Maine jab pehli kavita likhi

by nandbahu on November 01, 2012, 04:06:09 PM
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Maine jab pehli kavita likhi
Kuchh tooti, kuchh phooti likhi

Man mein kai vichar aate
Par shabdo mein na utar pate

Shabdo ko jorna chaha toh
Par lay mai na dhal paya unko

Kai kagaj ke panne phare
Kalam aur pencil ghis dale

Par jur na kuchh hi paya
Thhek se bayan na ho paya

Krodh mein kagaj ko marora
Unko kachre mein phenka

Kissi guru ke hath lagi
Poori koshish meri dekhi

Mere pass vo tab aaye
Likhne ke kuchh gur batlaye

Tab se likhne ki pehal ki
Seedhi sadhi abhivyakti keh di

Na jeevan mai aate vo guru
Likhna kaise karta shuru

Yadi uss din maskhari hoti
Vyango ki bauchhare hoti

Mujh jaisa anari kya karta
Likhne ki na phir hi sochta

Kya main aap sab se mil pata
Yoindia mein pyare dost bana pata

मैंने जब पहली कविता लिखी
कुछ टूटी, कुछ फूटी लिखी

मन में कई विचार आते
पर शब्दों में न उतर पाते

शब्दों को जोड़ना चाहा तो
पर लय में न ढाल पाया उनको

कई कागज के पन्ने फाड़े
कलम और पेंसिल घिस डाले

पर जुड़ न कुछ ही पाया
ठीक से बयां न हो पाया

क्रोध में कागज को मरोड़ा
उनको कचरे में फेंका

किसी गुरु के हाथ लगी
पूरी कोशिश मेरी देखी

मेरे पास वो तब आये
लिखने के कुछ गुर बतलाये

तब से लिखने की पहल की
सीधी साधी अभिव्यक्ति कह दी

न जीवन में आते वो गुरु
लिखना कैसे करता शुरू

यदि उस दिन मसखरी होती
व्यंगों की बौछारे होती

मुझ जैसा अनाड़ी क्या करता
लिखने की फिर न ही सोचता

क्या मैं आप सबसे मिल पाता
योइंडिया में प्यारे दोस्त बना पाता
 






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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2012, 05:00:14 PM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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thanx saini ji
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Wah Wah Wha Wha Wha Wah bahut khoob Nand ji ,,,,
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2012, 08:11:40 PM »
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well written nandbahuji
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thanx kaushal ji
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dhanyvad hriday ji
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bahut khoob
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thanx anmol ji
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