Lo din beeta, lo raat gayi

by bekarar on June 12, 2008, 12:04:19 PM
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लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई,
सूरज ढलकर पच्छिम पहुँचा,
डूबा, संध्या आई, छाई,
     सौ संध्या-सी वह संध्या थी,
क्यों उठते-उठते सोचा था,
     दिन में होगी कुछ बात नई।
लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई।

धीमे-धीमे तारे निकले,
धीरे-धीरे नभ में फैले,
     सौ रजनी-सी वह रजनी थी
क्यों संध्या को यह सोचा था,
     निशि में होगी कुछ बात नई।
लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई।

चिड़ियाँ चहकीं, कलियाँ महकी,
पूरब से फिर सूरज निकला,
     जैसे होती थी सुबह हुई,
क्यों सोते-सोते सोचा था,
     होगी प्रातः कुछ बात नई।
लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई,



- बच्चन


 

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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2008, 08:16:33 AM »
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लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई,
सूरज ढलकर पच्छिम पहुँचा,
डूबा, संध्या आई, छाई,
     सौ संध्या-सी वह संध्या थी,
क्यों उठते-उठते सोचा था,
     दिन में होगी कुछ बात नई।
लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई।

धीमे-धीमे तारे निकले,
धीरे-धीरे नभ में फैले,
     सौ रजनी-सी वह रजनी थी
क्यों संध्या को यह सोचा था,
     निशि में होगी कुछ बात नई।
लो दिन बीता, लो रात गई।

Sanjeev bhaiya bahut hi accha posting ki hai aapne. Kal mai yeh sher pad nahi payi thi. Open nahi hua tha. Aaj pade humne... Lo jee hum kehte hai bahut khoob likha hai jee  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2008, 08:24:57 AM »
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thanks sania ,
the poem was written by "HARIVANSH RAI BAchchan" (father of amitabh bachchan) not by me
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2008, 08:33:56 AM »
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thanks sania ,
the poem was written by "HARIVANSH RAI BAchchan" (father of amitabh bachchan) not by me

Haan jee typing error hogaya tha icon_silent.. But the one which you shared was superb 1 bhaiya
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