Mata pita ka aangan chhodkar- Shikha

by Shikha sanghvi on March 16, 2016, 12:40:18 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 30, 2016, 01:18:46 PM »
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Very impressive thoughts really its a nice poem about feelings of a girl


Thanks maayaji
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«Reply #16 on: March 30, 2016, 01:20:22 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob shikha g...  Mai bhi aapko yahi kahne wala hun ke kafiye ko aor line ki length ko zahan me jaroor rakhe..  Varna poetry ki beauty kam ho jati hai... 

Otherwise you have portrayed  personifickly.... 

Thanks a lot surindarji...aage se is baat ka hum khayal rakhenge...
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