one sam
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2008, 03:26:08 PM »
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Kya kahun? Waah Kahun, Waah Waah Kahun, ya Waah Waah Waah kahun Huh?

Qatal hai bus... Usual Smile

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"jayeza achi trah le lu main apne aap ka
aaina-khano me kuch der aur rukna hai mujhe

is qutub khane ke main hu ek bosid kitab
padhne wala farsh per beshak patakta hai mujhe"
Yeh lines to bus
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2008, 07:59:56 AM »
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thanx pooja ji, sanya n shikha ji

kisi ne kuch nahi likha
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2008, 09:55:56 AM »
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kahan gaye woh lamhe jab
kisi ki zindagi mein ehem hua karte thhe
woh pal jismein
doston ko ird gird mehsoos kiya karte thhe
har kisi ki zindagi mein kyon aisa hota hai
jab koi bhi apna uske saath nahi hota hai
hui hai kuch aisi, naainsaaafi humaare saath
tanha baithe hain hum apne dil per rakh kar haath
bharosa jo rakhte hain toh dil mein gila nahi
miley kisi bhi shaks ko aisa sila nahi
unn haseen lamhon ko yaad karte shab guzar jaati hai
labon par halki si ek hasi aakar thehar jaati hai
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2008, 09:58:09 AM »
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Good One Sanya... Usual Smile
Really nice to see u writing in Hindi with as much ease as in English...
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sanya310
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2008, 09:59:46 AM »
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thanks a lot shikha di =)
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Shikha12
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2008, 10:00:57 AM »
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thanx pooja ji, sanya n shikha ji

kisi ne kuch nahi likha

Well... I can try.. Usual Smile
But beleive me, could not write anything even near as good as you...


Ek sehra hai ye tanhaaiyon ka, jaan lo mujhko,
Duniya ki tarz par tum bhi chho.Dh do mujhko...

Main sift fasaana hoon, Meri apni haqiqat nahin,
Kahaaniyon ki kitaabon mein jho.Dh do mujhko...

Baadalon se tum sada barse ho meri ruswaai pe,
Samunder ho kar saahil mein gho.Lh do mujhko...

Tum paas thhe to bhi judaai se darti rahi main,
Duur jaa kar ab mera aitbaar mo.Dh do mujhko...

Pathhar ke buton mein khojo kahin chehra mera,
Khoj kar, tukdon tukdon mein to.Dh do mujhko...




(Bhool Chook Maaf...laughing4

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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2008, 10:05:06 AM »
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that ws awesome shikha di!! bohot hi acha likha hai
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2008, 10:10:29 AM »
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Thankssssss Sanya!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 09, 2008, 10:27:07 AM »
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Sam, Sani and Shikha

Superb ! Aap sab ne behtareen likha hai !
Bahut achcha laga padh kar

"kitna bharosa hai mujhe" bahut achcha title hai !
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«Reply #14 on: February 09, 2008, 10:32:47 AM »
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thanx rajbhaiya
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