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by MANIT on December 05, 2008, 10:39:52 PM
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MAA AK AHESAAS HAI SAB KUCH HONE KAA,
MAA AK AHESAAS HAI SAB KUCH HONE KAA.
MAA KE BINA YEH JIVEN HAI ADHOORAA'
JISE MAA BANATI HAI PURA.
SAB DHOKA DADANGE PAR MAA DHOKAA NAHIIN DAGI'
VEH HAZARO KE SAATH AKELI LADEGI.
SAB NICHAVER KARDO MAA KE NAAM'
SAO GUNA HO JAAIGA'
MAA KE PAAS JAANE KE BAAD ,
VEH PAVITRATA KII GANGA MAIN DOOB JAAIGA.
MAA KII KHUSHI BACHE HAI,
BACHO KI KHUSHI MAIN CHUPA HAI HEERE KA HAAR ,
AGAR MAA NA HOTI ,
TO KAON KARTA ANGINAT PYAR.
APNI ICHA MITAKAR ,
SAAKAAR KARTI ICHA BACHON KI'
BACHE KI GAALI SUNKAR BHI,
VEH PYAR KAM NAHIN KARTI.
KABHI MAT KARNA HATASH MAA KON,
BADA PAAP HON JAAIGA,
BHAGVAAN BHI TUMKO MAAF NHIN KAR PAIGA.
PAR MAA TO MAA HAI,
KHUD MAAF KAR DEGI,
PAR BACHE KE UPER AANCH NAHIN AANE DEGI.
MJAA EK AHESAAS HAI SAB KUCH HONE KAA, MAA EK AHESAAS HAI SUKOON KA.
MAA NKE BINA YEH JIVEN HAI ADHOORA ,
JISE MAA BANATI HAI PURA.
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2008, 10:41:24 PM »
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bahoot khoob Manit ji, apka yoindia main sawagat hai...
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2008, 10:56:21 PM »
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Well Done Manit.I am happy with your first trial with poetry.
Bhagwaan tumhe sahi disha dikhaaye, aur tumhaare shabdon mein aur nikhaar aaye.Jub maine pehli Post ki thee....to DOUBLE ki thee,Jub tumne ki hein to tripple.....aakhir bhateeje ho...aage hi jaoge...Pur kavitao ke saath saath padhna bahut zaroori he...dhyaan rakhna.

(Manit is my 12 year old nephew)

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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2008, 11:08:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Manit Ji
Welcome to yoindia
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