***MAAYKA***:Miscellaneous Shayri

kaushikbhawna008

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larki jaat hoon jaan lo tum bhi
baabul ka angna chiriya rein basera hai
chod ise kal udd jaana hai
ye chand dino ka dera hai

jahan mein pali badi hui
chod ise ek din jaana hai
maa-baap ka aangan beti k liye
bas ek pardes sujhan hai

kil-kil karti kilkari se
jahaa gunjta beti ka bachpan hai
kaise bhul paaye beti is aangan ko
ye aangan to beti ka darpan hai

tinka-tinka jod maa-baap samaan taiyaar karein
ek roz jo wo ho jaaye badi fir uska kanyadaan karein
aankho mei aansu,hoton pe duayein aur jholi khali liye
bhaari mann se wo beti ko fir ghar se wida karein

hai reet yahi sadiyon se chali hai aa rahi
maayka hai chiriya ka basera har maa beti ko yahi samjha rahi
meine bhi dheer ye dhar li hai, ab na ashk bahana hai
chod is maayke ki dehliz ko mujhko bhi duur kahin ek din udd jana hai


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Rajbir

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2008, 11:38:12 AM »

Bhawna

Very true thoughts !

Bahut jazbaati rachna hai aap ki yeh !

Ek poora safar taiy kiya hai aapne aur us safar ki continuity ka bhi bayaan kiya hai !

That's life


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2008, 11:46:44 AM »

thnk u rajbir ji
bas jo sach hai wahi likha
aapko hamara likha pasand aya iske liye bohut bohut dhanywaad Usual Smile


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NODER

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2008, 12:25:57 PM »

good posting


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2008, 12:29:42 PM »

thnk u noder

welcome to yoindia


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baadal102

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2008, 02:55:25 PM »

bahut khoob bhawna ji

bahut hi jajbaat se likhi gayi

yeh sachaai.

waise kitni door jaana hai

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2008, 03:02:05 PM »

thnk u baadal ji

jee chahe pankh laga
duur kahin udd jaau mein

jaha na choo sake koi bhi gam
aise desh bas jaau mein

dur kahin yaadon se sabki
ek nayi dunia basau mein

ful jahan ho khile har tarah
titli si khilkhilau mein

mat puch mujh se tu BAADAL
kis aur mujhe ab jaana hai

jis aur rukh kare ye hawa
bas us aur tujhe aur mujhe mudd jana hai


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honeyrose

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2008, 03:09:45 PM »

Bohat khoob bhawna dear kamaal ka likha hai aapne
ek ek lafz dil ko chou leti hai...


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2008, 03:19:02 PM »

thnk u honey ji thnk u so much

baadal ji ne itne pyaar jo pucha tha ki jaana kaha hai so jo dil mei chahat thi bas wahi likh di
na jaane ye chaht hamari kab puri hogi ki ham aise desh pahuch jaayei jahan hamei koi na gam sataye


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Shikha12

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #9 on: September 10, 2008, 03:24:05 PM »

Lovely Work Bhawna.. Applause


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baadal102

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #10 on: September 10, 2008, 03:31:58 PM »

bhawna ji hamari baat ka
jawab dene ke liye sukriya,
sach main bahut hi khubsurti
se jawab diya hai aap ne

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***MAAYKA***

«Reply #11 on: September 10, 2008, 03:56:03 PM »

thnk u so much maahiya ji and baadal ji


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