kya vb vb kartay ho? (by vb)

by vb on July 14, 2012, 08:14:21 AM
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Kyun in geeton par martay ho?
Kya vb vb kartay ho?
Maaloom bhe hay tum logon ko
K vb jee aawaaraa hen
Ik bojh zameen k maathay par
Ik shaam ka dhaltaa taaraa hen

In geeton ko in naghmon ko
Pehlay bhe kisi ne chaahaa tha
Maasoom kisi kay jazbon ne
Ho kar naadaan saraahaa tha
Hum ne tu soch k rakha tha
Ab likhnay say parhez karen
Ab manzil hum ko dikhti hay
Jeevan ki gaari tez karen
Jo likhnay say hum dartay thay
Phir aaj qalam par aayaa hay
Is dil k veeraan aangan par
Ik maut ka aalaam chhaaya hay

Us larki ki kya baat karen
Sub jhoot hay sub kuchh maaya hay
In geeton men in naghmon men
Jo vb ne farmaaya hay
Kuch us larki ne batlaaya
Kuchh logon ne samjhaya hay
Jo Insha, Saahir kehtay thay
Vb ne bhe duhraayaa hay
“sub jhoot hay vb, jhoot hay sub”
Us ne bhi yehi kehlaayaa hay
Hum jaantay hen is chaahat men
Tum sub ne dhokaa khaaya hay
Kya sood khasaara poochhen hum?
Kya khoya hay kya paayaa hay?
In geeton ki taareef nahi
In geeton ko dushnaam karo
Vb k jhootay geeton par
Sub vb ko bad-naam karo

Aur tum bhe larki, kon ho tum?
Ku apna mann uljhaati ho?
Nakaam kavi k geeton par
Ku naghmay likh kar jaati ho?
Ku jhooti tassali deti ho?
Kya dil apnaa behlaati ho?
Tum dil belaao theek magar
Ku zakhmon ko sehlaati ho?
Hum jaantay hen is mehfil men
Tum albeli kehlaati ho
Ik chanchal, shokhe si larki ho
Ku apna aap ganvaati ho?
Ku jhootay sapnay likhti ho?
Ku jhootay naghmay gaati ho?
Tum ghoomo, hen bazaar buhat
Ku is koochay men aati ho?
Wo jhooti preet ka afsaanaa
Ku hum ko yaad dilaati ho?

Wo jis men thay ik vb jee
Ik naar pay jaan ko haar gayay
Jalway thay jis k un-dekhay
Par vb jee ko maar gayay
Wo jis k peechhay vb kay
Sub kaaj gayay, byopaar gayay
Sub duniya chhooti vb say
Sub dost gayay, sub yaar gayay
Na wo is paar ko aa paai
Na vb jee us paar gayay
Ye vb jee kay geet sabhi
Naakaam rahay, baykaar gayay
Vb guzray yoon duniya say
Bazaar say jyoon naadaar gayay

Ab in kay din do chaar faqat
Ab in ko aahen bharnay do
Vb jee say kuchh door raho
Vb ko tanhaa marnay do!

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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2012, 08:32:31 AM »
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waah waah heart touching zindabad
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2012, 09:46:19 AM »
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Bahut umda VB jee
Applause Applause
ek naakaam koshish meri taraf se.

tum in chahat ke geeto ko
kyo pyar se itna likhte ho
kyo tum saare jajbaato ko
dil se baahar laate ho
pyaar ke raahi hi chalte hai
anjaani un raaho par
jinme kaante hote hai
tum unka dard batate ho

tum sach me accha likhte ho
tum dil ki chahat lagte ho
itna sab kuch batlaaya hai
tumko dil se apnaaya hai
bas sach kahne se darte hai
aur VB VB karte hai

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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2012, 01:36:55 PM »
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maar daalaaaaaaaaaa hayeeeeeeeeeee Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  kya zabardast reply diya hai aapne VB ji........mazaa aagaya  love4 ...... kitne waqt baad aapne kisi post par thnx k alawa kuch kaha hai..... dil khush kar diya apne  icon_flower ..... aaur aapne ye jo bhi likha hai  cussing cussing


Aur tum bhe larki, kon ho tum?
Ku apna mann uljhaati ho?
Nakaam kavi k geeton par
Ku naghmay likh kar jaati ho?
Ku jhooti tassali deti ho?
Kya dil apnaa behlaati ho?
Tum dil belaao theek magar
Ku zakhmon ko sehlaati ho?
Hum jaantay hen is mehfil men
Tum albeli kehlaati ho
Ik chanchal, shokhe si larki ho
Ku apna aap ganvaati ho?
Ku jhootay sapnay likhti ho?
Ku jhootay naghmay gaati ho?
Tum ghoomo, hen bazaar buhat
Ku is koochay men aati ho?
Wo jhooti preet ka afsaanaa
Ku hum ko yaad dilaati ho?

