Koi yaad karay ga tu kab tak? (by vb)

by vb on September 15, 2010, 03:16:56 PM
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vb jee tu deewaanay hain
Yoonhi ki baaten kartay hain
Jin ki qismat main rona ho
Itni jaldee kab martay hain?

Dunya say jaanay walon k
Koi saath bhala kab marta hay?
Ik aawaara deewaanay ko
Koi yaad bhala kab karta hay?

Haan mumkin hay kuch roze koi
Kuch halka saa gham-geen rahay
Ye geet yaheen reh jaain gay
In geeton ko kuch roze parhay

Ye bhe mumkin hay kabhi kabhi
Kuch yaad achaanak aa jaya
Or bhoola-bisra khaab koi
Kuch dare zara dil tarpaayay

Is rang-barangi duniya main
Jo aatay hain, so jaatay hain
Kuch dikhlaaway k aansoo hain
Phir yaad kisay wo aatay hain

Jeewan k meethay lamhon ko
Barbaad karay ga tu kab tak?
Is aawaara say shaair ko
Koi yaad karay ga tu kab tak?

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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 07:57:35 PM »
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VB jee aadaab!

Aapke dard bhare ahsaas o khayaal aur umdaa bayaani bahut khoo geet ban padte hai janaab daad

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2010, 12:33:36 AM »
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vb jee tu deewaanay hain
Yoonhi ki baaten kartay hain
Jin ki qismat main rona ho
Itni jaldee kab martay hain?

Dunya say jaanay walon k
Koi saath bhala kab marta hay?
Ik aawaara deewaanay ko
Koi yaad bhala kab karta hay?

Haan mumkin hay kuch roze koi
Kuch halka saa gham-geen rahay
Ye geet yaheen reh jaain gay
In geeton ko kuch roze parhay

Ye bhe mumkin hay kabhi kabhi
Kuch yaad achaanak aa jaya
Or bhoola-bisra khaab koi
Kuch dare zara dil tarpaayay

Is rang-barangi duniya main
Jo aatay hain, so jaatay hain
Kuch dikhlaaway k aansoo hain
Phir yaad kisay wo aatay hain

Jeewan k meethay lamhon ko
Barbaad karay ga tu kab tak?
Is aawaara say shaair ko
Koi yaad karay ga tu kab tak?



Very Nice Poetry.....Very Nice Creation....dil se daad !
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2010, 01:22:49 PM »
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Tasleemaat-o-Aadaab bil jawab ParwaZ jee!

buhat shukriya aap k waqt denay, parhnay, or achay comments chhornay ka..
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2010, 01:24:01 PM »
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Anshumali jee! buhat shukriya k aap ne waqt diya, parha or taareefi kalemaat chhoray...
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2010, 09:31:07 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji... bahut achcha laga padhke...!!!


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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2010, 12:21:40 PM »
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Shukriya... klaskar jee
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 12:16:25 PM »
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bahut khoob vb ji .
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2010, 01:38:18 PM »
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Wow Fantastic... Yea poetry wakai bahoot Khoob rahi.. bahoot jyada rythm mea lagi.. and the feelings behind is so natural...

Keep writing Vb Jee !!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2010, 10:22:00 AM »
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SURESH SANGWAN jee! buhat shukriya...
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2010, 10:22:46 AM »
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Sophi jee! buhat shukriya parhnay, pasand karnay or comments chhornay ka..
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