Likhna Mera******

by Pooja on May 16, 2006, 04:06:01 PM
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Choti choti si baato ka afsaana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya

Dil mai ayye zazbaato ko shabdo mai utara hai
Man mai aai peera ko, dil se nikala hai
Peera aor zazbaato ka taraana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Jhoom kar jab kabhi, koi khayal sajaya
Khud ko sajane ka phir is man mai ayya
Apne khawabo ko shabdo mai jo sajaya
Un shabdo ka duniya se taana phir ayya

Khud ko sajana, khawab-e-hasrat ban kar rah gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Her ek zazbaat ke rang ki holi
Aor duniya ki yah tikhi-mithi boli
Kon kis bhesh mai kheile yah toli
Apni to wahin bhir khali ek jholi!!!

Khali is jholi se, dastan-e-nagma ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Likhati hu jab bhi, khud se kheil jaati hu
Apne hi shabdo se, bhed rakh jaati hu
Dard in shabdo mai, mere lahoo se atta hai
Armaano ka rang, tanhaaiyo se atta hai

Likhana Mera, jurm-e-aourtana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2006, 11:02:15 PM »
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm. .. lambi shayari...pooja... good. one..
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2006, 01:40:57 AM »
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khud se khud mai gungunati hu
jo bhi atta hai dil mai likh jaati hu
lambi ab ho ya ho choti
yoindia per bas mai likh jaati hu!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2006, 06:48:36 AM »
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keya bat hai pooja ji bahut khoob...

faislaa suna ke jaaney diya
dil saaf tha behosh usne kiya
maare gaye hum maatam se unke
sameyt yaadon ka tohfa jab usne diya
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2006, 05:22:11 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai Sonu, bahoot hi sahi kaha apne!!

Udaas dil likhne per majboor karta hai
likhna phir se dil ko udaas karta hai
khud ko khud ki samjh nahi aati
kayun insaan ki pahchan nahi ho paati

vishwaas khud per se ab utha jaata hai
udaas dil likhne per majboor karta hai
likhna phir se dil ko udaas karta hai......
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2006, 06:41:37 AM »
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Pakhuri ji bahut bahut shukriya... apko humari shari passend ahi... keya bat hai app bhi kuch kam nahi hai bahut hi acha reply keya hai paney Usual Smile

Zindagi Ki Raahon Mein Aise Mod Bhi Aate Hain
Saawan Ke Saath-Saath Yehan Patjad Bhi Aate Hain
Aasuwon Ke Saagar Mein Moti Bhi Milthe Hain
Jo Unhe Doond lete hain, Wahi Zindagi Jee Lete Hain.




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wah kaya baat hai Sonu, bahoot hi sahi kaha apne!!

Udaas dil likhne per majboor karta hai
likhna phir se dil ko udaas karta hai
khud ko khud ki samjh nahi aati
kayun insaan ki pahchan nahi ho paati

vishwaas khud per se ab utha jaata hai
udaas dil likhne per majboor karta hai
likhna phir se dil ko udaas karta hai......
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2006, 01:50:21 PM »
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Likh lene do ki man halka ho jayega
Warna yah dard ka tezab, lekar muje kahin so jayega

Likhne se dard badta hai, aor aram aa jaata hai
Dard ki dawa dard, yah aor achy se samjha jaata hai

Khamosh hai juban, magar dil bole hi jaata hai
Ander hi ander, khud mai ghutata jaata hai

Ja rahi hu kaha, ab mujko koi hosh nahi
Dukha jau jo dil tera, yakin kar mera koi dosh nahi
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2006, 04:41:24 AM »
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wonderful Pooja sis...

humney dil ka hal sab ek dairy mey likh dala
ek dard ka sahara sabko usmey semyat dala

kalam chalaney sey zkaham or geyra hata gaya
dard sey dard takraker ahkhu sey lahoo beyhta gaya

en khamosh nigow ney bhi ab to dukha dey deya
her dastak mey dil ko yea lagey key humara humsafer ahya..

jaow khaa ab mujhey koi hush nahi
dar pey teyrey ah to gaye hum per dil nadam khamosh nahi...


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Likh lene do ki man halka ho jayega
Warna yah dard ka tezab, lekar muje kahin so jayega

Likhne se dard badta hai, aor aram aa jaata hai
Dard ki dawa dard, yah aor achy se samjha jaata hai

Khamosh hai juban, magar dil bole hi jaata hai
Ander hi ander, khud mai ghutata jaata hai

Ja rahi hu kaha, ab mujko koi hosh nahi
Dukha jau jo dil tera, yakin kar mera koi dosh nahi
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2006, 08:28:45 PM »
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Payar ke nagme likhati hu, kayun dard bhare ban jaate hai
main jitna bhi gum se bachati hu, aor kareeb aa jaate hai
khushio ki dhoop nikalty hi, kayun gum ke badal chate hai
main jinko dudh pilau, wo hi naag ban das jaate hai
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2006, 03:51:05 AM »
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bahut khoob pooja sis....

gamu sey ab humney dosti kerli hai
teyrey payr key nagmu ko humey dil mey sajha leya hai
teyri her ek pyar bharey lafzu ko siney mey chupa leya hai
ahkhu sey dard ko bheyney nahi deytey hai
teyri pyari surat dil ko bhulney nahi deytey hai
hum miley na miley per teyri chahat ko dil mey sameytey beythey hai....
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2006, 04:20:48 PM »
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good one Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2006, 10:10:34 AM »
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Choti choti si baato ka afsaana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya

Dil mai ayye zazbaato ko shabdo mai utara hai
Man mai aai peera ko, dil se nikala hai
Peera aor zazbaato ka taraana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Jhoom kar jab kabhi, koi khayal sajaya
Khud ko sajane ka phir is man mai ayya
Apne khawabo ko shabdo mai jo sajaya
Un shabdo ka duniya se taana phir ayya

Khud ko sajana, khawab-e-hasrat ban kar rah gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Her ek zazbaat ke rang ki holi
Aor duniya ki yah tikhi-mithi boli
Kon kis bhesh mai kheile yah toli
Apni to wahin bhir khali ek jholi!!!

Khali is jholi se, dastan-e-nagma ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Likhati hu jab bhi, khud se kheil jaati hu
Apne hi shabdo se, bhed rakh jaati hu
Dard in shabdo mai, mere lahoo se atta hai
Armaano ka rang, tanhaaiyo se atta hai

Likhana Mera, jurm-e-aourtana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!


beyond excellence.............
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2006, 10:40:44 AM »
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keya bat hai pooja ji bahut khoob...

faislaa suna ke jaaney diya
dil saaf tha behosh usne kiya
maare gaye hum maatam se unke
sameyt yaadon ka tohfa jab usne diya



sonu aap to hamesha se hi khoob likhti aayi hain.. gud one...
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2006, 02:07:42 PM »
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Shukaria Gesu....

aourat ko apni gazalo main
nadi, hawa, ghata aor fiza bataya
ussi ko kis liye phir a duniya
bandhano mai bandh baithaya
hey Fiza to use mehak jaane do
nadi ko apni zindagi, jee jaane do
ghata hai to use jhoom kar bbaras jaane do
hawa ko khul kar, kuch sanse le jaane do......
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«Reply #14 on: July 19, 2006, 03:09:49 PM »
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Gesu ji bahut bahut shukriya  :oops: ...

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keya bat hai pooja ji bahut khoob...

faislaa suna ke jaaney diya
dil saaf tha behosh usne kiya
maare gaye hum maatam se unke
sameyt yaadon ka tohfa jab usne diya



sonu aap to hamesha se hi khoob likhti aayi hain.. gud one...
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