likhta hi chala gaya.

by guhar on January 08, 2010, 11:56:04 PM
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waqt guzarne mein bhi waqt lagta hai..

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padhne waale mile yaa naa mile,
mein to likhta hi chala gayaa.


panne bache naa bache,
me to kalam ghistaa hi chala gaya.

jab bhi awaaz uthai mere jasbaaton ne,
kabhi din me par zyaada raaton me,
ujaale ka ik katra mile,ya aaftaab hi saath ho,
roshni mile naa mile,
me shabdon me mit ta hi chala gaya.


aayi jab unki yaad to,
rakh ke kaagaz pe hijaab ko,
dhak ke mere ehsaas ko,
wo jaane yaa naa jaane,
me ishq ke fando se lipat ta hi chala gaya.

...likhta hi chala gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2010, 12:16:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob Guhar Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2010, 02:07:04 PM »
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Wonderful creation Guhar ji,bahut hi khoob.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2010, 06:27:54 PM »
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guhar ji sach aapne bohot hi khub likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2010, 08:08:49 PM »
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guhar ji sach aapne bohot hi khub likha hai
dhnyaawaad...dil se dhnyaawaad.
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2010, 08:10:16 PM »
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Wonderful creation Guhar ji,bahut hi khoob.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnks madhuwesh....
kuch mere harf pade kaagaz par,
tumne nigaahein kya daali,
unme jaan aa gayi aur thirakne lage.
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2010, 08:12:08 PM »
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Bahut khoob Guhar Ji
raste pr chlna kuch mushkil baat nahi yaar,
pr saathi jo saath ho to ,
to humko nahi manzil ko rehta hai intzaar.
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2010, 09:30:34 PM »
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Guhar-di kya khoob likha hai main padhti he chali gayee....
Taaliyen kab bajaani hain bhool se gayee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aap pulling mai kaise likhti hain.? (likhta he chala gaya..)
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2010, 09:59:44 PM »
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Guhar-di kya khoob likha hai main padhti he chali gayee....
Taaliyen kab bajaani hain bhool se gayee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aap pulling mai kaise likhti hain.? (likhta he chala gaya..)

mein bhi nahi jaanti,
pr shaayad aisa lagta hai mere andar ka insaan bol raha,
yaa fir ik kaaran ye bhi hai tuk acchi baith ti hai.
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2010, 01:09:42 PM »
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Nice Sharing Guhaar JI
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