----- /// Maati hi uski kahaani hai /// -----

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Kal main yahaan apne paas k ek market me gaya hua tha. Rickshaw me baith k wapas aa raha tha ki traffic signal pe hamara rickshaw aake ruk gaya. wahan paas hi sadak pe ek pariwaar tha. pati zameen pe leta hua tha. patni ek plastic k bore ko jhaad k apne bachche ke liye sone ki jagah bana rahi thi. bachcha zameen pe pada hua tha. dhul mitti se dhaka hua tha uska sharir. kuch der ke liye main kho gaya unke haal ko dekh k. Khaane k liye bhi shayad hi unhe kuch milta hoga. Tabhi mujhe yaad aaya 1997 me kabhi main kalkatta gaya tha. Wahaan sadak pe kuch bachcho ko ardh nagna avastha mein mitti khaate dekha tha. unke sharir me siwaaye haddiyon k aur kuch nahi tha. bas haddiyan aur uspe ek khaal. bahut dard hota hai aise haalaat me logon ko dekh k.

unka jeewan wahin mitti pe hi shuru hota hai aur wahin wo dam tod dete hain. sach me logon k paas itna paisa hai par inke khaane k liye ek daana anna nahi hota..peene k liye ek boond paani nahi milta... bahut dard hota hai kabhi kabhi inke baare me sochke.... sochta hoon kya jeewan hai unka....



"MAATI HI USKI KAHAANI HAI"

maati me hai janma wo, maati se usey mohabbat hai,
shaan-o-shaukat dhan sampatti uske liye sab maati hai,

jalti hui dopahari me wo aag k jaise jalta hai,
jamti hui sardi me wo thand se bhi tadapta hai,

uske liye na chhat hai koi, na thand ke liye koi kambal hai,
uske liye bas maati hai sab kuch, na maati se alag koi chahat hai,

bachpan me wo maati me khela, jawani bhi uski maati hai,
maati se hi nahata hai wo, maati hi uske liye paani hai,

maati me sota, maati hi khaata, uska aisa har din jaata,
maati bina na to chain hai usko, na usko koi raahat hai,

kisi k liye hai mehlon sa ghar kisi k liye bas maati ka dher,
dard se jab wo tadapta hai to dawa bhi uski maati hai,

jitni ho sardi, jitni ho garmi, jitna ho barish ka paani,
har mausam me maati hai humdum, uski to yahi kahani hai,

sochta hoon ye kabhi kabhi main, mujhme aur usme fark q hai,
mere liye to paisa hai sab kuch, uske liye sab maati hai,

maati ka hai putla wo, maati hi uska jeewan hai,
poojta hai wo maati ko hi, maati hi uska bhagwaan hai,

maati me hi janam hota hai aur maati me milke reh jaata hai,
maati se hi shuru ye kahaani maati pe khatam ho jaata hai...
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2010, 07:34:06 AM »
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Bahut sundar peshkash hai Kapil Ji

Isi liye kisi ne theek kaha hai

Maati ke putle tu itna na gumaan kar
Ik din aisa aayega tu maati mein mil jayega
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2010, 10:25:55 AM »
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Bahot achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Ek ghareeb ki zindagi badi sachi tasveer kheenchi hai aapne. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2010, 12:38:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... aapne bhi bahut achchi lines share kiye hain...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 27, 2010, 07:34:06 AM
Bahut sundar peshkash hai Kapil Ji

Isi liye kisi ne theek kaha hai

Maati ke putle tu itna na gumaan kar
Ik din aisa aayega tu maati mein mil jayega
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2010, 12:44:34 PM »
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bahoth qoob kaha kapil sahab .. wah dad hazir hai ...gareebi duniya ki subse batareen bimari hai agar lag jaye to badi mushkil se chodti hai ... achi tarjumani ki hai apne ..


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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2010, 02:43:31 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai       Klaskar ji.......


Log marne ke baad maati ko gale lagate hai
hamne toh jeete jee maati ko gale laga diya hai
maati mein hi ham janme hai
maati hi hamari zindagani hai
maati mein hi hogi khatam hamari kahanni hai.....
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 07:38:45 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Qadeer ji... aapne hamari rachna ko waqt diya jiske liye main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 27, 2010, 12:44:34 PM
bahoth qoob kaha kapil sahab .. wah dad hazir hai ...gareebi duniya ki subse batareen bimari hai agar lag jaye to badi mushkil se chodti hai ... achi tarjumani ki hai apne ..


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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2010, 09:06:01 PM »
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This is true story of a common poor man....
Bhut hi ache se likha hai ... bt bhut hi painful hai cnt read d whole...
Pata nahi kaise jeete hai log ..
isliye meri hemsha khosish rehi hai ki jitni kissi ki help ho sake karni chiye ... anywayz nyc post kapil
Gud work !!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2010, 09:53:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji.... aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat lines add kiye hain...!!!

Quote from: cara on April 27, 2010, 02:43:31 PM
Wah kya baat hai       Klaskar ji.......


Log marne ke baad maati ko gale lagate hai
hamne toh jeete jee maati ko gale laga diya hai
maati mein hi ham janme hai
maati hi hamari zindagani hai
maati mein hi hogi khatam hamari kahanni hai.....
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2010, 10:02:25 PM »
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Thank u so much Neel ji... thanx a lot.... maine ek chhoti si koshish ki hai un logon k dard ko shabdon me utaarne ki... par unka dard to wo hi samajh sakte hain...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 27, 2010, 09:06:01 PM
This is true story of a common poor man....
Bhut hi ache se likha hai ... bt bhut hi painful hai cnt read d whole...
Pata nahi kaise jeete hai log ..
isliye meri hemsha khosish rehi hai ki jitni kissi ki help ho sake karni chiye ... anywayz nyc post kapil
Gud work !!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2010, 10:05:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji... maafi chahunga main aapka compliment miss kar gaya tha... abhi dekha.... tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon main aapka...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 27, 2010, 10:25:55 AM
Bahot achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Ek ghareeb ki zindagi badi sachi tasveer kheenchi hai aapne. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 08:29:13 AM »
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Bohat Achche Kapil Ji, Bohat Saadgi Ke Saath Aapne Apni baat Rakhi, Bohat Achche,.

Mitti Ka Hai Jeewan Saara, Mitti Mein Mil Jaana Hai,.
Aasmaan Choohe Jitna Bhi Panchi, Mitti Hi Uska Theekaana Hai,.

Mitti Mein Hi Gurbat "Azeem,.
Mitti Mein Hi Khazaana Hai,.

-Azeem-
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bahut khoob kapil ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2010, 01:33:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Azeem ji...jaanke khushi mili ki aapko hamaari rachna pasand aayi hai...aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

har khwaab har khwaish aaj mitti k hotey hain,
toofano me dheh kar bas mitti hi reh jaate hain,
bulandiyon ki chaah me bhool jaata hai khud ko insaan,
mitti k bane wo chaahat mitti me milke reh jaate hain...

Quote from: Azeem on April 28, 2010, 08:29:13 AM
Bohat Achche Kapil Ji, Bohat Saadgi Ke Saath Aapne Apni baat Rakhi, Bohat Achche,.

Mitti Ka Hai Jeewan Saara, Mitti Mein Mil Jaana Hai,.
Aasmaan Choohe Jitna Bhi Panchi, Mitti Hi Uska Theekaana Hai,.

Mitti Mein Hi Gurbat "Azeem,.
Mitti Mein Hi Khazaana Hai,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2010, 03:14:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

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bahut khoob kapil ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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