~~~***Maa***~~~

by Sonu on March 26, 2007, 08:45:26 AM
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~~~***Maa***~~~

Maa teri yaad satati hai, mere paas aa jaao,
Thak gayi hoon, mujhe apne aanchal main sulao,
Ungliyaan apni pher kar baalon main mere,
Ek baar phir se bachpan ki loriyaan sunaao. nm!!!


Who ever this wrote please say it so we can appricaite the work. wonderful lines...
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2007, 08:24:25 PM »
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vo bachan ki loriyaa yaad ahti hai
vo maa ko satana yaad ahta hai
vo maa ka datna marna or phir khud hi ro dena yaad ahta hai
vo maa ka apney hatho sey khana khilana yaad ahta hai
vo betaye humney kesey bachpen key din sab yaad ahta hai

vo school ka jana , ketabay bhari uthana
vo dhar sara home work kerna
chutieo mey picnic jana
phir journal likhna
chuti kesi betayi phir unper essay likhna..

yaad ahta hai mujhey vo maa ka lori gaa key solanaa
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2007, 08:33:36 PM »
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~~~***Maa***~~~

Maa teri yaad satati hai, mere paas aa jaao,
Thak gayi hoon, mujhe apne aanchal main sulao,
Ungliyaan apni pher kar baalon main mere,
Ek baar phir se bachpan ki loriyaan sunaao. nm!!!


Who ever this wrote please say it so we can appricaite the work. wonderful lines...


These four lines were written by me ...for my mom Usual Smile  !!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2007, 09:58:18 AM »
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Talat ji wonderful lines you wrote.. keep writing wonderful lines with wonderful smile...

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~~~***Maa***~~~

Maa teri yaad satati hai, mere paas aa jaao,
Thak gayi hoon, mujhe apne aanchal main sulao,
Ungliyaan apni pher kar baalon main mere,
Ek baar phir se bachpan ki loriyaan sunaao. nm!!!


Who ever this wrote please say it so we can appricaite the work. wonderful lines...


These four lines were written by me ...for my mom Usual Smile  !!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2007, 10:03:52 AM »
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Nice Talat Di...& SOnu
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2007, 03:45:59 AM »
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Thank You Sonu and Divs Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2007, 12:11:57 AM »
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very nice lines talat,and nice one sonu.
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2007, 01:43:12 AM »
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Thanks Nidhi Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2007, 09:32:58 AM »
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bhoot achaa shabd hai maa or is par jisne bhee likha unkee jitnee bhee tareef kee jaye kam hai..................

ghooma tha mai har mandir har masjid me
kiyaa har tirath har haj main bhee dosto
par n mila jiskee tamnaa thee dil me mere
ayaa har jgah bhatkar me waapas ghar mere
jo haath  sir ayaa tha mere wo jo maa thee meree
mil gya wo jo chaga tha jis ko pane kee tamnaa thee meri

netra...
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