mehfil ka sach~~~ Saahil

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mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai

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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 03:06:13 PM »
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mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Hoti agar chaht sanam ko meri dil se,
To mein u na dar dar uski chah me bhatakta,

Mil jaata agar sab kuch mangne bhar se hi,
To koi khuda ko apni dua me yaad na karta,

Ye to aadat hai apni apni insaan ki Salil,
Koi bata deta hai khushiya bhi apni aur koi gamm
ko bhi jahir nahi karta...

Shally.
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Kya baat hai Salil bhaijan aur Shally jee...Bahaut hi acha likha hai ap dono ne hi... Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 03:15:10 PM »
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mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



GUD....S2002
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 06:00:14 PM »
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Bohat khoob salil bro..

bohat khoob shally...
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 06:08:21 PM »
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Bohat khoob salil bro..

bohat khoob shally...


Shukriya Honey didi,

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 11:04:06 PM »
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mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



Achcha likha hai Salil
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 05:32:42 AM »
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  bhut %Ub sill jI
AOr xelI jI Aap ka .I jvab nhI       
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2009, 08:13:32 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Salil ji and dear Shally  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2009, 05:22:38 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Hoti agar chaht sanam ko meri dil se,
To mein u na dar dar uski chah me bhatakta,

Mil jaata agar sab kuch mangne bhar se hi,
To koi khuda ko apni dua me yaad na karta,

Ye to aadat hai apni apni insaan ki Salil,
Koi bata deta hai khushiya bhi apni aur koi gamm
ko bhi jahir nahi karta...

Shally.

Kya baat hai Salil bhaijan aur Shally jee...Bahaut hi acha likha hai ap dono ne hi... Applause
GUD....S2002
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bro..

bohat khoob shally...

Achcha likha hai Salil
  bhut %Ub sill jI
AOr xelI jI Aap ka .I jvab nhI       

Wah bahut khoob Salil ji and dear Shally  Applause
thanks talat di, shally, jaya di, K_A,roza, raheem
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2009, 03:29:18 PM »
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mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



Nice One Salil.. Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Hoti agar chaht sanam ko meri dil se,
To mein u na dar dar uski chah me bhatakta,

Mil jaata agar sab kuch mangne bhar se hi,
To koi khuda ko apni dua me yaad na karta,

Ye to aadat hai apni apni insaan ki Salil,
Koi bata deta hai khushiya bhi apni aur koi gamm
ko bhi jahir nahi karta...

Shally.


Bahut Khoob Shally!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley[/color][/b]
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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2009, 01:13:33 PM »
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NICE COMPOSITION SAHIL JI Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2009, 01:11:33 PM »
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Wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob,very nice and beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Shally ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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