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Kabhi zindagi me aise mod bhi aate he ki zindagi har mod ek band rasta lagti hai..ye kuchh shabd jode he maine us shakhs ke liye jiska koi wajood na hokar bhi kai wajoodo par bhari hai...
Aa chal mehfil ko ik bar fir roshan kar de
dil toota zindagi nahi husna ka thanda ab guroor kar de
chal uth har ansoo ko kalam me bhar de
soone padi he duniya be-rang kuchh rang bhar de
dil ke samandar ko nikal or bayan toofan ko kar de
cheer dil or nikal asmaan ke dard ko apne labzo me bharde
yun hoke khuda bhi pareshsaan poochhe "Abhi' tujhse
hazaron bar jali shama or ho ke sunsaan bikhar gayi
tu kahan tha kitni mehfile tere bin veeran gujar gayi~
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2010, 10:52:10 AM » |
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2010, 11:28:27 AM » |
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Wah! Abhi Ji , kya andaaz hai aap ki
Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2010, 11:34:58 AM » |
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Abhi ji Lajawaab peshkash.. as usual jhakashhh  hame aapne gyan-e-gur likhne ka nhi dia very bad. ____ |
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2010, 02:29:58 PM » |
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bahaut badhuya abhi ji. aakhir ka twist to waqai behad umda tha.
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2010, 05:58:43 AM » |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2010, 06:00:13 AM » |
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achha reply he koyaliya... jai shri raam....kyuki dosto ko shukriya kehena maine chhod diya~ yunhi sath rehena~ |
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2010, 06:01:38 AM » |
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Wah! Abhi Ji , kya andaaz hai aap ki
Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki
shukriya rajesh jii...aapne pasanad kiya.. apka reply bada keemti hai.. yunhi sath rahiyega~ |
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2010, 06:05:19 AM » |
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Abhi ji Lajawaab peshkash.. as usual jhakashhh hame aapne gyan-e-gur likhne ka nhi dia very bad. ____ kb ji...jo kuchh dil ki baat sunne, padhne or dil ki kehene se milta hai wo bade bade guru nahi sikha paaate~ ham to ek tinka bhi nhai... ek bar fir apka shukriya...yunhi sath rahiyega~ |
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2010, 06:30:15 AM » |
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Zahar Zahar Zahar………….Abhi Ek Bht Tight Wali Hug Bro…………….
Kambhakt Tu Hamesha Ki Tarah Dil Ke Andar Tak Ghus Gaya Fir Se……..
Lv U Bro……..This is Ur Best Out Of Best………Mindblowing
Few Lines For U Dear Bro……….
Shayri Ek Esa Fan He Mere Yaar
Jo Ho Koi Khandhar To Use Bhi Mahal Kar De
Utha Kalam Likh De Kuch Esa Ki
Khud Bhi Ab Mukammal Kar De
Gumnaam Ki Jindagi Teri Liye Nahi “Abhi” Tu To Wo He
Jo Chu Le Lafjo Ko To Unhe Khubsurat Gajal Kar De
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«Reply #11 on: November 27, 2010, 06:35:01 AM » |
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wwwwwwwwaaaahhhhhhhh.........
kya sahi kaha hai rajaji aapne to......maza aagaya padhke....
mujhe to kuch kehne se mnai hai ..lekin aapne mere dil ki baat kehdi......
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«Reply #12 on: November 27, 2010, 06:40:16 AM » |
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bahut khoob abhi ji.......
mindblowing.....
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #13 on: November 27, 2010, 06:48:13 AM » |
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Zahar Zahar Zahar………….Abhi Ek Bht Tight Wali Hug Bro…………….
Kambhakt Tu Hamesha Ki Tarah Dil Ke Andar Tak Ghus Gaya Fir Se……..
Lv U Bro……..This is Ur Best Out Of Best………Mindblowing
Few Lines For U Dear Bro……….
Shayri Ek Esa Fan He Mere Yaar
Jo Ho Koi Khandhar To Use Bhi Mahal Kar De
Utha Kalam Likh De Kuch Esa Ki
Khud Bhi Ab Mukammal Kar De
Gumnaam Ki Jindagi Teri Liye Nahi “Abhi” Tu To Wo He
Jo Chu Le Lafjo Ko To Unhe Khubsurat Gajal Kar De
are yaar.... kyu zarre ko asmaan ka khwab dikhate hoo... jai shrii raam~ |
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on eTI community..
