lijeeye meri kalam...............saru......120

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तहरीरें   काग़ज़   पर   उतार  लीजिये
लीजिये  क़लम   मेरी   उधार   लीजिये

जब  फ़र्श-ए-गुल लगा  दिया हवाओं ने
आइए  मज़ा- ए- चमन- ज़ार  लीजिये

हो  जाती  है  ग़लती  जाने -अनजाने
बेहतर   है   उसे   स्वीकार   लीजिये

हम  क्या  हमारा  ये जहाँ आपका है
इक फूल क्या  आप  गुलज़ार लीजिये

टटोलकर  नब्ज़  बारीकियों  से उसका
दिल क्या फिर जान भी सरकार लीजिये

इक वक़्त के सिवा सब  लौट  आयेगा
गहराइयों  से  दिल की पुकार लीजिये

पास कुछ भी नहीं मगर सब कुछ है'सरु'
अमीबा  की  मानिंद   आकार  लीजिये


 
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2014, 12:01:32 AM »
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excellent creation maam please accept one rau
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2014, 01:58:30 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 07, 2014, 10:45:12 PM


तहरीरें   काग़ज़   पर   उतार  लीजिये
लीजिये  क़लम   मेरी   उधार   लीजिये

जब  फ़र्श-ए-गुल लगा  दिया हवाओं ने
आइए  मज़ा- ए- चमन- ज़ार  लीजिये

हो  जाती  है  ग़लती  जाने -अनजाने
बेहतर   है   उसे   स्वीकार   लीजिये

हम  क्या  हमारा  ये जहाँ आपका है
इक फूल क्या  आप  गुलज़ार लीजिये

टटोलकर  नब्ज़  बारीकियों  से उसका
दिल क्या फिर जान भी सरकार लीजिये

इक वक़्त के सिवा सब  लौट  आयेगा
गहराइयों  से  दिल की पुकार लीजिये

पास कुछ भी नहीं मगर सब कुछ है'सरु'
अमीबा  की  मानिंद   आकार  लीजिये


 



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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2014, 05:14:51 AM »
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ek rau ke saath daad (MERAA QALAM) QALAM MASCULINE HAI URDU MEN
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2014, 10:40:17 AM »
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वाह....वाह.....वाह.....

क्या खुबसूरत ग़ज़ल पेश की है आपने.....ढेरों दाद.....

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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2014, 10:44:19 AM »
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waaah bahut khub saruji.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2014, 11:23:57 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah
Ab Rau Hamara Sweekar Lijiye!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2014, 11:56:21 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khooob saru ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2014, 12:52:36 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 07, 2014, 10:45:12 PM


तहरीरें   काग़ज़   पर   उतार  लीजिये
लीजिये  क़लम   मेरी   उधार   लीजिये

जब  फ़र्श-ए-गुल लगा  दिया हवाओं ने
आइए  मज़ा- ए- चमन- ज़ार  लीजिये

हो  जाती  है  ग़लती  जाने -अनजाने
बेहतर   है   उसे   स्वीकार   लीजिये

हम  क्या  हमारा  ये जहाँ आपका है
इक फूल क्या  आप  गुलज़ार लीजिये

टटोलकर  नब्ज़  बारीकियों  से उसका
दिल क्या फिर जान भी सरकार लीजिये

इक वक़्त के सिवा सब  लौट  आयेगा
गहराइयों  से  दिल की पुकार लीजिये

पास कुछ भी नहीं मगर सब कुछ है'सरु'
अमीबा  की  मानिंद   आकार  लीजिये


 




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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2014, 01:36:19 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 07, 2014, 10:45:12 PM


तहरीरें   काग़ज़   पर   उतार  लीजिये
लीजिये  क़लम   मेरी   उधार   लीजिये

जब  फ़र्श-ए-गुल लगा  दिया हवाओं ने
आइए  मज़ा- ए- चमन- ज़ार  लीजिये

हो  जाती  है  ग़लती  जाने -अनजाने
बेहतर   है   उसे   स्वीकार   लीजिये

हम  क्या  हमारा  ये जहाँ आपका है
इक फूल क्या  आप  गुलज़ार लीजिये

टटोलकर  नब्ज़  बारीकियों  से उसका
दिल क्या फिर जान भी सरकार लीजिये

इक वक़्त के सिवा सब  लौट  आयेगा
गहराइयों  से  दिल की पुकार लीजिये

पास कुछ भी नहीं मगर सब कुछ है'सरु'
अमीबा  की  मानिंद   आकार  लीजिये


 


SURESH SANGWAN JI,
                 Bahut Umdaaaaa Kalaaam Hai........
is misre ki tareef jitni bhi ki jaaye kam hi hogi............. "Aaiye Maza e Chaman zaar Leejiye................Mujhe ye nahi maloom ki mujhe kisi " rau" dene ka haq hai ya nahi aur agar hai to kayse diya jaata hai, baharhaal meri daad qubool farmaiye.......
              
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2014, 05:56:06 PM »
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Bahut Khub. Bahut si daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2014, 06:01:17 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 07, 2014, 10:45:12 PM


तहरीरें   काग़ज़   पर   उतार  लीजिये
लीजिये  क़लम   मेरी   उधार   लीजिये

जब  फ़र्श-ए-गुल लगा  दिया हवाओं ने
आइए  मज़ा- ए- चमन- ज़ार  लीजिये

हो  जाती  है  ग़लती  जाने -अनजाने
बेहतर   है   उसे   स्वीकार   लीजिये

हम  क्या  हमारा  ये जहाँ आपका है
इक फूल क्या  आप  गुलज़ार लीजिये

टटोलकर  नब्ज़  बारीकियों  से उसका
दिल क्या फिर जान भी सरकार लीजिये

इक वक़्त के सिवा सब  लौट  आयेगा
गहराइयों  से  दिल की पुकार लीजिये

पास कुछ भी नहीं मगर सब कुछ है'सरु'
अमीबा  की  मानिंद   आकार  लीजिये


 


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bahot bahot khoob.... Usual Smile
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