mai aur tum

by bekarar on August 26, 2008, 11:16:18 AM
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mai besharam sa khada hua, bas use takta raha,
jo mila usise apni, jholiyan bharta raha,

kahta raha sab do mujhe, allah ke naam pe,
naam uchala wahe guru ka, ram ram kahta raha

kah ke mujhe bhikhari, sabhi dutkarte rahe,
unki nasamjhi par mai bhi, man hi man hansta raha,

kal talak manga karta tha, maa aur baap se,
aaj mandir-masjidon me, mangta tu fir raha,

kabhi bhikh maange pyaar ki, kabhi doulaten jahan ki,
mangta tu bhi raha aur mangta mai bhi raha,

tujhe kabhi haasil hui, jo cheese tune maangi thi
mujhe bhi kabhi mil gaya, aur kabhi khali raha,

kitna diya tujhe khuda ne, fir bhi tu ruka nahi,
mangne se mera bhi, jee kabhi nahi bhara,

bhikhari sirf mai hi, kahlaya is jahan me,
kaam wahi tu akele me aur me sare-aam karta raha

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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2008, 12:00:50 PM »
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Waah.. Waah..
Bahut seedhi aur sachhi baat, bahut khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayaan.. Applause Applause Applause

Sanjeev ji.. Chaa gaye aap toh.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2008, 01:45:03 PM »
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BAS ITNA KEHNA HAIN BEKARAR

TUJSE TERI ADA TERI SOCH MANG RAHA HU
JO LIKH SAKE TERE JAISA WOH KALEM MANG RAHU
KOI GHAYEL KO TUJ JAISA KEH BHAITHE KISI ROZ
BAS ITNI SI SHOHRAT JAHA ME MANG RAHA HU.

                            -SG-
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2008, 03:09:40 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on August 26, 2008, 12:00:50 PM
Waah.. Waah..
Bahut seedhi aur sachhi baat, bahut khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayaan.. Applause Applause Applause

Sanjeev ji.. Chaa gaye aap toh.. Usual Smile

bahoot abhar shikha aapne kavita ke marm ko samjha..

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 26, 2008, 01:45:03 PM
BAS ITNA KEHNA HAIN BEKARAR

TUJSE TERI ADA TERI SOCH MANG RAHA HU
JO LIKH SAKE TERE JAISA WOH KALEM MANG RAHU
KOI GHAYEL KO TUJ JAISA KEH BHAITHE KISI ROZ
BAS ITNI SI SHOHRAT JAHA ME MANG RAHA HU.

                            -SG-

ohhhh...isase bada koi puraskaar is kavita ke liye nahi ho sakta.....in behtreen panktiyon ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukriya...sajid ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2008, 11:02:43 PM »
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Wah wah Sanjeev ji, jaise shikha ne kaha aap chaa gaye ho...
Good creation  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2008, 02:38:16 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya roja
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2008, 04:44:38 PM »
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BOhot bohgot bohot Khoob Sanjeev...Ek baar phir se aapki qalam ka jadoo sar chad ke bol raha hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2008, 09:13:56 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya



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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2008, 08:56:18 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 26, 2008, 11:16:18 AM
mai besharam sa khada hua, bas use takta raha,
jo mila usise apni, jholiyan bharta raha,

kahta raha sab do mujhe, allah ke naam pe,
naam uchala wahe guru ka, ram ram kahta raha

kah ke mujhe bhikhari, sabhi dutkarte rahe,
unki nasamjhi par mai bhi, man hi man hansta raha,

kal talak manga karta tha, maa aur baap se,
aaj mandir-masjidon me, mangta tu fir raha,

kabhi bhikh maange pyaar ki, kabhi doulaten jahan ki,
mangta tu bhi raha aur mangta mai bhi raha,

tujhe kabhi haasil hui, jo cheese tune maangi thi
mujhe bhi kabhi mil gaya, aur kabhi khali raha,

kitna diya tujhe khuda ne, fir bhi tu ruka nahi,
mangne se mera bhi, jee kabhi nahi bhara,

bhikhari sirf mai hi, kahlaya is jahan me,
kaam wahi tu akele me aur me sare-aam karta raha




 Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah wah!! bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!! kaya baat hai... kaya baat hai... dil khush ho gaya!!! bahoot he ache vishay ko chun kar app kavitaye likhte hai!! bahoot acha lagta hai apki kavitao ko padna!!! Keep it up!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2008, 09:02:33 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji,
aapke comment padh-kar mera bhi dil khush ho gaya
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2008, 02:37:26 AM »
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bekarar ji,

shat-pratishat sacchi baat.shaayad hur kisi pur laagu..aap kamaal likhtey ho hazoor!
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bahoot dino baad is kavita ko padha to aapka comment najar me aaya .....bahoot shukriya prateek ji
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