meray ander bikher gaya koi (by vb)

by vb on November 07, 2013, 04:46:14 AM
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Mujh ko veeraan kar gaya koi
Meray ander bikher gaya

Char lamhay koi mila jaisay
Ik safar rail ka kata jaisay
Raastay main utar gaya koi
Meray ander bikher gaya koi

Raat pheli huvi thi raahon main
Log soyay thay shabistanon men
Khamshi say guzar gaya koi
Meray ander bikher gaya koi

Dil ka har raaz bataana chaha
Dil ko aaina banana chaha
Aainy main utar gaya koi
Meray ander bikher gaya koi

Hoshe ku gum hen shehr-e-veeran k?
Log sehmay huay hen ku yaan k?
Raat, lagta hay mar gaya koi
Meray ander bikher gaya koi

Meray ander ........





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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2013, 05:10:03 AM »
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Wwwwwaaaaahhhhhhh .... beintehaayee khoobsurat nazm se nawaazaa hai VB ji .... taareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad gaye hain ... tah e dil se daad aap ko .... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2013, 07:26:37 AM »
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Wah Bhai Wah Kya Sadgi Se Lafz Piroye Hain
Wakai Maza Gaya Sach Parh Kar.Dil Ki Zameen
Ko Andar Tak Bheego Diya Aaj To Aapne. Aapki
Is Khubsoorat Peshkash Pe Dil Ki Gehraaiyon Se
Ba Aawaz e Buland Dad Kabul Farmaayen

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2013, 08:20:21 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Excellent, bahut bahut khoob VB jee, dheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se. YuN hi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko raushan karte rahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2013, 01:27:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2013, 07:15:48 PM »
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shukriya aap sub ka...
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 01:40:17 AM »
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Waaaaaaaah  aur sirf waaaaaaaaah VB ji... dheron dheron daaaaad...
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«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2013, 03:22:56 AM »
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shukriya aap ka, aqsh jee!
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