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by Sheba on June 28, 2013, 02:21:12 AM
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                 her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
               apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein



                                  janaab   tanqeed  ki  nazar rakhte   hain!
                                  hum   afwaah,  wo   khabar  rakhte   hain!!

                                  unke   bayaa.n   ki   bus   khasiyat  itni.
                                  taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

                                  fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
                                  saadgi  mein  bulandi  ka  asar rakhte hain!

                                  guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
                                  khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

                                  mehakte  hue  chaman  ke maalik to nahin per.
                                  aangan  mein  jhuka  hua  shajar rakhte hain!

                                  imtehaan  sabr  ki  intehaa  ka  de  kar bhi.
                                  apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

                                  hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
                                  aur   mutthi  mein   wo  sifar  rakhte  hain!


                                  hai   hairaa.n   sheba  unki   mohabaat   pe!
                                  ghazlo.n  mein  jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!

                                  
                                  
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2013, 02:59:59 AM »
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Ye Andaaz Bhi Achcha Hai Ji...
Par Ekad Buraai Wala Bhi Sher Likhte
To Shayad Chun Na Aasan Hota Ji.

Bahut Achcha Likha Hai :shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2013, 03:04:56 AM »
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sheba ji kayi logon ke bare me ek ghzal meN keh paana bahut hi mushkil kaam hai par aapne bakhubi ise anjaam diya hai, bahut uda kaavish pe meri hazaaron dili daad...

waise main to shayad tha hi nahiN isme tongue3 ap aap hi bata dijiye kaun sa sher kiske naam hai, itni dimaagi kasrat humse na ho paayegi... Winking  waise aapka rau pending hai vo kal milegaa... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 03:07:41 AM »
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                 her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
               apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein



                                  janaab   tanqeed  ki  nazar rakhte   hain!
                                  hum   afwaah,  wo   khabar  rakhte   hain!!

                                  unke   bayaa.n   ki   bus   khasiyat  itni.
                                  taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

                                  fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
                                  saadgi  mein  bulandi  ka  asar rakhte hain!

                                  guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
                                  khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

                                  mehakte  hue  chaman  ke maalik to nahin per.
                                  aangan  mein  jhuka  hua  shajar rakhte hain!

                                  imtehaan  sabr  ki  intehaa  ka  de  kar bhi.
                                  apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

                                  hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
                                  aur   mutthi  mein   wo  sifar  rakhte  hain!


                                  hai   hairaa.n   sheba  unki   mohabaat   pe!
                                  ghazlo.n  mein  jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!

                                 
                                 
BehtreeN Peshqash.DheroN Daad.
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 03:25:06 AM »
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Ye kya pakda diya..Bahut khoosurat par sar dard.. NaNaNa NaNaNa

Btw bahut achha likha hai sheba jee..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 04:08:18 AM »
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vadiya likhi hain! aur achha ho sakta tha !

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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 09:35:34 AM »
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main ismen kahaan hoon sheba ji phir bhee rau to tum logee hee
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2013, 10:01:51 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob..
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2013, 11:12:05 AM »
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                 her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
               apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein



                                  janaab   tanqeed  ki  nazar rakhte   hain!
                                  hum   afwaah,  wo   khabar  rakhte   hain!!

                                  unke   bayaa.n   ki   bus   khasiyat  itni.
                                  taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

                                  fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
                                  saadgi  mein  bulandi  ka  asar rakhte hain!

                                  guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
                                  khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

                                  mehakte  hue  chaman  ke maalik to nahin per.
                                  aangan  mein  jhuka  hua  shajar rakhte hain!

                                  imtehaan  sabr  ki  intehaa  ka  de  kar bhi.
                                  apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

                                  hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
                                  aur   mutthi  mein   wo  sifar  rakhte  hain!


                                  hai   hairaa.n   sheba  unki   mohabaat   pe!
                                  ghazlo.n  mein  jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!

                                 
                                 

           Sheba ji,
                   waaaah kiya umda koshish ki hai jisme aap kamyaab bhi hui hain........................
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2013, 12:04:09 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley lafzon me byan na ho paegi tareef apki,isliye taliyon ki gadgadahat apko nazar karte hai..
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2013, 12:06:33 PM »
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Shebajee  bahot acha likha hai..par yeh pata karna bahot mushkil hai kaun kaha fit hai
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2013, 01:08:44 PM »
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wha wha
Bhut khub
Sheba ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2013, 02:15:35 PM »
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Behatreen peshkash Sheba jee
aapki jaisi reply to shayad kabhi n de paaun..par use padhna accha lagta hai.
aapke jehn me to sab clear hoga..par mai to sirf ek hi guess kar paaya jo shayad sab kar lenge.
par ye andaaz khoob raha..aur ghazal bhi
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2013, 02:41:16 PM »
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Sheba Ji Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooob...Guessing To Baad Mein..Ghazal Hi Itni Khoobsurat Hai Ke Baar-Baar Padhne Ko Jee Karta Hai... Aapka Sach Mein Koi Jawaab Nahi..

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Baaki Iss Ghazal Mein 3 Shakshiyat Mujhe Dikhaai Diye..Jo Hu-Ba-Hu Aise Hai..

Unn ke Ilaawa To Bahut Mushkil hai Yaar.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2013, 05:47:29 PM »
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आपने ये कैसा कलाम फरमाया
जिसने हर किसी को भरमाया
सबमें होड़ लगी है
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ये तो आपका दिल ही जाने
अब तक कौन-कौन फिट हो पाया  Usual Smile
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