~*~ Mohobat karne kay liye degree nahin chahiye ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 18, 2011, 09:06:37 PM
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Isse social topic kahun ya yunhi bewaffai ka kissa pata nahin..
MAger hua yun kay yahan ek shaks se mulaqat hui toh usne kaha kay
'Rahim meri kahani ko ek nazm ki shakal do..'
Woh nazm maine likhi bhi mager woh kagaz ek dost ne parrne kay
bahane liya aur guma diya..Khair aj uski woh kahani yaad agayi aur
kuch halka sa likh gaya..
Itna acha toh nahin mager simple lavzon main message ponchane ki
koshish kar raha hoon..

Uss shaks ne kaha kay main ek gawar hoon..zada parra nahin hoon..
Aur jisko maine bahaut chaha usne mujhe yehi kehkar thukra diya kay
'tum ek gawar ho..'

Ek yehi baat kehna chahta hoon nazm se pehle..Mohobat dil se hoti hai..
Bahaut khushnaseeb hote hai woh jinhe koi chahne wala mil jata hai..
Yeh wohi janenge jinke paas bas woh ek shaks nahin hai..


Apna naam likhna mujhe ata nahin,
Mager tera naam likhna bhoolta nahin..

Kalam aur kitabon se kabhi ishq na hua,
Tere ilava janam maine kisi ko chaha jo nahin..

Thukra diya tune mujhe kehke ‘tu gawar hai’,
Ek baat toh bata ae Zalim,
Kya non-degree walon ko mohobat karna ata nahin..

Tu bharosa kar na kar mager itna sunti jaa aj,
Meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Khamosh’ bhi nahin..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2011, 09:36:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai
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manjum
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 04:27:54 AM »
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 08:23:01 AM »
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sahi kaha rahim bhai....
aapki soch or khayal dono pasand aaye....
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 11:01:58 AM »
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bahut khoob bhaii...

kya khoob tareeka dhunda degree se mohabbat ko pare batane ke liye..

dher saarii daad~
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2011, 01:23:21 PM »
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Rishi jee, Manjum jee, Shihab bhaijan, Priya jee aur Abhi bhai..
Ap sabhi ka teh teh dil se shukriya kay apne waqt diya aur pasand
kiya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 05:01:03 PM »
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Apna naam likhna mujhe ata nahin,
Mager tera naam likhna bhoolta nahin..

Kalam aur kitabon se kabhi ishq na hua,
Tere ilava janam maine kisi ko chaha jo nahin..

Thukra diya tune mujhe kehke ‘tu gawar hai’,
Ek baat toh bata ae Zalim,
Kya non-degree walon ko mohobat karna ata nahin..

Tu bharosa kar na kar mager itna sunti jaa aj,
Meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Khamosh’ bhi nahin..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Very Touching ... Very Impressive ... Rahim Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 06:30:38 PM »
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Shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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