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Sheba

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   her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
   apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein

   janaab tanqeed ki nazar rakhte hain!
   hum afwaah, wo khabar rakhte hain!!

   unke bayaa.n ki bus khasiyat itni.
   taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

   fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
   saadgi mein bulandi ka asar rakhte hain!

   guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
   khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

   mehakte hue chaman ke maalik to nahin per.
   aangan mein jhuka hua shajar rakhte hain!

   imtehaan sabr ki intehaa ka de kar bhi.
   apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

   hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
   aur mutthi mein wo sifar rakhte hain!

   hai hairaa.n sheba unki mohabaat pe!
   ghazlo.n mein jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2013, 02:59:59 AM »

Ye Andaaz Bhi Achcha Hai Ji...
Par Ekad Buraai Wala Bhi Sher Likhte
To Shayad Chun Na Aasan Hota Ji.

Bahut Achcha Likha Hai :shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2013, 03:04:56 AM »

sheba ji kayi logon ke bare me ek ghzal meN keh paana bahut hi mushkil kaam hai par aapne bakhubi ise anjaam diya hai, bahut uda kaavish pe meri hazaaron dili daad...

waise main to shayad tha hi nahiN isme tongue3

ap aap hi bata dijiye kaun sa sher kiske naam hai, itni dimaagi kasrat humse na ho paayegi... Winking

waise aapka rau pending hai vo kal milegaa... Usual Smile


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 03:07:41 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on June 28, 2013, 02:21:12 AM

her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein

janaab tanqeed ki nazar rakhte hain!
hum afwaah, wo khabar rakhte hain!!

unke bayaa.n ki bus khasiyat itni.
taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
saadgi mein bulandi ka asar rakhte hain!

guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

mehakte hue chaman ke maalik to nahin per.
aangan mein jhuka hua shajar rakhte hain!

imtehaan sabr ki intehaa ka de kar bhi.
apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
aur mutthi mein wo sifar rakhte hain!

hai hairaa.n sheba unki mohabaat pe!
ghazlo.n mein jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!

BehtreeN Peshqash.DheroN Daad.


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nashwani

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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 03:25:06 AM »

Ye kya pakda diya..Bahut khoosurat par sar dard.. NaNaNa

Btw bahut achha likha hai sheba jee.. happy9


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 04:08:18 AM »

vadiya likhi hain! aur achha ho sakta tha !

NaNaNa


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 09:35:34 AM »

main ismen kahaan hoon sheba ji phir bhee rau to tum logee hee


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2013, 10:01:51 AM »

bahut bahut khoob..
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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2013, 11:12:05 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on June 28, 2013, 02:21:12 AM

her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein

janaab tanqeed ki nazar rakhte hain!
hum afwaah, wo khabar rakhte hain!!

unke bayaa.n ki bus khasiyat itni.
taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
saadgi mein bulandi ka asar rakhte hain!

guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

mehakte hue chaman ke maalik to nahin per.
aangan mein jhuka hua shajar rakhte hain!

imtehaan sabr ki intehaa ka de kar bhi.
apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
aur mutthi mein wo sifar rakhte hain!

hai hairaa.n sheba unki mohabaat pe!
ghazlo.n mein jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!

Sheba ji,
waaaah kiya umda koshish ki hai jisme aap kamyaab bhi hui hain........................


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2013, 12:04:09 PM »

lafzon me byan na ho paegi tareef apki,isliye taliyon ki gadgadahat apko nazar karte hai..


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2013, 12:06:33 PM »

Shebajee bahot acha likha hai..par yeh pata karna bahot mushkil hai kaun kaha fit hai


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2013, 01:08:44 PM »

wha wha
Bhut khub
Sheba ji


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mkv

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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2013, 02:15:35 PM »

Behatreen peshkash Sheba jee
aapki jaisi reply to shayad kabhi n de paaun..par use padhna accha lagta hai.
aapke jehn me to sab clear hoga..par mai to sirf ek hi guess kar paaya jo shayad sab kar lenge.
par ye andaaz khoob raha..aur ghazal bhi


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2013, 02:41:16 PM »

Sheba Ji Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooob...Guessing To Baad Mein..Ghazal Hi Itni Khoobsurat Hai Ke Baar-Baar Padhne Ko Jee Karta Hai... Aapka Sach Mein Koi Jawaab Nahi..

Baaki Iss Ghazal Mein 3 Shakshiyat Mujhe Dikhaai Diye..Jo Hu-Ba-Hu Aise Hai..

Unn ke Ilaawa To Bahut Mushkil hai Yaar..


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Re: meri kavish ...sheba

«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2013, 05:47:29 PM »

आपने ये कैसा कलाम फरमाया
जिसने हर किसी को भरमाया
सबमें होड़ लगी है
इसमें फिट होने की
ये तो आपका दिल ही जाने
अब तक कौन-कौन फिट हो पाया Usual Smile


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