MERE DIL KE GHAREEB KHAANE MEIN.............HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 19, 2011, 06:06:55 AM
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Hichkichaate  ho  kyuun  tum  aane  meiN ,
Mere  dil  ke  ghareeb - khaane   meiN

Aar'za   qalb  ka   hai   sabr - talab ,
Waqt   lagta  hai   dard  jaane   meiN
 
NatawaaN   ho ,  ki   ho   za'eef   koi ,
Lutf   aata  hai   dil   lagaane   meiN
 
Badgumaani   ne   tode   woh   rishtay ,
Umr   guzree   jinheiN   nibhaane  meiN

Tez - raftaar   zindagi   hai   'Hasan' ,
Sab  lagay  hain  bus  aage  jaane  meiN

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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2011, 06:34:15 AM »
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 Applause Applause dili mubaaraqbaad
Hasan saheb aadaab

aapki shaan men chaar misre haazir hain.
KyuN  hai  sankoch paas aane men.
Kyaa kisi baat kaa tumhe dar hai.
N to dar hai  yahaaN n deewaaren.
Aaiye aap ye  khulaa  ghar  hai.

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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2011, 07:42:48 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah kya baat hai
....lutf aata hai dil lagaane meiN

Dili daad qubool farmaayen.

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2011, 09:06:44 AM »
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HASAN SAHAB ....BAKAI AP ...DAAD KE HAQDAAR HAIN ,,,DAAD HAJIR HAI,,,KHUDA HAFIZ

Hichkichaate  ho  kyuun  tum  aane  meiN ,
Mere  dil  ke  ghareeb - khaane   meiN

Aar'za   qalb  ka   hai   sabr - talab ,
Waqt   lagta  hai   dard  jaane   meiN
 
NatawaaN   ho ,  ki   ho   za'eef   koi ,
Lutf   aata  hai   dil   lagaane   meiN
 
Badgumaani   ne   tode   woh   rishtay ,
Umr   guzree   jinheiN   nibhaane  meiN

Tez - raftaar   zindagi   hai   'Hasan' ,
Sab  lagay  hain  bus  aage  jaane  meiN


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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2011, 09:12:45 AM »
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Dr.Saini saheb,Mubarakbaad ke liye mamnoon hooN.Daawat naame ke liye bhi bahut shukriya.Insha allah haazir hoonga.Bus thodi wazaahat ki zaroorat hai:

     Dil- shikasta ko kyuun sataate ho,
     KyuuN  adhoora  pata  bataate  ho,
     Dil ka beemaar  hooN ye  batla do,
     Apne  ghar  ya  matab  bulaate ho ?
                               Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2011, 09:28:34 AM »
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Siddiqui ji kya baat hai.
mazaa aa gaya.
bahut dilnasheen hai aapki ghazal
daad kubool kijiye.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2011, 12:08:31 PM »
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HASAN SAHAB
IS KHOOBSURAT GAJAL KE LIYE DAAD DETE HAI APKO
IS ASHAAR NE DIL KO CHOO LIYA.
badgumani ne tode vo rishte
umra gujri jinhe nibhane me.
BAHUT, BAHUT khoob


Hichkichaate  ho  kyuun  tum  aane  meiN ,
Mere  dil  ke  ghareeb - khaane   meiN

Aar'za   qalb  ka   hai   sabr - talab ,
Waqt   lagta  hai   dard  jaane   meiN
 
NatawaaN   ho ,  ki   ho   za'eef   koi ,
Lutf   aata  hai   dil   lagaane   meiN
 
Badgumaani   ne   tode   woh   rishtay ,
Umr   guzree   jinheiN   nibhaane  meiN

Tez - raftaar   zindagi   hai   'Hasan' ,
Sab  lagay  hain  bus  aage  jaane  meiN


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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2011, 04:13:02 PM »
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Bahut hee umdah gazal kahee hai aap ne Hasan saheb!
sabhee ashaar khoob or asardaar .......dilii daad qubool farmaayen.......
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2011, 06:34:11 PM »
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Satish shukla ji,adaab.Bahut shukriya aap ne ghazal padhi ,pasand ki aur naacheez ki hausla afzai ki.Apne nek tabsiron se nawaazte rahiye.duago,Hasan
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2011, 08:38:01 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab... kafi umdaa gazal kahi hai
Gazal ki zameeN ke saath achcha insaaf kiya hai
aapne, sabhi ashaaroN meiN... Usual Smile

Behad khoob khayaal aur umdaa ashaar ... Usual Smile
Dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2011, 03:22:47 AM »
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sunil dehgawani ji,ghazal padhne aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2011, 03:36:00 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Hassan Sahab

Bahut Hi Umda Gazal

Humari mubarakbad kabul kareen
Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2011, 05:26:19 AM »
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mkv saheb,adab.Bahut khushi hui ki aap ko ghazal pasand aayi.Aap ka pasandeeda sher eik kadvi sachaai hai...Hausla afzai ke liye shukrguzar hoon.Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: October 20, 2011, 08:50:23 AM »
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Bahut hee umdah gazal kahee hai aap ne Hasan saheb!
sabhee ashaar khoob or asardaar .......dilii daad qubool farmaayen.......
Shukriya,Mohtarma.Zah e naseeb,ki meri adnaa si peshkash ko aap ne daad e tahseen se nawaza.Mamnoon hoon.
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«Reply #14 on: October 20, 2011, 11:43:58 AM »
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Parwaaz saheb,kaise shukriya ada karoon .Aap ki purkhuloos tahreer hamesha hi hauslon ko Parwaaz bakhshti hai.Bulki main to aajkal ke maaroof ishtihaar ki zubaan mei kahoonga ki hausla bakhshne ke liye ( aapka )...'Bus nam hi kaafi hai.'Bahut shukriya.HASAN
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