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<>*kyun ikraar kiya karte hain*<> khayalon k aangan me jab bhi hum tahelte hain
na jane kitne anokhe sapne jii liya karte hain
ho sakte nahin jo pure kabhi kisi haal me
hum wo ankahe afsaane sun liya karte hain
jab tatolta hai man kabhi unn sapno ko akele me
hum sharm se apna sir jhuka liya karte hain
kyun kar baithe hum wo khwaishen jo jaayaz nahin
hum har baar khud se ye sawalaat kiya karte hain
kuch to hongi majburiyan kuch dil ki chahatein
jo hum unke kadmon me ab bhi sir jhukaya karte hain
ye meri chahat hai ya tere pyaar ka pagalpan sanam
hum inkaar me bhi na jane kyun ikraar kiya karte hain...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2010, 12:35:40 PM » |
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<>*kyun ikraar kiya karte hain*<> khayalon k aangan me jab bhi hum tahelte hain
na jane kitne anokhe sapne jii liya karte hain
ho sakte nahin jo pure kabhi kisi haal me
hum wo ankahe afsaane sun liya karte hain
jab tatolta hai man kabhi unn sapno ko akele me
hum sharm se apna sir jhuka liya karte hain
kyun kar baithe hum wo khwaishen jo jaayaz nahin
hum har baar khud se ye sawalaat kiya karte hain
kuch to hongi majburiyan kuch dil ki chahatein
jo hum unke kadmon me ab bhi sir jhukaya karte hain
ye meri chahat hai ya tere pyaar ka pagalpan sanam
hum inkaar me bhi na jane kyun ikraar kiya karte hain...!!!
Very romantic.....Very touching.....Kasak Ji ......nice creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath... |
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 01:21:09 PM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2010, 01:23:24 PM » |
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Very romantic.....Very touching.....Kasak Ji ......nice creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen...
khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
shukriya naresh ji k aapne ise itna saraha.... |
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2010, 01:37:56 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2010, 02:04:09 PM » |
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Hmm……………Kasak Ji…………..
Ek Aur Mast Wala Bomb Feka He Apne…..
Well Meri Request He Sabhi Se Ki Kasak Ji Ko Ek Recognist Terrorist Declare Kar Diya Jaye………
Kyuki Ye Shayri Ke Zariye Ese Bomb Marti He Ki Hum Khud Ko Bhula Dete He………
Its Superb Presentation Kasak Ji………..Mindblowing And Heart Touching……..
Well Ye Apki Poetry Ke Jawab Me Ek Choti Si Koshish Mere Taraf Se …..Umiid He Aapko Pasand Aye
Mohhabat Me Hum Inkaar Ko Ikraar Mante He
Sanam Ki Shikayate Hum To Pyar Mantee He
Humdono Rakhte He Khamosh In Labo Ko
Ek Duje Ka Haal Fir Bhi Hum Yaar Jante He
Khwab Dekho Bas Unhe Pura Honi Ki Shart Na Rakho
Jo Kar De Inhe Pura Use Hum Parwar Digaar Mante He
Sar Juka Ho Sanam Ke Kadam Me To Kya Harj He
Hum To Unki Jeet Me Jeet Unki Haar Me Apni Haar Mante He
Hume Kya Lena Dena Duniya Se Apni Duniya To Tu He Sanam
YIsiliye Ye Begairat Duniya Hume Aur Hum IsKo Bekaar Mante He
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2010, 02:10:58 PM » |
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haayeeeeeeeee rabbaaaaaaa.......
dil dhadka gaye aapke bol ji......
teri har baat hum subah shaam mante hain
tujhi ko apna solah shringaar mante hain
tu chahe to bana de chahe to mita de hume
hum teri har raza sarkaar mante hain
tujhe pujte pujte ab to uss kanha ko bhi bhula diya
janu tujhe hum apna natkhat gopal mante hain
kaise kahein k kya baat hai tere pyaar me e sanam
hum tujhe khud me aur khud ko tujhme samaya mante hain...!!! |
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2010, 03:10:40 PM » |
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Agar Yeh kahoon Ke Anamika Ji Mere Paas Koi Lafz Nahi Iss Kavita Ki Tareef Mein To woh Bhi Aapko Suuna-Suuna Sa Lagega..