Wo jis men thay ik vb jee
Ik naar pay jaan ko haar gayay
Jalway thay jis k un-dekhay
Par vb jee ko maar gayay
Wo jis k peechhay vb kay
Sub kaaj gayay, byopaar gayay
Sub duniya chhooti vb say
Sub dost gayay, sub yaar gayay
Na wo is paar ko aa paai
Na vb jee us paar gayay
Ye vb jee kay geet sabhi
Naakaam rahay, baykaar gayay
Vb guzray yoon duniya say
Bazaar say jyoon naadaar gayay

Ab in kay din do chaar faqat
Ab in ko aahen bharnay do
Vb jee say kuchh door raho
Vb ko tanhaa marnay do!

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kyun tanha rehne de hum Vb ji ko  sad11 ... are haq hai pareshan karne ka so karenge hum to... chahe aapko achcha lage ya na lage  Winking ....  geeton nagmon ki tareef bhi karenge   icon_salut aur rely bhi karenge  happy3  aur umeed bhi karenge k   Feared. aap thnx k alawa isi tarah pyara sa reply do har baar Giggle....... aur hum jante hain k aapko dena hi padega..... tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2012, 01:38:03 PM »
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Bahut umda VB jee
Applause Applause
ek naakaam koshish meri taraf se.

tum in chahat ke geeto ko
kyo pyar se itna likhte ho
kyo tum saare jajbaato ko
dil se baahar laate ho
pyaar ke raahi hi chalte hai
anjaani un raaho par
jinme kaante hote hai
tum unka dard batate ho

tum sach me accha likhte ho
tum dil ki chahat lagte ho
itna sab kuch batlaaya hai
tumko dil se apnaaya hai
bas sach kahne se darte hai
aur VB VB karte hai



zabardasttttttttttttttttt reply mkv ji .. mastam  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:masttttttt
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2012, 02:09:26 PM »
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zabardasttttttttttttttttt reply mkv ji .. mastam  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:masttttttt
Kasak jee
aap hamesha bahut maasoom reply karti hai. mai naya hun par pahle log isi tarah se reply karte the..aapko yaad hoga..
bas koshish karta hun kabhi kabhi.
taaliyan mai bhi bajaata hun par jo deserve karte hai unke liye bilkul nahee.
mujhe pata hai..likhne vaale aise ek comment par kitne khush hote hai.
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2012, 05:09:47 AM »
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thanx... sksaini4 jee!
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2012, 05:10:28 AM »
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shukriya.. mkv jee! buhat khoob beher pakri aap ne....
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2012, 05:18:20 AM »
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thanx... *KasaK*....Dil Ki jee !

wo poetry he kya jo dil men na utar jaayay, utar jaayay aur asar na karay... agar ab bhe aap loug taareefen kar jaain tu bay-kaar he likha na hum ne... aisay he bay-kaar rehta hay hamara likha...

khair... hamen kuchh nahi chahiyay... bus gavah rahiyay ga...


har zakhm siya tha vb ne
har dard saha tha vb ne
kya kya na us ki minnat ki
kya kya na kaha tha vb ne
ashkon say lay k sharabon tak
kya kya na piya tha vb ne
us naar ki chaahat paanay ko
kya kya na kiya tha vb ne
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2012, 05:40:04 AM »
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BAHUT HEE SUNDAR RACHNA. ANEKON BADHAIYAN.
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2012, 08:14:34 AM »
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anand mohan jee! thanx..
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2012, 10:36:19 AM »
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iss VB ne jo bhi kiya
uss sabki gawaah hai ye mehfil
jo dard sahe jo zakhm siye
un sabko jiya hai mehfil ne
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«Reply #12 on: November 04, 2013, 06:06:12 PM »
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kamaaaaaaaal likte ho tum yar
men padh raha hon tumharee purani kahanya

wah
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«Reply #13 on: November 04, 2013, 10:13:22 PM »
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......

thanx...
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