‘bansi’ tu likha kar bas likha bas kar likha kar ....bnansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on August 25, 2012, 05:11:54 PM
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Dil ko parhne walon ki kami to nahin
Parhte to bahut hain magar gaur karte nahin

Dil jo chahta hai wo har dil ko milta nahin
Jo milta hai wo dil ko achha lagta nahin

Likhte likhte hain har roz na jane kitna
Jitna Likhna chahte hain magar, utna likh pate nahin

Hamre likhe ko parhne wale to bahut hain magar
Taareef karne wale utne  milte nahin

Tareef karne walon ko tu  dhoondha na kar
‘bansi’ tu likha kar bas likha bas  kar likha kar

------bansi dhameja(madhur)
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2012, 05:39:13 PM »
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Bahut khoob Bansi jee
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Sahi baat hai..likhne ka kaam aapka. hamaara padhne ka aur taareef karne ka.

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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2012, 12:22:45 AM »
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Dil ko parhne walon ki kami to nahin
Parhte to bahut hain magar gaur karte nahin

Dil jo chahta hai wo har dil ko milta nahin
Jo milta hai wo dil ko achha lagta nahin

Likhte likhte hain har roz na jane kitna
Jitna Likhna chahte hain magar, utna likh pate nahin

Hamre likhe ko parhne wale to bahut hain magar
Taareef karne wale utne  milte nahin

Tareef karne walon ko tu  dhoondha na kar
‘bansi’ tu likha kar bas likha bas  kar likha kar

------bansi dhameja(madhur)


bahut khoob kaha aapne....

aap likhte rahiye but aisa na kahiye ke aapka likha gaur nai karte hai
shikayat dhur kar dete hai hum abhi bansi jee.... bahut bahut acha likha hai aapne.  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2012, 04:12:04 AM »
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mukesh ham likhte rahenge aap parhte rahenege
aap bhi likhte rahenge ham parhte rahenge
likhte parhte zindagi ko kkhushi se jeete rahenge
KHUDA sab ko salamat rakhe ye dua mangte rahenge
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2012, 04:17:44 AM »
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suman ji jinke liye likha hai wo to shayad samajh gaye 
aap ke liye nehin tha par aap ne jo likha us se ham kuhush ho gaye
aur to kuchh nahin kahoonga magar karoonga shukriya aap ka
khuda kare yoon hi bana rahe ham sab ke saath, saath aap ka 
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2012, 04:32:40 AM »
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MEHFIL MEI.N  AAP BHI DIKHTE HAI
BAHUT ACCHA JANAB AAP LIKHTE HAI

UMDA KALAAM
Dil ko parhne walon ki kami to nahin
Parhte to bahut hain magar gaur karte nahin

Dil jo chahta hai wo har dil ko milta nahin
Jo milta hai wo dil ko achha lagta nahin

Likhte likhte hain har roz na jane kitna
Jitna Likhna chahte hain magar, utna likh pate nahin

Hamre likhe ko parhne wale to bahut hain magar
Taareef karne wale utne  milte nahin

Tareef karne walon ko tu  dhoondha na kar
‘bansi’ tu likha kar bas likha bas  kar likha kar

------bansi dhameja(madhur)

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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2012, 12:44:13 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2012, 04:39:47 PM »
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jab yoindia ki mahfil men kadam rakha
bahut se sitare jagmmaga rahe the
saath men manoj ji aap bhi to chamak rahe the
ham itne sitare dekh kar to chaunk gaye the
saham kar ek kone men baith gaye the
aaj tak na wo kona chhorha hamne
is dar se ki yeh kona chhorh diya to yeh bhi jata rahe
 
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