~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 03, 2010, 03:34:46 AM
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Yeh pehle part ka link hai:
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/meri-nazmon-main-shabd-tamam-uske-the-by-rahim-t58155.0.html;msg1069057;topicseen#new

Ek continuation ek khaas Dost (Khwaish) ki request par..

Sabki nazron main beimaan main tha,
Mager woh kaam tamam uske the..

Aisa rishta tha humara kay tadapta main tha,
Jabke ghum tamam uske the..

Woh chalti thi khud kisi aur kay kehne par,
Jabke jahan main tamam log ghulam uske the..

Mera dil zakhmon se saja hua hai,
Meri mohobat kay liye,
Diye gaye yeh inaam tamam uske the..

Mehfilon main tanha rehna gawara na tha mujhe,
Mager mere liye diye gaye yeh tamam farman uske the..

Log wah wahi karte hai parr kar mujhe,
Lekin aj kehna chahta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 10:40:12 AM »
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too good rahim ji. dil ko chhu gai....

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Mera dil zakhmon se saja hua hai,
Meri mohobat kay liye,
Diye gaye yeh inaam tamam uske the..
~Rahim~
ye lines bahot hi achhi he....
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 11:08:27 AM »
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mastam mast poem rahim....dil chhu gai ye poem tumhari... 
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 06:50:15 PM »
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Shukriya Devangi jee aur Anamika di..! Teh dil se shukriya!
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 06:52:51 PM »
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Yeh pehle part ka link hai:
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/meri-nazmon-main-shabd-tamam-uske-the-by-rahim-t58155.0.html;msg1069057;topicseen#new

Ek continuation ek khaas Dost (Khwaish) ki request par..

Sabki nazron main beimaan main tha,
Mager woh kaam tamam uske the..

Aisa rishta tha humara kay tadapta main tha,
Jabke ghum tamam uske the..

Woh chalti thi khud kisi aur kay kehne par,
Jabke jahan main tamam log ghulam uske the..

Mera dil zakhmon se saja hua hai,
Meri mohobat kay liye,
Diye gaye yeh inaam tamam uske the..

Mehfilon main tanha rehna gawara na tha mujhe,
Mager mere liye diye gaye yeh tamam farman uske the..

Log wah wahi karte hai parr kar mujhe,
Lekin aj kehna chahta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the..

~Rahim~

Bahut bahut Khoob bhai rahim!!!!

Bhaut Hi Khoobsurat Continuation..

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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 06:53:36 PM »
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Shukriya Dost..Teh dil se shukriya apka har baar saath dene kay liye..!
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2010, 12:14:41 PM »
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  Rahim ji aapki post k 1st n 2nd dono parts aaj maine padhe,bahut achhe lage,dono hi part bahut khoobsurti se likhe hain aapne,dhero daad aapko. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2010, 06:52:44 PM »
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Shukriya Tamanna jee..!
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2010, 07:45:12 PM »
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der se nazar mein aayi aapki ye baat.. par shukra hai nazar to aayi...

bahut khoob likha hai aapne !

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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2010, 07:49:46 PM »
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Shukriya Intezar jee..! Teh dil se shukriya..!
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