Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 16, 2013, 04:45:45 PM

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TEER TALWAAR AUR KHANJAR THEI MUQABIL MERE
MERE QALAM NE MAGAR SAB KA BHARAM TOUR DIYA

.........S.M.MAHZAR


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2013, 06:02:51 PM »

Good One.


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2013, 07:39:38 PM »

Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 16, 2013, 04:45:45 PM

TEER TALWAAR AUR KHANJAR THEI MUQABIL MERE
MERE QALAM NE MAGAR SAB KA BHARAM TOUR DIYA

.........S.M.MAHZAR

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2013, 07:56:35 PM »

waah waah waah..


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2013, 08:52:25 PM »

Waah waah bahut hi khoob.


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2013, 06:26:38 PM »

Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on April 16, 2013, 06:02:51 PM

Good One.

dksaxenabsnl,
many many thanks....................


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2013, 06:27:41 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on April 16, 2013, 07:39:38 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause

adil bechain ji,
bahut bahut shukriya.............


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2013, 06:28:58 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 16, 2013, 08:52:25 PM

Waah waah bahut hi khoob.

Iftakhar Ahmad Saheb,
Aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon...............


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2013, 06:43:36 PM »

ahcha likha hai mahzar saaheb.... par agar saani meN mere se shuru na kareN koi oosra lafz rakheN to aur bhi umdaa ho jaayega sher, kyuNki olla bhi mere pe hi khatm ho raha hai... Koi baat buri lage to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga... Yunhi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...


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Re: Mere Qalam Ne Magar Sab Ka Bharam Tour Diya

«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2013, 06:23:29 PM »

Quote from: Taish on April 17, 2013, 06:43:36 PM

Taish Saheb,
Tanqeed aur Mashwire ka behad shukrguzar hoon. Aapki salah achchi bhi hai aur durust bhi. Lafz "mere" ka dobara istemal munasib nahi tha. Mutaqbil me bhi aapse is qism ki khamiyon ki taraf tawajjo dilane ki darkhawt karta hoon.