Aapki Yeh kavita Mein Dard Aur Mohabbat Ka Ek Milan Nazar Aaya..Insaan Kayi Baar Dil mein Aisi khwaishe,Aisi Umeed jaga leta hai jo kabhi mukammal Nahi ho paate..Aur Shayad Woh Zindagi Mein Kuch Naajayaz Khwaishe Hi Bankar Reh Jaate Hai, Isliye Kuch Kehna Chahunga...
Zaroorate Ke Mutaabik Zindagi Jeeo
Khwaisho Ke Mutaabik Nahi!!!!!
Kyonki Zaroorat Fakir Ki Bhi Poori Ho Jaati hai
Aur Khwaish Baadshaho Ki Bhi Adhoori Reh Jaati Hai..
Yehi zindagi Ki haqeeqat Hai Anamikaji..
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2010, 03:28:13 PM » |
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nice Kasak & Gud Khwaish
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2010, 03:31:52 PM » |
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Agar Yeh kahoon Ke Anamika Ji Mere Paas Koi Lafz Nahi Iss Kavita Ki Tareef Mein To woh Bhi Aapko Suuna-Suuna Sa Lagega..
Aapki Yeh kavita Mein Dard Aur Mohabbat Ka Ek Milan Nazar Aaya..Insaan Kayi Baar Dil mein Aisi khwaishe,Aisi Umeed jaga leta hai jo kabhi mukammal Nahi ho paate..Aur Shayad Woh Zindagi Mein Kuch Naajayaz Khwaishe Hi Bankar Reh Jaate Hai, Isliye Kuch Kehna Chahunga...
Zaroorate Ke Mutaabik Zindagi Jeeo
Khwaisho Ke Mutaabik Nahi!!!!!
Kyonki Zaroorat Fakir Ki Bhi Poori Ho Jaati hai
Aur Khwaish Baadshaho Ki Bhi Adhoori Reh Jaati Hai..
Yehi zindagi Ki haqeeqat Hai Anamikaji..
aapki baat hume bht achhci lagi khwaish ji.....
sach hai jo aapne kaha k jaruraton k hisaab se jiyo khwaishon k nahin
lekin unn khwaishon ka kya ji jo khwaishein zindagi ki jarurat ban jati hain...wo khwaishein na chhode banti hain na unke pure hone ki umeed hoti hai....zindagi use paane aur na paane ki uljhan me hi reh jati hai...
zindagi meri bhi ek aisi hi uljhan ban gai hai
suljhi hui kadi thi ye ab ik paheli ban gai hai
kuch sapne kuch armaan jaga gaye wo dil me
jinhe pane ki dil me justazoo jag gai hai
nahin honge wo pure kabhi iss zindagi me
ye jaan kar bhi zindagi unke piche bhaag rahi hai
kyun hain ye khwaish mere dil me bata do tum
jinke pure na hone ki kasak dil me reh reh k uth rahi hai...!!! |
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2010, 12:54:15 AM » |
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uffffffffff..... yahaan to qatl-e-aam macha rakha hai aapne Kasak ji... sabki jaan leke rahoge aap apne kavitaon se... hum to ghaayal ho hi chuke hain jaaane aur kitne huye honge... bahut khoobsurat rachna hai ye aapki... dard aur mohabbat ka sangam .... wah ji wah... kya kehne .... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai...!!! 
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2010, 05:38:14 PM » |
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thnku thnku koyal tumne ye kavita pasand ki iss liye...and beautiful iines from ur side ... |
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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2010, 05:39:23 PM » |
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nice Kasak & Gud Khwaish
thnx ishu ji...for appreciating...... |
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2010, 05:41:50 PM » |
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uffffffffff..... yahaan to qatl-e-aam macha rakha hai aapne Kasak ji... sabki jaan leke rahoge aap apne kavitaon se... hum to ghaayal ho hi chuke hain jaaane aur kitne huye honge... bahut khoobsurat rachna hai ye aapki... dard aur mohabbat ka sangam .... wah ji wah... kya kehne .... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai...!!! ufffffff........ab aapko kya kahun.....
thnx alot....klaskar ji...k aapne itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa pasand kiyaaaaa meri iss koshish ko......
aap sabko dekh dekh padh k likh leti hun ...bas aur kuch nahin.... |
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