----- /// Maati hi uski kahaani hai /// ----- -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: April 28, 2010, 03:17:25 PM »

Deri se padhne k liy maafi chahti hoon kapil ji,shayad mitti humari aankh me bhi ghus gai thi tabhi itni achhi poems dikhai nahi di hume. Aur bahut achha likha hai aapne,mitti se insaani rishta baqoobi bataya hai aapne.Aur haan wo sukhe phulon wala kalaam bhi padha wo to bahut hi achha laga hume.Bas yun hi likhte rahein.


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«Reply #16 on: April 28, 2010, 10:00:20 PM »

aap maafi maang k humein sharminda kar rahe hain Tamanna ji. aapka mazakiya andaaz pasand aaya humko. aapne hamari kavita ko waqt diya jiske liye main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon. bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji. aap hamare likhe huye kavitaon ki shobha is tarah apni taarifon se badhate rahenge to hum bhi kuch na kuch likhte rahenge. bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji....!!!

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«Reply #17 on: April 29, 2010, 01:50:05 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on April 28, 2010, 01:33:23 PM

bahut bahut shukriya Azeem ji...jaanke khushi mili ki aapko hamaari rachna pasand aayi hai...aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

har khwaab har khwaish aaj mitti k hotey hain,
toofano me dheh kar bas mitti hi reh jaate hain,
bulandiyon ki chaah me bhool jaata hai khud ko insaan,
mitti k bane wo chaahat mitti me milke reh jaate hain...

Shukriyua Kapil Ji Haulsa Afazaai Ka


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«Reply #18 on: April 29, 2010, 01:53:00 PM »

U r welcome Azeem ji...!!!

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«Reply #19 on: April 29, 2010, 03:33:22 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji. aapne is kavita ko pasand karke iski izzat ko aur badha dia. aap yunhi hamari kavitaon ko padhne k liye apna waqt dete rahenge to hum bhi yunhi likhte rahenge.

aur maafi maang k humein shaarminda na karein.

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Quote from: Shihab on April 29, 2010, 02:05:55 PM

Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji
Bade Hi Khoobsurat Andaz Se
Aapne Greeb Ka Haal Likha Hai
Bahut Achchi Lagi Aapki Yeh Peshkash
Yun Hi Apne Pyaar Bhare Andaz Se
Mehfil Ko Roshna Karte Rahiye...

Aur Haan Mafi Chahta Hun Derri Ke Liye

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


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